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EllyF
13th May 2008, 13:23
Deleted.

karila
13th May 2008, 13:56
Hi
I have to admit that I am not a Chlark's stories fan but you write really great stories so I have read some of them. Nevertheless I was happy to see that you have written a Chlex story. I have already read it so I wanted to tell you that it was really good. I don't want to kill the suspense so I won't tell more but the end was excellent. I think that it appeals a sequel.
I hope that you will write more Chlex story in the future.

EllyF
13th May 2008, 14:28
Thank you, karila.

Gaia
13th May 2008, 14:41
That was.....I can't.....well.....

jem
13th May 2008, 14:54
wow... hot hot hot...

pleeeease put the rest up??

lol.. angry sex is HOT sex..

peggy
13th May 2008, 16:26
your fic is so good, please update soon !!

EllyF
13th May 2008, 16:54
Thanks for the feedback!

westwingwolf
13th May 2008, 17:29
I started reading this and I really loved it, great mixture of anger and lust making a passion that can only be found in Chloe and Lex. I didn't know you had finished it, so I can wait to see what happens in the end.

EllyF
13th May 2008, 19:15
Thank you very much, westwingwolf.

Gaia
13th May 2008, 19:41
of course she is a bitch....our lovely evil Chloe.
More please

EllyF
13th May 2008, 20:52
Thank you, Gaia.

lj715
13th May 2008, 21:09
This is excellent. I love that they say they hate each other but can't stop themselves. More please.

Gaia
13th May 2008, 23:13
Of course they hate each other! But that's why the sex is also so good....what party? Why is Lex taking her to a party? Will he humiliate her?

cyanne
13th May 2008, 23:41
This makes my day. It's really gooood. But we need more. Pretty please!!!!!

EllyF
14th May 2008, 00:51
Thank you for the feedback!

lj715
14th May 2008, 01:24
Hell yeah she'll go to the party with you Lex. Wow....need more please.

MelBee1985
14th May 2008, 01:35
Yeah I read it over K-Site.. Nice fic... It could easily have a sequel.. ;)

Gaia
14th May 2008, 02:49
Just finished the story on K-site. and wow....seriously it deserves a sequel with Chloe being more evil than Lex. That would be just perfect.

superag
14th May 2008, 02:57
This is SO not finished, but I am. Wow! that was freaking amazing!

EllyF
14th May 2008, 03:24
Thank you very much for the feedback, everyone. This is the end, although it's been mentioned to me that a sequel might be in order at some point:-).

lj715
14th May 2008, 03:37
Excellent ending. Definitely needs a sequel. Great job, loved it.

westwingwolf
14th May 2008, 08:11
That ass! I hope Chloe is able to destroy him just to show him up. Of course I also hope they have a lot more sex between them too because that was so incredibly hot.

peggy
14th May 2008, 10:07
excellent and incredibly hot fic ! Please write a sequel

ChloeLovesLex
14th May 2008, 18:12
I'm going to chime in on the sequel idea.
...and oh my that was hot!

daria_103
14th May 2008, 23:41
A sequel is definitely in order, brilliant story - extremely hot!

lily161239
15th May 2008, 00:57
Great Story!!! I love it :grin3:

starmoon
21st May 2008, 22:24
that was great!!! please write more chlex smutt you are so great at it. :respect: :respect:

hfce
26th May 2008, 04:15
This needs a sequel like now. It is to good to stop. :D

dkangel1
26th May 2008, 23:22
That was simply wonderfully dark and hot. Thank you and please write a sequel! I must go check more of your writing out.

purplemoon123
27th May 2008, 05:29
Well holy shit Batman!!!! That was super hot Chlex!!! Then that last chapter you went a threw me a curve ball. Wasn't expecting that he would announce his purchase of The DP and then announce Chloe as it's editor. That Bastard!!!! Perfect ending but dammit I want more!!!!

Rocio

BellaMR
16th June 2008, 17:13
I definately didn't expect that ending awesome. What a bastard Lex is - hot and sexy, but still a evil bastard. Great job and I really hope a sequel can be created.

