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beautiful N' Bruised
5th September 2003, 22:37
Summary: Chloe’s having an unpretty day.

Genre: Fluff. What do you mean that’s not a genre?

Authors note: Had a generally stinky day today, so ignored my dark muses and wrote this fluff to cheer myself up. Yes, you heard right. No, you weren’t hallucinating. 100% fluff, guaranteed ‘angst, darkness, and plot’, free. Perhaps you should start hoping that I don’t have anymore bad days ;) Also, unbeta-ed so feel free to point out mistakes, and I'll correct. Thanks for reading!

Rating: G


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Unpretty


It was Friday night, and Chloe was feeling un-pretty.

Sat on her own, in the darkest, furthest corner of The Talon, she sipped on a no-fat, no-foam, latte. Her laptop sat open in front of her, serving as a protection from any unwanted company. It was switched off, and she stared glumly and stonily at its blank screen, as she mentally announced her forsake-ment of the world and it’s people.

Since waking up that morning, she hadn’t smiled once.

The day in question, had gone from bad to worse. It hadn’t helped that it was that time of the month, and she was feeling particularly melancholy anyway.

It began as most bad days are apt to; with Chloe oversleeping, and waking up with barely enough time to brush her teeth, and throw on some clothes. Driving to school, without her defending line of make-up, it hadn’t helped having Lana as a passenger. The beautiful, every-man-melts-at-the-sight-of, Lana. Enough said there.

Chloe had dashed to the girl’s room, to rectify the missing-makeup matter, as soon as she got to school. However the quick five-minute job, after which she would sneak into class only a little late, never happened.

Instead, she stood staring at the mirror, tearing her appearance apart.

Her legs were too short. Her breasts too big. Her arms too curvy. Her outfit, she decided, needed to be burnt as soon as she got home. Her face was too pasty, her expression too miserable. The flippy hair that she normally thought cool, was too ‘in-your-face’ and unflattering.

“Ugh!” she told herself.

Even after trying to ameliorate her appearance and her self-opinion for fifteen minutes, she wasn’t satisfied.

It seemed the teacher who was taking her first lesson, shared her bad mood, and she had gotten a long lecture about tardiness and the need to obey school rules. The excuse she’d had prepared, seemed to get stuck in the throat, with the whole class staring at her unpretty, and by this point uncomfortable, form.

Chloe normally enjoyed verbal judo with the boy who was her desk partner that lesson. But feeling not-so-pretty seemed to be accompanied by feeling not-so-witty. She felt stupid and slow, and his teasing felt spiteful and real.

“Way to go losing your one asset, Sullivan,” she thought gloomily.

Her next lesson was her favourite; English. Pete shared her desk, and in front of them sat Lana and Clark. Her friends would cheer her up, like friends were supposed to.

But Pete was too engrossed thinking about his ‘hot’ new girlfriend and barely noticed Chloe. As to Lana and Clark; Chloe could easily tell they were sharing a game of footsy under the table. It seemed they were once again going through a good patch, and once again keeping their relationship secret from her. Chloe was supposedly over Clark, and her misery over the fact that he was with Lana, made her miserable over her own weakness.

A vicious cycle of misery.

It didn’t help that her English teacher, who up till then she had adored and looked up to, choose then, to reveal his previously hidden sexist side.

By the time lunch had rolled along she was starving, having had no breakfast and she pilled her lunchtray high. A group of cheerleaders behind her, not-so-subtly pointed and giggled, their hands resting on their tiny hips. Their own trays were scanty, holding only fruit and veg.

Normally Chloe wouldn’t have given a damn what the cheerleaders thought and probably would have tossed them a snarky ‘anorexics survival rate’ line. But now on top of being unattractive and un-clever, she being accused of being greedy and fat. She quickly lost her appetite, picking at her food, and leaving for the Torch office before her friends had even arrived to sit with her.

She hacked away at the article she had been ordered to work on by the principle. But the article bored her, barely holding her attention, and she ended up accidentally deleting it. Now all the thrilling work would have to be repeated.

The afternoon hadn’t panned out any better. It seemed to stretch painfully on and on, with the weekend threatening never to come.

She’d gone home looking for sympathy, a shoulder to lean on. But her dad was once again working late. A ‘order takeaway, see you tomorrow morning, Dad,’ note taped to the fridge. So then her black mood stretched to encompass what the lack of parental love and affection, was doing to her.

Chores, and bad soap operas, had eroded the rest of her day away.

Finally, black cloud over her head, miserable and restless, she had found herself driving to The Talon where she now sat.

Her gaze moved up from it’s unseeing spot on the table, and her eyes flickered to the sea of faces around her.

