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BlueSabby
19th June 2006, 23:39
Title: The Arrangement
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Lex and Chloe enter into a mutually beneficial arrangement.
Disclaimer: We do not own the characters on Smallville, the WB or any part of DC Comics. We make no profits from this story.


A/N: Blue: Here is a new fic for all of you. It deals with very adult sexual situations. It is NC-17. I repeat NC-17. You got that? You still here? Ok. I guess I should take responsibility for this one or else Sabby will just rat me out later, anyway. Hope you enjoy it. The idea has been done in other fics but we've taken it a step further.


A/N: Sabby: This fic is one of the reasons why the WB would never sell the show to us. And why the actors would never be on board for it either *G*. Like Blue said, this deals with real adult sexual themes. No hand holding and kissy faces here people. If Kink don't float your boat *stands up and makes nice flight attendant motions* You will find the exit button to your right, marked by an X as well as to your left marked by 'Naughty Seduction Forums'. In case of light headedness or nausea, we recommend you use your own bags and bring your own oxygen bottles. Everyone else, have fun with the Most. Depraved. Fic. Ever....Possibly.




The part of the floor that she was focused on was perfectly clean, as was every other surface in the opulent apartment. The stainless steel appliances that she’d seen in the kitchen gleamed in the light as did the glass table in the bedroom. There was a place for everything and everything in its place.

The grunting that filled the room was out of place. It wasn’t the sound of a high society man. It was the sound of an uncouth barbarian. But, she knew that happened to every man when he was in the midst of a good fuck. Or, at least what he considered to be a good fuck.

The man’s taste had a lot to be desired. Not when it came to things of beauty, but when it came to sex.

Chloe was doing all she could to help the situation, but when it came down to it, she was not the one in control of this. He was. But, it didn’t sound like that at the moment.

“Is it good, do you like it,” the man behind her asked. He thrust two more times, a little more forcefully. “I just want to please you.”

Yes, this was not going to work. At all. Besides the fact that she was bored and not even approaching an orgasm, what he was saying, what he was doing was clearly against what they had agreed to. What he said he wanted and what she really did want.

Chloe was down on her knees in the living room, her head bowed and not wearing a stitch of clothing. The man behind her was president of one of those international banks that did a lot of business that Chloe was not familiar with.

They’d met through the connections in the club. She’d just gotten out of a very bad arrangement and was looking to start a new one. She’d sifted through her candidates and picked this man. They’d started off slowly, and that suited her just fine, however she hadn’t listened to her instincts and it was coming back to bite her in the ass.

“Yeah, yeah,” the man behind her groaned. “You take it.” He meant it to come off sounding strong and authoritative, but there was still the questioning tone that she had heard before as he ordered her down into this position.

She kept looking at the space in front of her. Hoping against hope that he was just gearing up. But, no such luck.

“You can touch yourself,” he said, his hips getting faster and faster. “If you want,” he added.

That was it.

“OK, no,” Chloe said. She started to squirm away from the man. He instantly let her go. She got to her feet and looked down at the man.

He was attractive, in his late 30s. But looking up at her in a very confused manner, down on his knees a condom on his still erect penis.

“I was under the impression that you were, a you know….” He waved his hand in the air.

He couldn’t even say it.

“And I was under the impression you liked to dominate your partners,” Chloe said. “I guess we were both wrong.”

The man started to speak. “No,” Chloe said, again with force. “I tried to give you a chance but you’re clearly not comfortable with this. What? Did you just get dumped in a harsh way and were looking at this as a way to reclaim your manhood?”
She’d seen it time and time again. But had thought that she’d researched this man properly enough. She’d been wrong. She knew that when she saw the look on his face. It was clear that she’d hit the nail on the head.

“For Christ’s sake, you’ve got to be kidding me.” Chloe stalked over to the couch and coffee table area. She picked up her once forgotten glass of wine and downed the whole thing. “I can’t believe this,” she muttered under her breath as she started to get dressed. Not again.

There were so many people out there who thought that this was just something to try once. There was nothing wrong with that, per se. For some people it was a one time thing, something to try out to spice up your life. But, not for Chloe.

She was an accomplished, bright, witty and highly successful woman. But, when it came to sex, she liked to be dominated. It had taken her a long time, lots of soul searching and thousands of dollars in therapy for her to come to that conclusion. And to be comfortable with it. But she was there now and wasn’t about to go back.

After realizing what she wanted, and realizing that there was nothing wrong with it under equally agreed upon circumstances, she’d gone out to find what she needed. As with everything in her life, Chloe had researched it thoroughly.

She’d connected with her network and had found a man that could please her. They’d set up ground rules, safe words and everything had been going well. Until a few months ago.

Once in the relationship, Chloe had no problem doing what she was told. It was what she liked, what helped her to get off in a way she’d never previously experienced. However, obeying a command was different when it went against the agreed rules in the arrangement.

Chloe was not a threesome type girl. It didn’t appeal to her in the least. It was one reason that she’d had a problem finding a dom in the first place. Apparently threesomes were all the rage. So, when she found a man who agreed that they would be out of the picture and still had the qualities she looked for, she’d been happy.

And that feeling had continued for the next eight months. But, then, he’d brought another woman into the room. She had no problem with people watching them in the act so she had just hoped that that was what was going on. It hadn’t been.

She’d used the safe word immediately and then asked what was going on.

Her dom had changed his mind, he’d explained. He needed this and wanted it and wanted her to be a part of it. But there was no way she could do that.

After a long fight, they’d broken off their arrangement. She was still bitter about it. Especially after hearing that it had happened once before.

And now this. If she couldn’t trust her network and contacts, she would have to move her home club. It was all so taxing that she didn’t want to think about it.

“I thought you’d done this before,” she said.

The man looked down at the floor. Not a good sign. “Well, technically, no. I mean, I’ve tied women up and role played but never…”

“Completely dominated a woman,” Chloe finished for him. She didn’t want to get into this at the moment. She wanted to get out of here and lodge a formal complaint. This was no way to keep your members happy. In fact, she was downright livid.
“Yeah,” he admitted in a defeatist tone. “But do you think you could…” he gestured to his dick.

She couldn’t believe it. Chloe crossed her arms over her chest. “Tell me to do it,” she said. If he could muster up enough bravado, she just might.

“Um…”

Anything that started with ‘um’ was not a directive. Chloe turned on her heels and left the apartment.

In the elevator, she fumed at the unfairness of the situation. Why couldn’t she have a spot of good luck? It’d been nothing but bad luck since she’d broken it off from that first dom. At least he’d been what he claimed, though.










Until the threesome, that was.

Chloe stabbed the button for the lobby. She knew where she was going. The club. To set some things straight. She’d make her complaint, cut to the head of the line of the new pickings and then hopefully find a man to fuck her properly.

~~~
Satisfied that things were taken care of, Chloe closed the door marked ‘Management.’ They’d been horrified at what she’d told them of her latest experience. They’d also told her that to lose her would be a pity. The Manager, as he was referred to, never by a real name, was a dom himself. He and his sub had been together for years. He had told her that they had no wish to lose someone like herself.

Every club had a reputation in the city of Metropolis, and theirs was the best. It did not look good to have members jumping ship after two bad experiences. Word would get around. And other members might either leave as a protest or choose a different club if they were still deciding.

She’d been promised first look at the new spate of doms. But, she didn’t have a good feeling about it.

Sighing, Chloe went down to the floor.

~~~
Her luck wasn’t getting any better. The usual suspects abound and no one new to keep her interest. She’d spoken to a few acquaintances. Turned down some offers and was leaving the club.

As she walked out the front door, she saw a door opening that she’d never noticed before. It was tucked away under a set of stairs.

It was just her imagination, she told herself once she was out on the street.

But she knew that wasn’t true.

Lex Luthor had walked through the door. She’d seen him.