Tanschana
16th June 2008, 21:22
Damn!
To sum it up: Great story! Hot and evil!
I like it!

elementia
7th October 2008, 03:02
:drool2: HOT!!!!!!

goodlove
26th October 2008, 22:27
God, this was even better than a romantic, sweet sapfest would have been! Lex = the Devil
Chloe = Daniel Webster.
(No, actually I just wanted the chance to use this line from that story. [Chloe] "got tricked and trapped and bamboozled, but it was a great journey".)

So do they continue to have the hot, angry sex with Chloe an active, snarky, bitchy co-un-lover, or is this the end of Lex's twisted schemes? I'd love to see the sequel or a companion story from Lex's POV. I like your evil take on him, but I'd want him to fall at least a little for Chloe's charms, too. :yeahbaby:

By the dance scene at the end, you can just taste how much she wants to bring him down, but I hate that the good guys get outmanuevered because they keep trying to avoid collateral damage. At least in this, we found that Chloe was willing to choose herself after Clark took her BFF status away and ignored her evidence of Lana's failings. And then Chloe proved she was still a big damn hero by sacrificing her reputation for her longer love, the DP.

Man, I'd love to see the circumstances under which Chloe would allow Lex to seduce her in the Editor-in-Chief's office - you know that would be the next level in his debauched plan of destruction, and she'd fight it all the way. But, once everyone believed she'd already done the equivalent...

I'd also love to see Lois' reaction. Usually she's all about defending Chloe, but now that boyfriend got exiled so Chloe could have the job...

Great job! PPMS!

DPReporter
1st November 2008, 07:25
Excellent job on this story!

malugargula
9th November 2008, 04:48
Wonderful and hot fic
:)
I really need a sequel because it`s going to be so delicious read about them fighting and having sex all the time
LOL

Dominique
24th November 2008, 21:37
Well down. Sequel????

superag
25th November 2008, 00:49
KNOCK KNOCK

Sequel???? Still wanting and waiting. Loved the end!

Nimmie
27th January 2009, 10:45
That was amazing, are you sure you don't want to write more in this ship? man well crafted stunningly executed. So hot so very cold Lex at his most Machiavellian. Stunning. Seriously please may we have more. PLEASE. Anytime you know.

Thank you so much
N

TikiDoll
3rd February 2009, 20:21
now this story was off the chain!!!!!!!!!

Booksketeer
4th February 2009, 21:07
I'm not normally a rabid smut-monkey, but wow, that was incredible! Hot, demanding, angry sex- and so completely in charecter for them. Awesome!

Impress
6th February 2009, 04:39
That was hot. And yeah this story needs a sequel, from Lex's pov as he and Chloe challenge eachother.

SinnerSaint
6th February 2009, 08:48
Wow..I totally didn't see that end coming. This was really good and really sexy. The smut was fantastic and the way Chloe is just drawn deeper into the abyss with Lex is just so amazing. Great job!

Marie
9th February 2009, 12:05
Wonderful story! Smoking hot smut! Lex and Chloe hating each other, but still drawn together. I loved it.

Sequel please!!!!!!

TabbyG
29th March 2009, 06:15
What happens next? You have to let us know what happens to Chloe now. Please Please write a sequel.

elitekat
31st March 2009, 00:16
Wow! Very good! Good Chlex fic! So glad you decided to post this here. Thanks for sharing!

darkangel
22nd June 2010, 21:04
I did not expect that ending. But it was a wonderful surprise.

malugargula
4th January 2013, 22:43
Just reread this awesome fic
Will you write a sequel? Please? Pretty please? With cherries on the top?

lia00027
28th April 2015, 07:58
Where is the story i cannot find it here?

lexie
29th April 2015, 03:54
Where is the story i cannot find it here?

The story was deleted by the author, as stated in the first post: http://forums.naughty-seduction.net/showthread.php/6200-Under-Cover-(NC-17)?p=232671&viewfull=1#post232671

malugargula
27th May 2015, 06:46
Sad to see it was deleted :(