Like an inverse of the law of entropy; it seemed a fixed rule “that all idiots must congregate in The Talon,” she mumbled.

“One double-fudge sundae.”

A waitress placed the large, delicious looking contraption in front of her. Chloe opened her mouth to protest, but then spotted the note on the tray.

“Thanks.”

The girl nodded at her, giving her a dimpled smile, before heading off to serve someone else.

Slowly, Chloe unfolded the note.

Indulge yourself. Even more beautiful when you smile.

Instantly her eyes searched the room for the culprit. It could have been anyone in the packed coffee shop, but Chloe mentally narrowed the list down.

Pete was her number one choice. She must have underestimated him, and he had noticed she was unhappy, but had thought it best to give her space. But when her eyes located him, he was chatting animatedly to his girlfriend.

Lana had to be the next choice. They were after all supposed to be like sisters. Lana must have decided a dessert, on the house, would cure Chloe’s blues. And she was always telling Chloe that she had a nice smile. But Lana was scrubbing vigorously, a sure sign that she something was bothering her.

The something, or someone in question, was watching Lana from a not too distant point, his expression regretful, but stubborn. So that eliminated Clark as well.

Oh, but no, was it that waitress? Did she smile just a little too intently at Chloe? Chloe’s eyes swept the room searching for her.

Except for one pair of pale blue eyes, no one returned her gaze.

But where was that waitress? She seemed to have disappeared.

Wait. Pale blue eyes.

Elbow propped on counter, holding a take-out cup, Lex Luthor watched her from across the room. He seemed amused at the surprised expression she was sure she was wearing. Flashing her a genuine smile, he lifted his coffee up at her in greeting, before turning around and walking out of The Talon.

Even more beautiful when you smile. Wonders would never cease. She shook her head. Smiled her first smile of the day...

..and dipped into the sundae, deciding that maybe she wasn’t so unpretty after all.




***

HumbugGirl
5th September 2003, 22:56
Aw hun, that was just beautiful and it's certainly something that reaches out to every single person who has ever had a bad day. *pout* I wish I had my very own Lex to cheer me up at the end of the day. lol.

hfce
5th September 2003, 23:17
Oh that was so good. I loved it. ;)


Hope :chlexsign2:

Tandy
5th September 2003, 23:36
That was pretty! I'm not wishing you have bad days or anything, but this was great writting too, you def need to write more fluff! :D

asharnanae
6th September 2003, 00:26
:wub: :wub:

Czech Angel
6th September 2003, 01:03
Are you a psychic, or something? Because my day was just like Chloe's. shitty.
This fic really cheered me up. Thanks!
(Only thing better then this is to have Lex cheer me up.) ;)

:chlexsign2:

scifichick774
6th September 2003, 01:13
*sniff*

You totally cheered me up. Seems like my life has become a series of those bad days she just went through and to have that nice little happy ending...*happy sigh*

Thanks hon.

I needed that.

tigerbaby
6th September 2003, 01:22
That just lifted me right up. I've had a week like Chloe's day. Too bad I don't have my very own Lex.

Is it wrong of me to want you to have more bad days if this is what you come up with?

sabby
6th September 2003, 02:40
*snickers* yeah sometimes that little bit of fluff can really make a day better. But if I was her, I'd sure as hell go after him and call him on his cliche line *g*

hugs,
Sabby

happy bunny
6th September 2003, 04:39
This is one of those cute little fics that you can't help but say "awww" to. It was so adorable and something everyone can relate to (except for the whole having a sexy billionare buy you a sundae and call you beautiful thing), because everyone has had at least a couple of days like that. I know I have.

Not wishing another day like that on you, but it's nice to see you write fluff. It's so.... fluffy.

Anyway, this deserves one great big final AWWWW....

buffiy18
6th September 2003, 19:26
That was such a cute story. I loved it. I know it isn't your usual style, but you can do light and fluffy as well as you do your dark and angsty. Great fluff :wub: .

kirt30
6th September 2003, 22:47
:wub: aah i liked this fic it was so sweet :wub:

jaded-swan
7th September 2003, 11:36
aaawww... there's nothing I like more than sweet Lex! :wub:

Sunflow
8th September 2003, 13:50
So it isn't just me? Other people have days like that, too? *sighs*
Really nice, really comforting fic :] well-balanced on the fluff side :) Thank you.

Sunflow

vardaquareien
8th September 2003, 14:49
up until she received the sundae, I was wondering if you were describing my life!!! *sigh* wish I had me a Lex like that! :wub:

crazygirl
11th September 2003, 20:48
At least someone realized that Chloe is the prettiest girl in all of smallville. Go Lex! *cheers*

Lazy
13th September 2003, 10:48
Awww, that was cute. It certainly cheered me up :D

zeppo2
14th September 2003, 03:28
Aww cuteness! :blinkkiss:

Val
14th September 2003, 06:17
That was so cute! :wub:
Loved it and yeah def. write more fluff!