What was more important, however, was that he’d seen her.

~~~
Lex entered the exclusive rooms of the club with a neutral expression, but his mind was caught on what he'd just seen. Or rather, who he had just seen exiting the public rooms of the club and getting into a taxi.

Chloe Sullivan, he was sure of it.

They had lost contact after his final move from Smallville back to Metropolis, but Lex never forgot a face. Especially not the face of a girl who had ultimately helped him get his father behind bars.

He handed his jacket over to one of the servants and entered the main salon. His eyes roamed over the line of women waiting patiently against the far wall. All in all there were seven of them who had assumed the default position. Hands clasped firmly behind their backs, feet about shoulder width apart and their heads demurely bowed in submission. Most of them were brunette, as the owner knew his preferences, but there was a blonde and a redhead, already put slightly to the side, in case he chose something different for the night.

Lex had mostly given up the lifestyle after he'd been exiled to Smallville, but from time to time, he still indulged in the pleasure of dominating a woman. If he'd asked his therapist, she could probably give him a slew of reasons for why he preferred this kind of sexual relationship over the average one, but Lex didn't really care for an explanation.

He stepped up to the women and slowly passed by them, lifting the chin of the third for a moment, then dropping it. He scrutinized the fifth, gave the redhead a passing glance, then slowly returned down the line. He stopped in front of the second from the right and lifted her face, turned it to the left and back to the right to see her profile, then pressed his thumb against her bottom lip to open her mouth.

“Passable,” he declared.

“Step forward.” The girl stepped forward, head still gracefully bowed.

“Kneel by the chair.” He indicated the large leather chair that sat in a comfortable looking sitting arrangement behind him. The girl immediately complied.

Lex gave the other girls a dismissive glance. “The rest of you, leave.” He paid no attention to them as they were led back out of the room by two of the servants.

He ignored the girl kneeling beside the chair as he settled down into the soft leather. His gaze narrowed in thought as he steepled his fingers, contemplating for a moment what he'd seen outside. Could it be that Chloe Sullivan followed the lifestyle? It wasn't too unfathomable, though. She'd always shown to have a great deal of spunk and a naturally dominant personality. Lex was intrigued.

Still looking straight ahead, he commanded the girl. “Stand up and go to the Manager, tell him I want to speak with him, now.”

He had decided to do some research while indulging in his little pleasure.

The girl's eyes widened comically and she paused for a second before getting up. She was probably afraid she'd done something wrong already. Lex let her believe what she wanted and remained silent as the girl went to do his bidding.

When she returned with Gary in tow she didn't have to be told to get back into the position he'd first ordered her to assume. The manager was a short, stocky built man with receding hairline and a genuine smile that belied the heavy gold hanging from his neck and wrists.

”Lex, what can I do for you?” Gary immediately approached and settled down onto the couch opposite him.

Lex petted the girl's head to show his appreciation as he answered. “I've seen someone I know leave your club just as I came in, and I want to see her file.”

“Now, Lex, you know the privacy of our clientele is most important to us. I am afraid I can't just...”

Lex interrupted the man smoothly. “I can assure you that I'm not planning anything nefarious. It's merely that the lady in question is an old friend of mine and I'm a bit surprised to find that she's a member as well.” His hand stopped its petting and he crossed his legs as he folded them over his lap. “Chloe Sullivan.”

Gary's eyebrows twitched at that and he looked uncomfortable for just a moment before his smile returned. Lex stored that information away, even more intrigued for it.

“Like I said,” Gary was almost wheedling now, “This is not exactly...”

Lex interrupted again. “I promise, whatever I see in the file will remain in good confidence. And of course I will compensate you for this uncommon service.”

Gary sighed and Lex knew he had won. Though not an active member anymore, he still held some sway and his investment into this business was quite substantial.

“I'll be back in a moment.” Gary stood up from his seat and went for the door. “Anything else I can do for one of our best costumers? I hope you're satisfied with your entertainment?” His question sounded genuinely interested and concerned.

Lex smirked and inclined his head fractionally. “I'm sure I will be.”

Gary nodded and left the room to get the file. Lex couldn't wait to get his hands on it.

He turned his attention on the girl for the moment. She was still kneeling demurely at his feet, head bowed and hands clasped behind her back. “Stand up.”

The girl got up and stood in the default position in front of him. He hadn't noticed much of her outfit before, too occupied with meandering thoughts, but he rectified that oversight now.

She was wearing a tight leather corset that pushed up her chest and a slim thong that barely covered her pubis. Her slim legs were bare down to the black high heels encasing her feet.

“Turn around.” She did as told and Lex enjoyed the view of her backside. She had a nice firm ass and a slim waistline. Crème white skin from bottom to top. “Bend over.”

The girl obeyed his command, teetering dangerously on her heels for a moment as she tried to keep her balance while bent in half with nothing to hold on to.

At that moment, Gary returned with the file in his hand.

Lex ignored the girl in her uncomfortable position as he turned his attention to the man.

“Here you go, Lex.” The file wasn't very thick, but that didn't necessarily say much. “It's just been updated. We had a bit of trouble in her case, trying to get her matched up.”

Lex accepted the file and comment with a nod. “That'll be all for now.”

The man nodded and left.

Lex watched for a moment as the girl's legs started quivering, her muscles straining to hold the position. He reached out and trailed a hand up the inside of her thigh.

“That's enough. Get back on your knees now, facing me.”

He put the file at his side on the armrest and relaxed back into his seat, watching the girl as she practically collapsed to her knees and crawled around to face him.

She was a pretty little thing and her tight little body and obedience caused arousal to twitch inside his pants. Her perky little breasts were flushed from the exertion of holding the awkward position he'd forced her into and her eyes were slightly watered.

Lex smirked at the obedient little sub. “Take out my cock and suck it.”

Her hands were sure as she opened the button and zipper of his pants and took him out. In deference to his plans, he'd forgone underwear, making it possibly a little too easy on her.

Lex sighed in satisfaction as she gave his dick a couple of strokes, then leaned forward and took him in her mouth. Resting one hand on the top of her head, guiding her movements subtly where he wanted them, he turned his attention back to the file.

He flipped open the light brown folder and took a look at the picture on top, recognizing the face from years ago. She hadn't changed much over the years. Her hair was a little longer.

“Suck harder,” he absently commanded the head bobbing up and down in his lap as he started to scan the file.

The sharply indrawn breath that came next was only partly thanks to the girl's renewed efforts. The words in stark black print that had jumped out at him were not what he had expected at all. Chloe Sullivan was not a dominatrix, like he had thought.

She was a sub, and on the look out for a new dom.

Lex's smirk widened as he continued reading the file with avid attention, forcing the wet mouth around his dick to take him deeper.

~~~
“No, no,” Chloe said, “tell him that the boards went out early this morning. If they haven’t arrived downtown yet, call our courier service and find out where in the hell they are. Honestly, Phoebe, I would think you’d know not to bother me with such things.”

She hung up the phone and let out an exasperated sigh. Her assistant was usually so good at handling things herself. But, this client was very demanding and very loud. He blustered at everyone. Chloe would be glad when they were done with him.

After college, she’d gone into advertising. She’d just taken her skill at ferreting out the truth and turned it on its head. Lied to people in order to convince them that they needed things they didn’t. She was very good at it and paid accordingly. But, along with the big salary and the big office in the big building went big headaches.

When her intercom sounded, she thought she might be in for another one.

Phoebe informed her that Lex Luthor was waiting in her office. Without an appointment, her assistant added in a whisper.

Chloe closed her eyes; she’d been expecting this for the last few days. Lex was nothing if not curious.

“Send him in,” she said.

Groaning, she got out of her chair and put her too high heels back on. She grabbed the suit jacket that had been placed over the back of her chair and put it back on, pulling the sleeves down straight.

When Lex opened her door, she greeted him with an outstretched hand.

“Lex,” she smiled her official business smile, “it’s nice to see you again.” She pumped his hand firmly and then released it. “Can I get you something to drink?”

He smirked back and inclined his head. “Scotch, two ice cubes.”

After his thorough perusal of her club file, he'd done his research and found out all there was to know about Chloe Sullivan outside of her sexual proclivities. She had made a name for herself in advertising and marketing, won a few awards and if things continued as they had gone for the last couple of years, she stood a chance to become partner at one of the top ten advertising companies of the country.

Lex took his time looking her over in her business attire and noticed her interesting choice of shoes. They couldn't exactly be called business-sensible.

“Before you ask what brings me here,” he continued as she handed him the drink. “I've seen your face recently and thought it was time to renew old acquaintances.”

He gave her office a passing glance. It was typical management style, functional with a few modern art qualities mixed in. “You've come quite a way from the local high school newspaper and unpaid internships at the Planet.”

Taking a swig from his scotch, his brow rose as he tasted the high quality liquor. “Excellent.”

Ahh, so Lex was here to dance. She wondered what he wanted from her. It was very much like him to get right to it. That was more than fine with her. Once the conversation started, it would be over that much sooner.

Chloe wasn’t ashamed about her lifestyle, she just didn’t think that everyone needed to know about it. People could be so judgmental, herself included, and thought that things of such a personal nature were best kept to oneself. She thought that Lex might agree with her on that one.

Perhaps he was here just to question her about her visit. He was curious by nature. She wouldn’t worry until he gave her reason to.

“Only the best for those who darken my doorway,” she responded. She walked over to her desk and sat down behind it, allowing Lex to look around her office at his leisure.

“As for my success,” she leaned back a little in her chair and her smile widened, “I deserve it, I work very hard.”

She gestured to the seat facing her desk and Lex sat in it. “Shall I play dumb and pretend that I don’t know where you’ve seen my face or would you prefer that we get right to it? I’m guessing the latter being that we’re both very busy people these days.”

“So anxious to cut to the chase?” He took another swig of his drink and crossed his legs. “Very well, then.” He balanced the glass on his knee and looked her straight in the face.

“I know you are looking for a new arrangement, due to unfortunate events concerning your previous one.”

He'd mulled over the idea for about two days after he'd gotten through the research. But, truth be told, his decision had been made much earlier than that. Lex had decided he wanted to get back in the lifestyle and enter a firm arrangement the moment the opportunity had presented itself. The research and mulling had merely been to confirm his decision.

