Keep 'em Coming (complete) NC17

[starmoon]

This was just great I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The smut was good keep up the good work for your next story.

[Blaire023]

This was just great I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. The smut was good keep up the good work for your next story.


which one? lol

and thanks to everyone who has since read and reviewed this! wow, it was so long ago and yet people are still digging it back up.

And thanks to lurker Dev who said it's her fave fic to reread.

Little things like that make sticking with writing fic all that much better.

[starmoon]

so sweet and perfect i loved every minuet of it.

[lj715]

I loved it too.

[arkakitty]

I really really enjoyed reading it ^^

[Yarvarni]

great story love the pretense of Chloe & Lana actually liked lana in this fic which says a lot loved all of it. great job!

[kimmie]

That was such a lovely fic, loved Lex's proposal. :nsparty: Loved that their was humor in it as well with Lana and Chloe faking it!!! :grin: Oh and you actually made me like Lana for once!!! :omg:

Kimmie

[darkangel]

Just sizzling hott.

[mamma_2004]

This story is so funnie. and the smut. mmmmmmm...very very god. *smile*

/A

[bob_is_strange91]

OMG i loved it!!! definitely a fic to remember. does Lana get to be the maid of honor?

[Ann]

I love this fic. The end with the proposal was absolutely beautiful. I don't know nay woman that could have turned that down. I know I sure as hell wouldn't have. Great fic! :)

[hellinean]

i loved this one because of hw Lex reacted when he thought chloe and lana were together lol and how chloe had make Lex on fire just by 'teasing' him about her and Lana lol (Lana is cool in ...this fic lol)

[teb85]

Great fic! I loved it! Ending was perfect !

[Blaire023]

i'm glad everyone still loves this one. i have this problem that i write so many fics, sometimes i feel like i'm not the one writing them, and that it's one of my other personalities, so when i go back and read stuff i've written i'm like, "oh god, what was i thinking/doing?"

this one i am proud of. it's one that i got really into and well, i love smut, so i hope everyone else who reads the smut sections like it as well.

thanks for all the feedback and i'm glad that there is at least ONE fic out there that Lana is likable in.

[katieandjason]

heh heh heh. Funny story. Loved the quick wit, and heck the whole concept of Chloe and Lana messing with Lex like that was freakin' hilarious!!! :rofl:

Only thing, aaahhh, she's in high school. And they were together for a week. And hadn't even dated, just had amazing sex. And they are going to be married? ok.

[Blaire023]

hey! it's fic! not real!

glad you had a good time reading it :)

[katieandjason]

Sorry, didn't realize it sounded so mean. :(

No, I really really like it! And as a girl who was proposed to after highschool graduation, I understand where it comes from. :D I knew enough to say no, though ;)

[Blaire023]

I knew enough to say no, though ;)

unfortunately...i didn't! :P

and no, it didn't sound mean. but if there's one thing you'll learn fast around here is that while everyone likes to keep lex in character and write "realistic" stuff...i don't. i like my lex OC sometimes, plus i'm not all smart n stuff with his huge ass vocabulary, and i write about chloe getting impregnated by a spaceship...realistic events hardly ever apply. :grin3:

[katieandjason]

i like my lex OC sometimes, plus i'm not all smart n stuff with his huge ass vocabulary, and i write about chloe getting impregnated by a spaceship...realistic events hardly ever apply. :grin3:


:rofl: You go! Step outside that box and frolick. :D

So - impregnated by a spaceship, hm? Well, I'm reading about vamps, time to go check out artificial insemination via UFO ;)

[angie284]

:rofl: Love poor Lex thinking he was competing with Lana. I laughed through out the story. Amazing Job.

[zho9]

:rofl: Loved Lana in this fic and loved the smut, as always.

[Queen Of Tact]

oh sweet Juses can you please tell me how i could have not left any fb for this story before now..... I think i came really close to wetting myself reading this at work last night...


CC

[juuicebox]

hehe he was competing against lana.. for no reason :p

[Nonhalema]

I loved it from the beginning to the end...absolute georgous and sweet and perfect and just CHLEX

[Emch]

Great fic. I found this in SEDUCE AND DESTROY and love it. It is hilarious. I love it. I have read quite a few times, but everytime I read it I love it a little bit more.

CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Tanschana]

Really great story!
Funny, smutty, simply great!

[~*~Tasha~*~]

Oh my gosh, Blaire ... I was cracking up BIG time on this chapter. LOL I did love the end of the story too. {Grins}

~*~Tasha~*~


"We were just having some fun dad." Chloe smiled and tilted her head back to the wall. "Just like them."

"And who's them?" His arms crossed over his chest as Chloe got up and laughed a little.

"Lex and his little fuck bunny."

It took a second for his brain to materialize what she had said and his eyes returned to the wall as the headboard on the other side slapped incoherently with it. Gabe's face turned a bright red as the woman on the receiving end screamed his boss' name.

Chloe slapped her dad on the shoulders as she passed him. "Sweet dreams." Lana hurriedly followed Chloe out of the room and made their way to their own room a few doors down the hall.

TBC...

[stampiej]

Oh my god! :rofl:
I would love to have been a fly on Lex' wall when he stopped :grin3:

[SouthernChlex]

I can't believe I'm writing this, but Lana was my favorite character in this story. The apocalypse is upon us.
This story was great. From the fake lesbian tryst, to a truly corny proposal (which I loved, by the way). The whole thing, everything, perfect!

[malugargula]

Great hot funny fic :)

[jstarr713]

lmao at the visual of lex's face when he heard them

[HotCrossedBunny]

Another brilliant fic. I loved the fact that Lana was actually likeable in this fic - there is a first time for everything - without being completely out of character. Gabe was lovely too. Chloe, as always, was brilliant and I love Lex. That was so much fun. :D Sorry that about a decade ago - when this story was written - that you got into a car accident. I hope something nasty happened to the nasty man.

[sbrown1016]

I had forgotten how good this story is