Sway
16th September 2003, 14:46
aawwww. thats such a great fic. i think we've all had days like that. but i never had a sexy bald billionaire waiting to buy me a chocolatey treat... if only... :drool:

beezeswims
17th September 2003, 04:57
don't we all have days like that.. too bad we aren't lucky enough to have our
own lex to cheer us up...

peepsRfun2eat
20th September 2003, 06:09
i wish i had my own personal lex to cheer me up. great story.

lunaluthor
21st September 2003, 14:23
yep fluff should be a category I need fluff I crave it and I thank you for posting this wonderful thing :wub:

autumngold
7th October 2003, 06:04
Great story! I wish Lex was there to cheer me up on all of my unpretty days!! :chlexsign2:

Ainur
1st November 2004, 03:51
Lex is so pretty and sweet. Great job!!

AlwaysPretending
1st November 2004, 04:06
What a lovely piece - Lex is such a sweetie (although he tries to hide it!).

Kerry

buddyfozzy
1st November 2004, 04:53
Aww, that was so sweet of Lex. :wub:

Rae
3rd November 2004, 02:13
"Indulge yourself. Even more beautiful when you smile."
I am not ashamed to admit that made me a little teary-eyed. To have such a bad day and have someone say that to you... :cryblue:

Loved the realism. Very beautiful story!

Luna
16th February 2005, 23:02
Oh, I understand Chloe ... :unsure:

Anyway, that was a really beautiful short story. Very realistic. And I absolutely loved Lex! :wub:

Such a sweetie :wub: :heart: :wub:

Reese
16th February 2005, 23:33
*sigh* Now I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy...

...and I'm craving a sundae :)

That was such a great moment and written in a way that I could actually see it as it unfolded. I like that he just offered her a smile and left. So much said with just a short note and a smile.

*sigh*

My life sucks.

Reese

Ori
22nd February 2005, 01:26
The shortest and sweetest story ever. I loved that. Why can't every one have a handsome billionaire on those days. I settle for either/or. But no this is sweet. And cute. Agreat little fic.

Krysia
22nd February 2005, 09:58
:wub: Ow, that was just so sweet and something I totally needed today. Thank you for bringing me my own double-fudge sundae, it made me smile.

starmoon
27th March 2005, 10:15
good story i realy liked it.

bluengreenswmer
26th April 2005, 05:07
I had a bad day...does that mean a sexy bald billionaire is gonna buy me a sundae?

No? YOU SUCK.

Nikiys
26th April 2005, 08:36
Owh No??
So SWeeT
LUCkY CHloe
bEcaUSe She HAd LEx TO CHeer Her UP
sUCH A sWeET sTory
I WIsh I HAVe THAt!!
:wub: :wub:

~*~Tasha~*~
23rd June 2006, 21:01
Aww ... now that was sweet and precious. I loved it. Nice pick me up.

ggdoll18
24th June 2006, 01:51
awwww I want Lex to send me ice cream!!!

Esther25jm
24th June 2006, 05:39
Aww, that was great!! I've been having a crappy day today, so this def. cheered me up. *sniffles* Lex is such a sweetie pie. I loved it!!

herbles05
3rd November 2006, 06:08
Aw hun, that was just beautiful and it's certainly something that reaches out to every single person who has ever had a bad day. *pout* I wish I had my very own Lex to cheer me up at the end of the day. lol.

I second that notion!!! *passes out lex luthors* Step right up and get yours! Hurry they're going fast!! :drool2: If only life were that easy!! I feel so much more optimistic after reading this story! I just started to smile! And cry.....but happy tears of love! Promise!

Alizaleven
3rd November 2006, 06:35
Oh that was so sweet and extremely cute! It made my day :)

lexie
16th April 2009, 22:54
Loved it. It started so gloomy for Chloe and ended up so sweetly. Fluffy and uplifting.:grin3:

elementia
27th May 2009, 08:31
*sigh* If only all my un-pretty days ended with Lex buying me a chocolate fudge sundae :)

happybum
27th May 2009, 19:10
What a great remedy to fix a bad day, Lex and ice cream sundae. If I was Chloe I think eating the ice cream sundae with or off of Lex is whole lot better. It would be melty and gooey fun. =]

reyeslu
29th July 2011, 04:54
awww lex and ice cream, i was able to see this all so clearly from your words

dkfuryan
9th August 2011, 20:43
beautiful, this has cheered me up! Thank you.

Ami Rose
15th September 2011, 15:56
Loved it! Very cute story! But now I want ice cream! lol