Now, the ball was in Chloe's court. Of course, he still would have to test her, since no matter what the file stated, you could never be sure of the quality of a sub until you had checked them out thoroughly yourself.

“I’d say I don’t believe it, my voice full of outrage, but that wouldn’t be the truth.” Still, Chloe was beyond angry that Lex had been able to get his hands on her file. The hard copies of those documents could do a world of damage to every single person that had one.

Luthor was a powerful name and Lex was a powerful man. She wondered if he had to do anything but merely request her information before it was brought to him. No doubt by a nubile sub. Lex was clearly a dom. His manner screamed it. But she’d been wrong before so she tried not to assume.

“And?” So, she was looking for a new arrangement. What did Lex intend to do with this information? Chloe also wondered how loud her voice would get and how many things she would throw once she got to the club. The Manager had some explaining to do.

Lex's smirk grew a little more predatory as he noticed her growing ire. How a woman like her could turn into a sub was still somewhat of a mystery to him, but he would run with the information from the file.

“And I also noticed that you were having trouble finding someone that meets your requirements.” He took another swig from his drink, then placed it back on his knee. “Perhaps because you don't have access to all possible matches, but merely those from the public rooms.”

He cocked his head to the side. “I have to say, I'm a little surprised though. I have trouble imagining you as a willing submissive, despite what the file says.” He threw that last part of the sentence out casually, letting her know, or at least take a good guess at how deep his knowledge ran.

“Well, Lex, I can’t say I’m surprised by that. You did always have trust issues.” She crossed her legs and continued to keep her temper as much as she could. Usually those sitting across from her were never able to pick up on it. However, Lex and she had passed in and out of each other’s lives for over ten years so the usual rules didn’t apply in this situation.

“And perhaps not enough of an active imagination.” She knew that Lex wouldn’t take kindly to the dig whether or not he let her see it.

For now, she tried not to dwell on the fact of what, exactly, was in her file. It would only work her up even more.

His expression didn't falter. He knew she was lashing out because she felt uncomfortable and he liked to watch her squirming to keep her temper in check.

“I can assure you, I have a very active imagination.” His eyes trailed over the part of her still visible above the desk and back to meet her gaze. “In any case, I've come here with a proposition.”

Obviously, Chloe was still under the impression that he'd come here merely to satisfy his curiosity or to play a little power game. But the power game he had in mind reached far beyond this office.

“I've grown a little disinterested in what the club has to offer in the way of nightly entertainment and I'm looking for a more permanent arrangement. Interested?”

Chloe raised one eyebrow, a move she had actually swiped from him years ago. It usually served her well. Now, she wasn’t sure if it was more of a detriment to her in this conversation.

Here she was, in her office, in broad daylight and Lex had just sprung this on her. But, part of what made her so good at her job was to deal with unexpected issues when they came up.

“This hardly seems fair,” she started. She could see Lex’s eyes crawling all over her body already. She felt her body want to click into sub mode but she held it at bay. For now.

“You’ve seen my file and yet I have no information on you. This is not the way that I usually make decisions such as these.” She cocked her head to the side and studied Lex. “Am I to assume that this meeting is what I’m to use in order to make my decision?’

“This meeting is mutually beneficial,” he answered as he put his glass onto the table, then leaned back into his seat. “I may have read your file, but I never make an assessment or a decision based solely on printed information.”

He brushed his hands and lost the smirk completely, assuming the neutral expression he wore when in his dominating role. The change in his tone of voice came automatically. “Stand up. Come over here and let me see you.”

OddEvens
20th June 2006, 00:17
Oh My God.. this is so damn hot.. *blushes* yes it's true.. sometimes this kind of thing does it for me.. I think my closest friends know that already considering The Secretary is on of my all time favorite movies..

lj715
20th June 2006, 00:25
WOW!!!!!! Excellent start!!!!! Love it, very hot. I chose well. Want more...please.

hfce
20th June 2006, 00:30
Oh my GOD!! I am sorry I voted for the sick Lex fic. This is so good. More please.. :beg:



Hope :D

kimmie
20th June 2006, 00:41
Wow, oh wow! I just know i'm gonna love this, if the last line of this chapter was anything to go by! I will be a sub to Lex Luthor's dom any day of the week, I'm all for that arrangement!

-K-

Ori
20th June 2006, 01:56
My jaw has dropped to the floor. this is incredible. Please, please update soon. It is exactly what I needed for my first day of what looks to be an incredibly long nine weeks. I am begging you to please update soon.
Chloe is a strong woman who just like to let go with a little submission (nothing wrong with that.) And Lex. Lex in this makes me drool.
This looks like it is going to be your best story yet.
I am going to look for the towel to keep next to my computer for what looks to be a droolworthy next chapter.

lilinny
20th June 2006, 02:08
I wanted to resist you but when I saw your names under the title I knew I was going to be sucked right in to this story. Fantastic beginning.

letia84
20th June 2006, 02:35
He brushed his hands and lost the smirk completely, assuming the neutral expression he wore when in his dominating role. The change in his tone of voice came automatically. “Stand up. Come over here and let me see you.”
I got a little Chill reading that last bit. :yeahbaby:

GAH! I can't believe you stopped it there. I'm so gald I voted for this and I can't wait to see what Lex will make Chloe do.

More Soon. Very soon. Like Right Now.

pipersmum
20th June 2006, 02:35
wow what a great start I love it! I can hardly wait for another update please don't make us wait to long :beg:

sadie kate
20th June 2006, 02:40
*dies of hotness*

Man alive, I can't wait for more.

westwingwolf
20th June 2006, 02:57
Okay you've grabbed my interest and I can't wait for the Chlex smut to begin. I get the feeling that there's going to be a lot of it.

autumngold
20th June 2006, 03:34
Damn, lucky Chloe!! I would so become a sub if it would get me Lex Luthor!! Of course, then again wouldn't we all?!! Great new story!! I can't wait to read more!!

Ainur
20th June 2006, 04:22
I'm speechless!

MagnusXXN
20th June 2006, 08:09
Thats just wrong on so many levels, I most hear more.




): )

Willower
20th June 2006, 08:36
ok this is definitely shaping up to be another good one...i need more...stat!

vardaquareien
20th June 2006, 10:26
Ooooooh!!!! Yay!!! Wonderful concept. I really love the idea of Chloe being a strong independant professional woman who likes to be dominated in the bedroom...or whatever other rooms they end up in ;)

*rubs hands together* I'm looking forward to seeing something a little more hardcore - I'm positive that you guys are the perfect ones to pull it off.

I'm interested to know what they'll decide on for their 'safeword'.

peapod
20th June 2006, 10:54
hot damn!!

Gaia
20th June 2006, 11:53
Better than can be imagined...
a really fast update is needed.

sosostris
20th June 2006, 12:12
mother of....woah. this concept makes me very happy. very very happy.

gecko
20th June 2006, 12:58
this is great, can't wait for the next part and for the smut to start

somethingeasy
20th June 2006, 14:39
I'm hooked in already. Most kinky-dominant-submissive-pain-pleasure fics I've skimmed through have been between Clark and Lex. Anyhow, ummm can't really get into them... cause... M/Mficfreaksmeout... there! I said it! I mean no offence against the gay community, by all means so your own thing and enjoy yourselves, just don't expect me to watch!!

ahem... But besides that, most other BDSM fics (even the ones with pairings I usually like) are usually usually not handled sensitively or properly, and they sound too painful to actually enjoy the hotness. BUT I have had the good fortune of finding one fairly hardcore BDSM fic that I genuinely enjoyed (and it was CHLEX!!!)

in case anyone is interested (or if Bluesabby also wants a little look), here is the website address. Its called Don't Touch by rebecca/blueraccoon

http://www.smallvillefanfic.com/archive/1/donttouch.html

A fair amount of kink and painful toys, so please don't read if you're sensitive. Of course, if you've gotten yourself interested in the direction 'The Arrangement' is taking, that is pretty much a moot point now :P

I'm curious. Just how indepth and hard-core is this fic going to go? Is Bluesabby planning to go to the same level as 'Don't Touch'. Perhaps deeper? Scary! Looking forward to the next update :D

yasmine32068
20th June 2006, 18:18
WHOA! My mouth went so dry I had to swollow a few times just so I could type!!! Hot isn't what I'd call it! I am not sure that there is a word good enough in the english language to fittingly describe this!!! Whew!!! I think I need to invest in batteries when then next chapter comes out!!!

Great job you guys!

pink_pixie1204
20th June 2006, 21:15
Whew... Chloe's a sub? wouldn't have put it but its a great twist. I can only imagine the fun they're gonna have together.

Please update soon, i'm we'll find a reason for her submissivness and i want to know it.

SianUrsula
20th June 2006, 21:45
Oh this is so exciting! Can't wait for more, such a fantastic idea!!! It's going to get so so gooood...

sabby
20th June 2006, 22:05
@SomethingEasy.

