Home Alone (NC-17)

[BellaMR]

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This chapter was amazingly hot. I loved that cream that Chloe was using, and the situation was hilarious, sexy, and a little disturbing.

I kept waiting for Lex to get some acknowledgement from Chloe that she actually wanted to do this and was not merely acting under the influence of the cream. We can assume that there is no prior relationship or even flirting between them since in the beginning Chloe was actually fantasizing about Clark and because of how he treated her in the beginning.

I hope in the next chapter Chloe can take charge a little more so she seems more of a willing participant rather than confused about what is happening to her.


Her dad walked Lex to the door. They shook hands. Chloe shut her eyes tight. Lex was shaking her father’s hand with the same hand that was just on her… in her… private place.

I found this line particularly funny, but revealing. If Chloe is going to be in these adult situations, she needs to at least have a slightly more mature view of her pussy. Afterall, she had no problem using it for pleasure in the middle of her living room earlier.

I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.

[BellaMR]

I thought you said the next chapter was almost finished. Will we get to read it soon?

[Gaia]

loved it- and it needs an update!

[JennyD13]

Next Chapter Should Be Up Soon, Guys! Sorry About The Wait!

[tigerbaby]

I thought you said the next chapter was almost finished. Will we get to read it soon?


Folks,

Just as an FYI, with the number of recent spammers on the board lately, Jules has put a filter on to look for specific words (usually related to sex/porn sites). Unfortunately, because this is in the NC-17 section, anything that looks like it could be spam gets sent to the moderation queue for approval before the posts are visible. So please be patient.

Thank you.

[westwingwolf]

Chloe's thoughts about trying to be mature and not letting Lex get to her were funny. I loved the banter between them. I also liked all the naughty things Lex said to Chloe as well as the sweet things. The smut was awesome and fun. I'm glad they will be continuing this relationship.

[ggdoll18]

Great story!!!!
I would love a follow up to see how the shopping trip went :)!!!

[xxasaxx]

That was hot!


great ending!:drool2:

[lj715]

Loved it! Excellent story.

[BellaMR]

Great update. I'm glad to see that Chloe was more aggressive in this update and that they will be continuing their relationship.

Excellant job. I look forward to reading your next fic.

[dagney]

That was FAB what a smoking fic. Dagney

[somethingeasy]

This was a wonderful chapter 2. I really enjoyed the heavy-handed seduction campaign Lex was running over here. He completely disregarded subtleties and sneakiness and went straight in for the kill. I can’t believe the bastard actually laced Chloe’s coffee with peppermint. That was EVIL… and rather hot! And I rather liked his slightly dark sense of humour showing itself over there.

And speaking of lacking subtleties… he actually ‘chased’ her down the street, caught her, and started whispering hot vulgarities into her ear to get her heated up? He must have been really confident that he’s be able to win her over and not get slapped for his aggressiveness… or perhaps desperate?

Heh, I’m going to vote for confident, since the arrogant bastard actually brought his tinted windowed Jaguar with him… He must have been planning car sex from the very start. Arrogant, insufferable bastard… Damn, why can someone so self-superior be so hot?


“Can I tell you what I’d like?” He said, his voice deep. Chloe shut her eyes tightly. “I’d like to take you from behind, Chloe. Just to watch your fine ass while I fuck you.”

Lex moved his head lower, kissing her neck. He stopped exploring her neck to lightly bite her jugular. “But the first time I take you, Chloe…” He whispered between bites. “The first time I fuck you, I want to see your face when I make you come.”

Over here, I was as peeved off as Chloe was by his presumptuous, imperious attitude… but (also like Chloe) I was seriously turned on by his confident, commanding tone. He just seemed so SURE of himself… how can anyone help but fall for that kind of self-assured tone.


“What?” Chloe asked, “You couldn’t have brought a four door? Something a little roomier?”

“Well, Ms. Sullivan, if I knew this was going to happen, I would have brought the limo.” Lex answered as he climbed in and shut the door.

“Hmmmm… Maybe I should hold out for the limo…” Chloe grinned.

LOL! Loved the snark over here. It seems like this time Chloe is a little more in control of herself, and can give as good as she gets. And I’m sure Lex brought the Jaguar knowing what would probably happen.


“Ride me.” He said.

And, as if she was waiting for his permission all along, she promptly started riding him. Her pace was slow at first. She was enjoying the feel of him inside her. As her passion grew, her pace quickened until she was riding him at a gallop. He feels so fucking good. She was panting and he was grunting along with her thrusts. In the back of her mind, Chloe knew that they must be rocking the car but there was no way she could stop herself now. Not with him.

Loved this part… hot hot, HOT! I really liked how Chloe was in the dominant position of woman on top, but Lex was still issuing orders like he was in charge… I like the little power plays that take place during Chlex sex.

And the Chlex sex was really, REALLY amazing. It had exciting, sensual descriptions, and made all the smut really come to life… It might have ‘just’ been a quickie in the backseat of a car, but it was intense! Fantastic writing! I was really impressed and I looked forward to your upcoming longer fic that has sex and ‘plot’. LOL! Yay Plot! You’re a very talented writer, and I look forward to seeing how you handle something longer, more complex and convoluted.

Good luck with that. Update soon!

[JennyD13]

Somethingeasy,

You have the best responses! Thank you for the great feedback!

[somethingeasy]

Somethingeasy,
You have the best responses! Thank you for the great feedback!

Why thanks you, Jenny :D How sweet!
But I don't really deserve credit since you inspired the 'good response'. I look forward to seeing your upcoming fic. I'm sure it's going to be awesome.

[Nonhalema]

Great story, great smut

[juuicebox]

amazing

[Pieper]

Great story.

[~*~Tasha~*~]

Pretty hot and interesting first part. Excellent second part too. Those two are such a great couple, and so cute too.

[MelBee1985]

I like the way Lex is being dominant, but in a sexy and really hot way!! hehe Been reading that fic few times. Still love it.

[tabtcat]

Great story.

[wistfulwatcher]

That was amazing, thank you! Great twist on the old caught-in-the-act situation.

WistfulWatcher

[CrazyGirlWriter]

Very hot story

[starmoon]

very sexy and hot i love it!!!!! i will be reading this over and over again all the time.

[Rachet]

Thanks for the link lexie