Blue and I both enjoy your feedback (mostly on Buyouts so far) since I'm guessing you're not the only one with a few questions and since you provided the link, I'm taking liberty to answer you. Blue might do so too, later.

I've read over 'Don't touch'. There are certain similar themes that show up both there and will show up in our story. In defense, neither Blue nor I have read 'Don't touch' before, and no plagiarism was intended.

@ ALL: Also, there are a few key differences. Mainly that we are dealing with two consenting adults (no highschool kids here), also their relationship is not of a private nature. And the most important difference is, this is about Dominance and Submission which does not necessarily involve Sadomasochism.

Through out the story we will try to establish and mention certain rules and backgrounds that are necessary for understanding.

For now just baer in mind that "Not every Dom is a sadist and not every Submissive is necessarily a masochist."

@pink_pixie. As for the reason Chloe is a sub, I believe you find it if you read over the first chapter carefully again. There doesn't have to be a deep psychological reason for getting into a certain kind of sexual lifestyle. Think: "Whatever floats your boat"

somethingeasy
20th June 2006, 22:38
Hi Sabby, thanks for clarifying certain points... and for the record the thought of plagiarism never EVER entered my thoughts when I posted up the link to 'Don't Touch'. I was honestly hoping it would actually help you in writing your fic, seeing how another author dealt with a similar theme in such an amazingly lovely style. The whole 'candle-lit' scene in 'Don't Touch' was so eloquent and beautifully written, it just blew me away.

But enough of Rebecca's fic... I'm looking forward to seeing the levels of depravity you can sink down to in this fic (while still keeping it beautiful and sexy). And did I mention I'm an angst junkie? (hint hinthinthint) :)


As for the reason Chloe is a sub, I believe you find it if you read over the first chapter carefully again. There doesn't have to be a deep psychological reason for getting into a certain kind of sexual lifestyle. Think: "Whatever floats your boat"

I was however hoping for a small psychological reference/analysis of Lex and Chloe. Just a little introspective discussion or inner-monologue to discuss why they feel this form of sexual expression satisfies them so. The fic just wouldn't feel complete without expressing any reasons beyond 'cause we just want it that way' :P

But of course, your fics are usually always quite interesting and wonderful with loads of unexpected twists and turns. So whatever you work out... I'm sure it will be fantastic. Any idea how many chapters there might be?

sabby
20th June 2006, 23:27
I should really not spoil. Spoiling is bad. Blue might kill me for spoiling *gets haunted look*

*whispers* oodles of chapters! *runs away* I didn't say anything.


and as for psychological reasons, well, we'll hope you find satisfying answers once the story gets rolling. They probably won't come in the form of an eloquent solilloquy ala Hamlet, though, so you will all have to read carefully and look for the little hints and explanations that pop up.

welshy
21st June 2006, 01:14
He brushed his hands and lost the smirk completely, assuming the neutral expression he wore when in his dominating role. The change in his tone of voice came automatically. “Stand up. Come over here and let me see you.”

Excellent start, I hope there's going to be more soon :)

randa
21st June 2006, 01:44
you guys know how much i love your collabs so now im so excited to see where this goes!


randa

Evelyn
21st June 2006, 02:00
Can I just say "yowza"? I loved it and need more. Please????

Skye
21st June 2006, 02:19
OMG!! Now this has certainly got me hooked. Can't wait to see what will happen next??

Btab12207
21st June 2006, 02:52
Wow! I am for sure hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon?

Addie
21st June 2006, 03:09
That was great, I cant wait for the next update.

Shanna
21st June 2006, 03:37
Very interesting and naughty start, ladies. Can't wait to see Chloe's response to that little command. ::Shivers, imagining Lex's deep dom voice::

Any idea on how often you'll update? I'm just a greedy gus, I guess, but at least I'm asking politely, right? That has to count for something.

Shanna

tiger04
21st June 2006, 04:15
That was a wonderful hook; I can't wait to see what Chloes response is going to be. It sparks so many questions. Will she, won't she? Will it cary over into there everyday lives to form "Romantic" realationship? Is another person going to enter the picture that has nothing to do with the arrangement, and cause a conflict?

Ok, so now that I have written down some of the many question that I have running throught my head- not sure if any of them made any sense. I had a long day at work. This fic was wonderful fun to come home to.

I hope that there will be another update very soon!

darkangel
21st June 2006, 07:23
I'm hooked. I'm enslaved.

starmoon
21st June 2006, 07:48
very interesting and perfect way to start please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next.

Pufkinz
21st June 2006, 08:09
:respect:

Damned interesting start, lloking forward to more chaps soon.

Please Update.... please:beg::beg::beg:

flower
21st June 2006, 08:27
Wauw! that was great! Please update soon!

holmes
21st June 2006, 10:17
Oh god - I can just tell that this fic is going to be truely hot!!!

Please update soon!!!

slayer44
21st June 2006, 17:17
That was an amazing first chapter. I'm loving the plot, something new and refreshing. Please update reaalllllly soon!

whodunit??
21st June 2006, 19:13
I have to honestly say that i was a little iffy on reading this fic, mainly becuz i'm not really into the whole dom/sub thing. But then i figured what the hell it's written by blue and sabby so I know that whatever it is, it'll be good. and i really must say i loved it, i am totally and completely hooked. you must update soon becuz i cant wait to read more.

Heather

GivenToFly
21st June 2006, 19:56
Ooh, very interesting and insanely hot concept.


He brushed his hands and lost the smirk completely, assuming the neutral expression he wore when in his dominating role. The change in his tone of voice came automatically. “Stand up. Come over here and let me see you.”
*thud*

Guh, what a way to end the chapter. You gals sure know how to hook us and leave us begging for more.

redhotchick85
21st June 2006, 20:02
This is really awesome! I may not be into that lifestyle, but you can sure as hell appreciate it when it is well written. Kudos to you!

I cannot wait to read more! It'll be great to see how both Chloe and Lex react.

asharnanae
21st June 2006, 22:22
wellll........... you really do know what we love!

MARVOLOUS!!!!!!!!!

*purrs in delighted anticipation*

Louie
22nd June 2006, 08:29
Wow, now even though I've read a lot of your guys' stories up here on NS I have to say that I wasn't sure about this one. Though after reading the chapter I did not feel the same, it (as always) was well written, interesting, and a little bit different. All of those criteria coming together to make a new story I just can't wait to read.

peggy
22nd June 2006, 13:50
More please !!

sylvia
22nd June 2006, 16:08
Oh my god. This is crazily, shudderingly, maddeningly hot. I don't know why, but to me Chloe and Lex just fit in so well with a Ds relationship. And all the possibilities, in the hands of such skilled writers, have me absolutely hooked. I can't think why it isn't done more often. I think this story is going to be filling a void in Chlex fanfic that many people probably weren't really aware was there. I need more! Pretty please?

dreamerjules
22nd June 2006, 16:20
Ummm. Yummmmm. :drool2: :drool2:

Thoroughly enjoying "Buyouts" and dying to see where this one goes.

letia84
23rd June 2006, 16:09
Hoping for an update today. :beg:

BlueSabby please don't tease, bring on the smut.


For now just baer in mind that "Not every Dom is a sadist and not every Submissive is necessarily a masochist."
I love that you said this. Looking foward to seeing them switch roles.

Xebeche
23rd June 2006, 16:16
Ohh. I can't wait to see the lengths you'll take this to. Love the premise, bring on the smut!

Mel
23rd June 2006, 17:59
I'm in physical pain here, from you not having updated already.
Please, please, please do it soon.

georgee5
23rd June 2006, 18:49
I am soooooo totally fanning myself off! Yeosa, that is just HOT! Looking forward to where this "relationship" goes.

Willower
23rd June 2006, 19:57
please, for the love of God, update! I will give you my right kidney...cmon, I know you want it.

xxasaxx
24th June 2006, 03:42
Update this!!!!!!:rules:

Tandy
24th June 2006, 04:09
Well, Well, this is just awesome. Please continue soon, hopefully Chloe's sub mode will click soon. Can't wait.

Lily
24th June 2006, 05:16
Excellent start! Can't wait for you to update!!!

BlueSabby
24th June 2006, 17:22
A/N: Sabby: Okay, fiends, here's the next chapter. We appreciate all of your wonderful feedback and the offering of a kidney in one case, but Ebay won't sell that unfortunately, so *Shrugs*. So this be Chloe's interview for the position of Lex's sub. From here on out things get progressively kinky, so I hope you all are stout of heart and all that good stuff. Enjoy!

P.S. Since some of you might have misunderstood my comment about the relation between Domination/Submission and Sadism/Masochism: What I was trying to say is that, though Chloe is a sub, she is not really into heavy pain. And even though Lex is a dom, he does not necessarily enjoy causing pain to his subs. (And there most likely won't be any role switching going on in their arrangement).

A/N: Blue: Hello all. Wow. What a response. Thanks for all of the begging and pleading. It's rather apropos for this fic...which you'll see later. I do have to comment that I have read Don't Touch, as well. Also, yes, there haven't been many fics in this vein but there are at least two on this very board...somewhere. I believe it's the 'Kitten' series by Blaire. Not exactly the same, but perhaps the same genre, if you will.


Anyone else hearing Lex would have assumed that he had gone on autopilot or that he was being cold to her. Chloe knew better. Lex had slipped into dom mode, seamlessly and quickly. This was her test. She’d been through them before.

Even when she had been the one looking to be matched, the interview or whatever you wished to call it was always run by the dom.

Before Chloe even realized that she was doing it, she was on her feet. She had responded to Lex’s command without even a second thought. She now stood beside Lex as he looked up at her from his chair. Her body had also assumed the usual position. Feet shoulder width apart and head bowed in supplication.

Lex scrutinized her stance and found it almost flawless. He nodded his acceptance of it and turned to face her fully. His eyes roamed over her still clothed body, this time more slowly, taking in everything from the sensible but slim cut jacket down to the knee length skirt. Her legs were encased in colorless stockings and stood firmly in the high heels. “Take off the jacket.” It was only the first of quite a few items of clothing she'd take off for him.

He would run her through a first test, if she managed to pass it, this arrangement was a done deal. The idea of having Chloe Sullivan as a permanent sub at his beck and call was alluring to say the least.

The jacket that she had hurriedly put on was taken off. Not slowly and not in a rush. Being a sub wasn’t about seduction techniques, it was about obeying simple commands in a natural way…unless instructed otherwise.

She held the jacket in her hands. She was told to take it off, but not to drop it. Now that this had begun, everything that happened was in Lex’s hands. Chloe had made the decision to give him all of the control. It was strange that at its base, the relationship was equal. The sub gave control and the dom took it. But people didn’t usually think of it in that way.

“Put it on the desk.” He was pleased to see that she followed his instructions minutely. Nothing was more irritating than a sub that started 'assuming' things in an over eager desire to 'please' and achieving the exact opposite.

“Tell me what made you choose these heels.”

He settled more comfortably in the chair and uncrossed his legs again as he took in the contours of her body beneath the white blouse she was wearing. He would have her take off the rest of her clothing bit by bit. Soon. But she didn't need to know that, yet.

Chloe continued to not make eye contact with Lex. That wasn’t part of the game. He hadn’t told her to look at him. But she wasn’t the only one that had to watch her actions. If she didn’t like the way he handled the situation, she would stop obeying, they both knew that. She wasn’t the only one on an interview here.

“They make me feel sexy,” she said. Why else would a woman wear those shoes with that outfit? “My legs are short and they make them look longer. They also catch a man’s eyes. They linger there. I like knowing that men are looking at me.”

After so long of thinking of herself as an ugly duckling, when she had finally realized that she was attractive, she’d embraced it.

As she spoke, she put the jacket on the desk. But other than that, her body didn’t move. Chloe was exceptionally adept at controlling her muscles and holding poses. Lex had probably read that in her file.

“You're self conscious about your legs?” His eyebrow rose slowly and he looked at the body part in question. “Take off the skirt and leave it on top of your jacket.”

This was a first thorough test. For one part, because she had basically admitted to being self-conscious about her legs, and for another, she would be leaving behind the stage of being decently clothed. The door wasn't locked, so anyone could come in. Her office had large bay windows, and though they were up on the thirty first floor, there was still the possibility of being seen, however unlikely.

Chloe moved her arms back to the closure that sat just above her tailbone. She undid the infernal little button that she had always hated and slid the zipper down. After she pushed her skirt down her hips and legs, she bent down and picked it up. She placed it on her jacket and then went back into her stance.

Then, she answered Lex’s question. “I’d like them to be longer,” she explained. “I’m not immune to the very advertising that I push,” she admitted.

It now struck Chloe that she stood in her office basically half naked. It also occurred to her that her panties and bra did not match today. And that neither garment was very sexy. Plain, cotton blue underwear and a sturdy white bra. Very unsexy.

“Spread your legs.” He ignored her snarky comment, and concentrated on her legs instead. They truly weren't long, but well proportioned and obviously depilated. Lex acknowledged that with a small incline of his head.

The view of cotton blue panties made him narrow his eyes in displeasure. That was truly the single most uninspiring piece of underwear she could have chosen to wear. He wasn't sure he truly wanted to know what kind of bra went with this. But he would stick to the plan. A smirk formed on his face as he looked up the length of her body. “Take off the shirt and place it with your other clothing.”

Even though she kept her eyes off of him, Chloe could tell he was studying her body with the greatest care. Lex Luthor had the best of everything and she knew that one wrong move would have him out the door before she could even reach for her clothing that was on the desk.

Chloe unbuttoned her shirt and placed it on the desk. She kept her legs spread, he was probably waiting for her to go out of position, and then let her arms hang out at her sides. He hadn’t told her to put them behind her back. Some doms thought that was the default position of subs while others did not. She wasn’t sure what Lex wanted but he had not specifically told her so doing nothing seemed to be the smartest move.

After she'd done as told, he gave her a long scrutinizing look. The white bra was even more uninspiring than the blue panties and Lex seriously doubted her taste in lingerie at this point. But that was nothing that couldn't be fixed.

He liked her body well enough. Soft curves and an ample chest, crème white skin and a few freckles here and there that added character to the over all picture of a well figured woman. Lex would be lying if he denied that the sight aroused him. Her head was still bowed in submission, but her hair was held back in a tidy twist so that it didn't fall into her face. He approved of that as well.

However, he was still very much displeased about her appalling choice of underwear.

“This will not do at all.” He vocalized his displeasure in a cold tone. “If I choose to take you, you will not wear such appalling underwear. In fact, you won't wear any underwear that covers your breasts or sex. And make no mistake I will inspect without prior notice if you are following my instructions.”

“Yes, Lex,” Chloe said, softly. The dom could make up rules such as that. Her first wanted her to only wear red thongs. Now, what Lex was proposing was a little more involved…and not very businesslike.

She imagined giving a presentation, her breasts swaying in her shirt, nipples chaffing against the material. Walking from board to board, explaining a print ad, as her pussy was bare. It wasn’t very practical….but the idea appealed to her. If it pleased Lex. And the inspection part.

Lex coming to her office and slipping his hand under her skirt…and then inside of her.

Chloe was getting turned on but betrayed none of that. It was a rookie move. To start blushing or even shaking.

He watched as his statement sunk in and noticed her pupils widening in arousal. Good.

“Now take off that hideous excuse for underwear and throw them in the trash where they belong.”

He looked past her to her large desk and assessed the situation. It wasn't overly cluttered, only a few files strewn across the surface. It would be a little uncomfortable to lay on top of those he imagined. “Then get on the desk and lie down on your back.”

He wanted her sprawled out across the desk and open for his inspection. They would also start talking about the ground rules. Now that he was pretty sure of her willing submission, he had no reason to doubt that this deal would come through. She was ideal for his needs and would be the perfect sub to indulge in when the urge struck him.

Chloe reached around her back and undid the clasp of her bra. She slid the straps down her shoulder and then took it off. She dropped the white piece of material on the ground for the moment.

Then she hooked her fingers in the waistband of her panties. She slid them down and off of her legs. She did so carefully, never once losing her balance. When they were off, she picked them up, as well as her bra and dropped them into the waste basket.

She looked at her desk briefly and saw that there was no good place to lie down on it. Things would be digging into her back wherever she was lying. She chose to lie down lengthwise so that most of her body was steady on the desk.

Chloe could feel paper clips, a pen and various files all digging into her flesh. Her nipples had tightened due to the change in temperature. Her arms were at her side and she stared up at the ceiling.

He slowly got up from his seat, ignoring the uncomfortable twinge of his own arousal in the change of position. Stepping up to the desk, he looked down at Chloe's prone form, thoroughly inspecting every inch of her body. “Raise your arms above your head.”

The move stretched her out perfectly, emphasizing her breasts and the smooth line of her belly. His gaze slid down the length of her body, lingering on her legs and the perfect stretch of muscle as she held the position. “Arch your back,” he commanded as his gaze went back to her breasts.

Chloe did as instructed, her eyes still fixed on the ceiling. It looked dirty. She got into the position that Lex wanted. Her back perfectly arched, her shoulders still touching the surface of the table.

She was on display for him and she could feel his eyes crawling all over her body. Chloe waited for him to tell her to get into another position, but he didn’t. She took deep breaths, her breasts rising even more, as the time went on. It wasn’t comfortable, but that was the point.

“I accept nothing short of complete submission. Should you fail to obey, you will be punished according to the degree of your failure.”

His voice was matter of fact as he rounded the desk, trailing his fingers around the edge of the smooth surface. His eyes still roamed over her body, now mainly for the purpose of letting her feel his gaze than actually inspecting her looks. “You may lower your back now,” he instructed smoothly.

Lex stopped as he reached the side of the desk where her head was resting. “Tell me your limits. I will test your boundaries, so don't think to betray me or try to impress me by setting them too high.”

So, Lex was pleased by what he had seen. By telling him what she would and would not do, it was an unsaid agreement that they would be entering into together.

Chloe let herself rest against the desk once more. She looked at the ceiling for a moment before saying, “If I’m yours, I’m yours alone. I will not be passed around or borrowed by other men and women.”

This was non negotiable. She also found it ironic that it was the sub that usually set the terms of the agreement. Another contradiction to what logic dictated.

“If it pleases you, you may take me orally, by my pussy and by my ass,” she started. She thought of the basic bases to be covered. “If it pleases you, you may tie me up, put me on display, show others how you fuck me.”

Chloe was a very open sub. That was why she didn’t understand how she had had so many problems in such a short amount of time.

“If you’d like, you can cause me some pain,” she thought that that could be worked out later, where her actual lines were. “You can spank me if it gives you pleasure and use toys on me.”

Lex nodded to her terms, accepting them for the moment. The time to push boundaries came later. The ideas accumulating in his mind at her words made his cock twitch inside his pants. He would enjoy every single minute of this arrangement, he was sure. “Third parties will not be actively involved above a certain degree. I never shared well.”

He braced his hands on the edges of the table and leaned over her slightly. “Look at me.” When she raised her face to look up at him he continued. “You will have a safe word, but I will not tolerate abundant use of it. If you use it more than once, this arrangement ends immediately.” Pulling back after he'd made his point, he straightened back up. “You may choose your safe word, now.”

There it was. The one drawback to this plan. Lex was not a man who stood for being disobeyed in every day life and this arrangement was no different. She got one get out of jail free card and that was it.

It wouldn’t be a problem. She’d only said no once to her first dom, and that had been the last time.

When she had looked at Lex, she was pleased to see that his face looked tight and he was not unaffected by what they were doing. She couldn’t see below the desk but she’d bet that he was hard and aching. Now, if only she could ignore the fact that she knew she was wet.

“Green,” she said. She liked to keep things simple. “If that pleases you.”

“Accepted.”

It wouldn't be difficult to remember and it was perfect as a safe word. Short and so far removed from any sexual context that it couldn't be confused as an outcry during the heat of passion.

He began circling the desk once more until he stood at the opposite end, looking down at her from between her legs. Lex slowly trailed his gaze up her prone form until it rested on the apex of her thighs. “Pull up your knees, feet on the desk and spread your legs, then lift your hips.”

She had been waiting for this. Yes, the doms were always interested in a woman’s breasts, but that was not their primary concern. Chloe pulled up her knees and tried not to scratch her desk too badly with the heels that she still wore.

Her arms were firmly anchored on the desk so that she was stable. Once her feet were planted comfortably, she started to slide them out to the side, she opened herself up as much as she could, the sides of her shoes almost teetering on the edge of the desk.

Chloe lifted her hips up and held the position. She was totally open and exposed to Lex. And wet.

He took in the view she presented and was pleased to see the moisture glistening on her pussy. He hadn't even touched her a single time and she was almost dripping. Perfect.

The smell of her arousal hit his nose and for a moment he contemplated running a finger through the folds of her cunt and tasting her juices. But, not this time. This time was for inspection and to settle their agreement. Any pleasure either of them derived from this was secondary.

He let her hold the position, waiting for the tell tale quiver to start in her thighs that signaled her muscles straining. “A closer shave might be needed, but other than that, very nice.”

Lex crossed his arms over his chest and continued to look at her pussy as he spoke. “Use your fingers to spread your cunt, let me get a better view.” He stepped closer to the desk with the command.

Chloe shifted all of her weight to her right arm, it was stronger. And she would need all of her strength to stay like this. Lex would like nothing more than for her to fall. Maybe.

She slowly brought her left hand to her pussy and was careful not to touch anything else. She spread herself open for him. Chloe could sense that Lex was getting closer to her. She kept her body in the proper position.

Apparently, her file wasn’t that detailed. Her first dom had held her in positions for at least an hour. Plus, she did strength training at her gym.

Lex leaned closer until his face was merely a hands width from her cunt, taking in every detail. With her outer lips spread wide he could see her tiny clit peeking out from its hood, just above the slightly open hole. The moisture of her juices was covering the pink area of her inner lips, making it glisten.

“Very nice,” he almost purred the words in approval.

Still adhering to his rule of not touching, he braced his weight on his hands and leaned in until his mouth was almost brushing over her skin then pursed his lips and blew a concentrated stream of air down the length from her clit all the way down to her pink little asshole.

Chloe’s hips moved. Not a lot. A small amount. Not enough to cause her and Lex to touch, but they did move. And he hadn’t told her to do so. She kept her eyes open, not wanting to close them. Another thing he hadn’t asked for.

It’d been so long since her boundaries were pushed and she was tested that she wasn’t as strong as she should have been. It wasn’t a physical mistake, it was a mental one.

Lex’s face had been placed directly between her legs so there was no hope that he had missed that. Chloe didn’t apologize and try to explain. It would do no good.

His lips curled up into a smirk for a second before his expression smoothed out to completely neutral. He straightened up and rounded the desk until he was standing beside Chloe, looking down into her face.

“Did I allow you to move?”

His arms were loosely at his side, but his stance was straight and threatening. She had failed her first task. It was ample reason to test her submission when it came to punishment. A small misdemeanor, yes, and he had aimed for it, but the ground rules were set and it did not matter what was the cause of the disobedience. Her obligation as a sub was to follow his orders under any circumstances.

“No, Lex,” she stated simply. She didn’t move her body any further. Her hips were still in the air and she was still spread for him.

Her eyes looked straight ahead though she could see out of her peripheral vision that he was now looking at her.

Chloe knew that she was to be punished. Lex would never allow her to get away with what she had just done. First time together or not. Whether he had hoped and planned for that or not. It didn’t matter.

“Not even an hour into our arrangement and you are already showing disobedience. I am sorely disappointed.”

He shook his head and started circling the desk. “I had expected more self-control, especially considering the praises sang in your file.” His fingers trailed over the edge of the desk again as he contemplated what an appropriate punishment for this offense should be. “It was a minor disobedience, yes, but in light of the fact that it came so soon into our arrangement, your punishment will not be quite as minor.”

His eyes narrowed as he stopped between her legs once again. She would be holding this position until he was good and ready to release her. “Tell me, did your prior dom punish you?”

Chloe nodded and then realized that from where Lex was standing, it was unlikely that he was looking at her face. He was probably looking at her body, seeing if she was about to crash down to the desk. Another action that would be punishable.

Or perhaps he was looking over her body, deciding what to do with it. “Yes, Lex. He did.”

She wasn’t punished all that much. But when she was, the man had known how to dole it out so that she was panting and her body was covered in sweat.

“Hrmm,” he considered her body as he took in that information. The file hadn't been very specific about her involvement where punishment and pain were concerned. “What would you say is your most sensitive body part?”

He had a few vague ideas already about how he was going to punish her, but he wanted this first punishment to be very memorable, so the next disobedience wouldn't follow too soon. Unlike other doms, he wasn't too much into doling out punishments and causing his submissives pain.

He enjoyed the aspect of control over another person and to a certain degree, the responsibility that came with it. Being able to give a submissive what they were seeking and in turn being worshipped for that very same care and control was the major reason he took part in this lifestyle. Wouldn't his therapist have had a field day with that?

“My clit,” Chloe answered. But she supposed that all women, if they were lucky, were sensitive on that particular body part. “And my nipples,” she added.

She remembered the first time she’d been felt up on her father’s couch. Kissing had gotten her pretty heated up but it was nothing compared to when the boy had started to gently rub her nipples.

“Very well,” he stated as he decided on the punishment.

Now all he needed was the instruments. His gaze roamed over the desk and found a few paperclips, lying innocently on a small pile of papers. He picked up two of them and rounded the desk until he could get at the drawers.

Pulling out the smaller top one, he found what he'd been hoping for, a 12 inch plastic ruler. He snapped the ruler against the palm of his hand, testing the sting. He'd have to control his aim and strength with this one.

Straightening up and closing the drawer, he tossed the paper clips onto Chloe's taut stomach. “Use these to clamp your nipples. You may use both hands to do this.”

Chloe had heard a sharp noise fill the office but couldn’t place what it was after Lex rooted around in her desk drawer. The cool objects on her stomach were revealed to be paper clips when she looked at them. Fuck.

She withdrew her hand from her pussy, it was slick with her juices and she kept her hips in the air, planting her weight on her elbows now.

“Thank you, Lex,” she said. Doing this with one hand would have been impossible. Chloe quickly placed her fingernail in the clip to open it up and then replaced her nipple with her hand.

Tears sprung up in her eyes but she ignored them as she gave her other nipple the same treatment.

It was hard to do because her juices had coated her hands as she had worked with the paper clips. Once they were on, her nipples started to throb. But she didn’t make a sound. Or move anymore than was necessary.

Lex held the ruler above her face so she could see it. Some doms liked to make their subs kiss the instrument to show their ultimate acceptance of the punishment but Lex wasn't into overly dramatic gestures. If the sub couldn't accept a punishment without him having to check to make sure, there really was no sense in playing the game.

“You will receive ten strokes, five to each breast and you will count them out. You're allowed to scream, but don't miss count.”

Without waiting another moment, he brought the ruler down on her left breast in a swift arc and plastic hit skin with a snapping sound.

His pants were still incredibly tight and his cock already leaking precum inside his briefs, but Lex pushed his own arousal viciously aside to concentrate on the punishment. If he didn't take care with his movements, he might hurt her more than necessary or cause real harm which was not the purpose of her punishment.

“One,” Chloe said. But it was louder than she would have liked. However, she knew that by the end of her punishment, her volume would be even higher.

Chloe kept her head in place and tried to focus on keeping her lower extremities still in spite of the sharp pain that was radiating out in her breast. She wasn’t sure if she was allowed to touch anything except the desk. If she could ball her fists up that would help but she didn’t dare do that.

Another sound of the ruler swishing through the air followed by it connecting with her skin. “Two,” she panted out harshly.

By the time she got to “Five” on the first breast, she was screaming. And sweating and panting and the tears had spilled over onto her face.

Lex calmly walked to the other side of the desk and delivered the first blow to her other breast. “Oh, god, Lex. One.”

He calmly noted the tears running down her face and the crack of her voice as she counted out the strokes. It was a pleasant surprise that her assistant hadn't come in to inquire about what the hell was going on yet.

His next stroke hit a little harder, right on her nipple and snapped the paperclip from her skin. Her outcry of “Oh please, Lex!” rang through the office, followed by a mere whimper of “three.”

He made sure not to hit the same spot again and brought the ruler down on the side of her breast to a cracked plea of his name and a broken “four.”

The last stroke landed squarely on the underside of her breast, leaving a broad red welt on her skin as she screamed “Yes, Lex,” and panted out the demanded “five!”

Lowering his arm he bent over the desk, bracing his weight on his forearm as he leaned into Chloe, next to her face. She was sweaty and her breath came in labored pants. Her pupils were dilated to the point where only a slim sliver of hazel was visible and she blinked frantically at the ceiling.

“You did very well, Chloe, and we're almost done.” He murmured the words softly in her ear, his hand not quite brushing over her hair at the back of her head. “One more stroke, to show me how good you can be. And you will be good and obey me, won't you, Chloe?”

The ultimate stroke would not land on her breast, and it would be the stroke to make sure she remembered that disobedience had severe consequences. Lex waited for her answer as he kept still, looking down into her tear streaked face.

Chloe swallowed a few times and licked her lips. She felt overheated and was dying of thirst. She wanted to look over at Lex but she was able to control herself on that.

“Yes, Lex,” she said. She wanted him to touch her. Just once. He was so close to doing so but she didn’t think it was going to happen. Not today. “I’ll obey you. Just tell me what would please you.”

Lex remained silent as he straightened up and rounded the desk once again.

“Spread your cunt wide for me,” he commanded as he got into position between her spread legs. “And don’t move.”

Her muscles were already quivering as she obeyed his order and Lex was not sure she would be able to take this, but he had made a decision and was not going back on it. At this point, she would have to show that her obedience really was instinct and overruled any other inclination of her body or mind.

Aiming directly for her clit, he brought the ruler down with a snap hitting straight between her widespread fingers.

Chloe wanted to scream, she wanted to move, she wanted to cry. She wanted to do all of these things. But, in the end, she did none of them.

Pain and pleasure radiated from two very key parts of her body. It was only through her sheer will and determination that she remained still.

Except for the new tears that sprung to her eyes. She blinked a few times and they ran down her face. One of them tickling her when it brushed past her ear.

She held her position. Her hand still held her open and her legs were still firmly planted on the desk. Her muscles were burning and she didn’t know how long it would be before she could walk properly but for now it didn’t matter.

It didn’t matter that her pussy was stinging worse than both of her breasts combined. What mattered was that she had obeyed Lex. She’d let him be in control and she’d maintained hers when it counted the most.

Lex set the ruler down and for a moment simply looked at the woman in front of him in awe. She had kept perfectly still and was even now holding her position. Tears were running down her face and he could see the muscles in her legs quivering with the need to relax but she obeyed him completely.

His cock was painfully hard by now and he was barely able to control his urge to tell her to turn around and then fuck her three ways into next Sunday, right on the desk. Taking a deep breath, he reined in his arousal as much as possible and rounded the desk as calmly as he could.

Reaching out with his fingers, he removed the remaining paper clip without touching her skin. It made him think of a perverted version of Mikado.

“You did that excellently, Chloe,” he let his pride show in his voice. “I know now that you can in fact obey me in every order I give you, if you want to. And you've shown me that you do want to obey me.”

Lex took a few steps back from the desk and looked at her for another moment, still holding the position. She looked magnificent.

”Now, relax your position, get down from the desk and come here.”

Chloe took a few seconds before she moved. She had to steel herself for the pain that she would feel once she tried to move and then stand up.

She retrieved her hand from between her legs and then moved them out in front of her. Her muscles were still tense and it hurt. Not to mention the throbbing in her breasts and pussy. She pulled herself into a sitting position for a moment and then scooted to the edge of the desk.

Her legs hung over the desk and she prayed that they would keep under her. She gently slid off of the desk and checked the urge to wince when her feet hit the floor. Chloe kept holding onto the desk for a moment. When she was certain she wasn’t going to fall, she made her way over to Lex.

He watched her progress until she came to a halt, one step in front of him. Lex could see that she was having trouble staying on her feet. He would help her with that.

“Kneel, thighs spread, with your hands clasped behind your back and facing forward. This will be your default sitting position.”

His voice was firm and devoid of much inflection. He was going to set a last few ground rules before he left.

Chloe did as she was instructed with a “Yes, Lex,” before sinking to her knees. She thought she would be relieved to be in the new position but spreading her legs caused the pain between them to flare up.

She clasped her hands behind her back and bowed her head for a moment before remembering his instruction.

Chloe faced forward, raising her head. And saw that Lex was fully hard and that his cock was about two inches away from her mouth.

“Now that you are mine, your pleasure is also mine. This means you will not masturbate or try to achieve sexual release in any other way until I tell you to do so. Don't think I won't find out if you break this rule and believe me, the punishment in that case will be much more severe than the one you have just received.”

Lex was aware that the whole time he was speaking with her in this position, his crotch was practically shoved in her face. He wanted her to be aware of the fact that this session did not leave him unaffected either and let her see what she would get intimately acquainted with soon enough.

”I will call you to set up our next meeting and until then you are to follow the rules you have been given so far. Repeat them to me.”

“I am not to please myself. That is no longer within my right. My pleasure belongs to you and I am not to touch myself or receive sexual release in any manner.” Chloe paused. This was going to be hard. She was about ready to pop now and had already started thinking about that. Forgetting that Lex would have thought about that.

“If I do, I will be harshly reprimanded. Punished by your hand.” They weren’t hard rules to remember but she understood Lex wanting her to repeat them.

“I am to follow the rules until you call me.” She continued to stare straight ahead. Directly at his cock. “I am not to wear underwear that covers my cunt or my breasts. So, I will not wear any.”

She continued to stare straight ahead. “You can inspect me at any time to make sure that I have followed this rule.”

Chloe could see that even though she remained still, Lex was not. His hips were making little pushes towards her. She wasn’t sure if that was a subtle sign that she was supposed to do something about his current predicament.

“Would you like me to please you with my mouth,” she asked. She just wasn’t sure.

Lex smirked, having expected her to cave in and ask at some point. He liked to see his subs eager to please him in any way. “I am pleased that you take your responsibility with the seriousness it deserves. I will tell you when and how to please me if I so desire it.”

He looked down at her for a moment longer, kneeling so prettily at his feet and eager to please him, then inclined his head and took a few steps back.

Lex left her on her knees as he turned on his heel and walked to the door. “I'll see you soon, Chloe,” he said with his back to her and left the room, closing the door firmly behind him.

Chloe waited a minute or two before moving or making any noise. She didn’t think that Lex would be able to hang around for that long in order to listen to how she would react, but she still didn’t move.

She gingerly got to her feet and walked over to her desk. There were a few things out of place and some marks on it from her heels but it didn’t look all that worse for the wear. However, her office reeked of sex. She could smell it and cracked a window open.

Picking her clothes up, Chloe knew that she would have some explaining to do to Phoebe. There was no way that her assistant hadn’t heard her cries. Or noticed that they had included Lex’s name.

She put her shirt and skirt back on and then sat down in her chair. She should go to the bathroom and straighten herself up. And she would. As soon as her body stopped shaking.

kimmie
24th June 2006, 17:51
Wow! there are no words! Wow!

-K-

letia84
24th June 2006, 17:51
(And there most likely won't be any role switching going on in their arrangement).
Okay now that is all cleared up.

:yeahbaby: OMG that was very painful yet very hot. I'm at a lost for words. I have to collect my thoughts....

ETA:
I think I can speak now. I'm really enjoying how you did the interview. I thought they would have a long talk but this whole thing depends on actions and how the dom and sub act.

This whole thing seems like a trust issue to me which both Chloe and Lex have issue with from their past lives in Smallville. I have to say that Lex's controlling nature is really being showcased here but the fact that he is willing to give pain and is some what opposed to too much of it seems to be his more sensitive nature and the fact that he was hurt. I'm still seaching for why Chloe would submit other then the fact that she likes it but I know its in there some where.

I'm a mushy person at heart and I wonder if this will ever be more then an agreement for sexual satisfaction. I could see the two of them having a nice relationship but keeping their arrangement going in the bedroom or on the office desk as is the case with this chapter. The way your writing this its as if they have both looking for the missing link to their dom/sub and now it may just be fullied.

I think that's all for now and I can't wait until you update this.

somethingeasy
24th June 2006, 18:43
wow! Amazing visuals coming through this fic. I loved the level of details you've gone into and the level of details that are sure to come later :D
Establishment of a dom-sub relationhip... very interesting. It was not like I expected, it was a lot more like a business contract rather than an excercise in acceptance, faith and trust.

But this IS after all a business contract. It is not a progression or adventure into new sexual practices by two people who are already in a relationship (which would have had a lot more reassurance and care). Its a simple agreement between two near-strangers who have decided to enter into a profitable and satisfactory partnership. Warmth and companionship was never a part of the bargain... implied or otherwise...

But that being said... I hope Bluesabby realizes that Chlex fans all over the forum will be clamouring for warmth and affection really, REALLY soon... I cannot imagine how such feelings will develop in such a relationship/partnership, but thats why I look forward to seeing HOW it happens :D

Actually one aspect of usual dom/sub relationship is the fact that the sub always ALWAYS depends on the dom for protection during such activities. If Chloe has been blind-folded and/or handcuffed (or just holding an awkward nude position), and something happens (whether its an annoying unwanted interruption or a natural disaster), the dom's first duty is to make sure the sub is safe, comfortable and reassure them that no harm will come to them in their vulnerable position. Subs give power away to their doms. Therefore doms have a responsibility to carefully maintain and use the power without abusing it (the old spiderman adage... great power... blah blah blah) ;)

This give-n-take form of trust and protection might have the potential to grow into affection. Unless Lex finds himself too hardened to give in to feelings growing from protective instincts, AND if Chloe is too cynical and jaded to allow herself to fall for someone who she basically 'hired' to satisfy her :P

Sheesh... I think I'm overanalyzing. I'll be looking really, REALLY forward to the next update. Write quickly (pretty please?)

p.s. in case anyone is wondering where I'm getting all this from... I did a little research from wikepedia on BDSM shortly after reading chapter 1 of this fic. It provided some interesting insights into the psychology and practical application of 'heavily kinky sex'. When I get into a fic... I reaaally GET into a fic ;)

sexi_angel_babee
24th June 2006, 18:44
Wooooooooow. that was.... intense... very very very very very well done :D can't wait for more!!!!!

lj715
24th June 2006, 18:50
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!! Can't write anymore, first have to pry myself from up off the floor. MORE!!!!! SOON!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!

happybum
24th June 2006, 18:56
*drools* i cannot possibly give a substantial and thorough feedback. That was Hot..keep em coming *wink wink*

Btab12207
24th June 2006, 19:50
One word. HOT! Most definitely worth the wait. Can't wait for more!

Evelyn
24th June 2006, 20:25
Wow! Guys, you really have outdone yourselves this time. That was amazing, not only the sexual tension but the mental inspection of the relationship between a sub and dom. I have done research into Sadomasochism before, for a paper, and I am glad to see how well you are portraying their world. Please write more soon!

maire78
24th June 2006, 22:26
Have been checking frequently since the first chapter to see whether you have updated yet, this chapter was very hot and definatley worth waiting for. I will be wating (most probably quite impatiently) for the next update.

xxasaxx
24th June 2006, 22:58
wow! more please!!!
:drool2::drool2:

westwingwolf
24th June 2006, 23:20
I just went through a massive brain malfunction and that was just the interview. I think I'll be in a coma by the time this fic is finished but it will be well worth it.

Willower
24th June 2006, 23:31
too bad about the kidney, it was a good one. anyway, that update was great...just wonderful. i have little, or well, no experience with the sub/dom thing and i like the way you've written it to be more than some strange thing that's misrepresented on tv and whatnot. you've made it way more complex and definitely hotter. great update.

i'm anxious to see if this develops into something more as lex seems pretty unwavering...time will tell. :)

hfce
25th June 2006, 00:24
That was both intense and hot and arousing. I love how Lex has total control and Chloe a control freak like Lex is letting him. She must really want it to be so into this type of thing. I can't wait to see how she pleases him later. :D


Hope :)

autumngold
25th June 2006, 05:10
All I can say is WOW!! Excellent story!! Can't wait for more!! I hope that Chloe continues to please Lex!!

sylvia
25th June 2006, 08:48
Ookay, that was hot. And you hadn't even got to the actual sex yet.
Wow. More.

Gaia
25th June 2006, 16:03
Very nice.....

holmes
25th June 2006, 23:48
MY GOD tha update was hot!!!! I jiust knew this was going to be great!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!

lilinny
26th June 2006, 01:39
So that's how it's done. Intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter...Master.

BellaMR
26th June 2006, 08:33
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is amazing.

Pufkinz
27th June 2006, 02:57
:tantrum: I'm not happy... I was lead on a.... :confuse2:I don't know...
not happy... not happy at all... I was left hanging!!!!!!

It was so good that that...Urgh i'm lost for words....but where is the smut!!! :hankpank: and why is it not up yet!!!!! Yes i know i'm demanding, I know... but you caused it.... you're the ones writing a damned fine story!!!!

Update soon.... like tonight....

Oh Oh Oh I know, FRUSTRATION!!!!! thats what I felt after this long awaited chapter!!!!.... You guys are evil :evil:, you just built me up and left me.... :nono: :nono: :nono:

:respect:

sydsvaughn
27th June 2006, 03:52
You know, it would take you two teaming up again to draw me back into the Chlex --- and you're doing a damn fine job!

The subject matter is tricky but you write it well and hey, it's HOT!

Please, write more soon, because, well, anything that makes me enjoy Chlex again is okay by me!

SaraC

ldydee81
27th June 2006, 05:32
wow this is getting better and better :) please hurry and update again soon :)

jez3_uk
27th June 2006, 07:20
Woah, im lost for words.

Queen Of Tact
27th June 2006, 11:00
I knew this was going to be a great one when you told me about it..... great job gals.... I love it, and by the look of it so does the rest of NS.....



CC

buckles squared
27th June 2006, 12:03
Wow! That really stimulates my, uh, mind.....

gecko
27th June 2006, 16:49
all i can say is wow, im now sitting here speechless, great work

kimmie
27th June 2006, 18:47
i think I'm addicted to this fic, I'm all giddy about it! Please don't leave us waiting too long for an update, I'm biting my nails here!

-K-

persephone47
28th June 2006, 15:56
*gulp* that was... different, but you've done a good job with it.

Pieper
28th June 2006, 23:40
Good update.

MagnusXXN
29th June 2006, 21:17
Enjoy'd the second chapter greatly, can't wait to read more.

I wonder what Chloe is going to tell her asistant? Kinda hard to explain those 'sounds' while Lex was in there with her. ; )

Though maybe her asistant isn't a snoop, and keep her nose out of it. Oh well, hurry back and write more.

Side question, are Lex and Chloe going to be the only Smallville characters introduced in this fic? Is she still friends with her cousin? Is Lex fighitn with Clark/Superman?

Is at any point Lana going to show herself?


): )

Ferd
30th June 2006, 00:26
Naughty, raunchy, saucy fun and I'm addicted like a monkey on crack.


Keep it coming! :p

fanette
30th June 2006, 23:18
it's great
i didn't know a lot of things about dom and sub
it's interesting

Hathor18
1st July 2006, 02:03
Very interesting. Great update.

xxasaxx
1st July 2006, 02:12
:rules:

Update this!!!!!!:rules:

letia84
1st July 2006, 04:09
:rules:
I 2nd this demand or should I be begging. :yeahbaby:

squeezumstang
1st July 2006, 07:57
okay, how'd you do it? how did you verbalize my kink, when i hadn't even gotten around to putting it into words yet? *mutters, mindreading smutfic writers, can't trust them not to blab*

seriously though, this is exactly the kind of thing i've been looking for. it truly is difficult when "your kink is not my kink". people really need to be that explicit and come to a mutual arrangement, otherwise it just does not work. a lot of men out there think that being dominant means that they get every fantasy fulfilled, when in actuality it should be about the sub getting his or her needs fullfilled. trust me, i dumped a wanna-be-dom over this kind of thing. the daddy of my dreams was very much like lex, until he up and dissappeared from my universe, but that's personal drama, and irrelevant. i'm glad that chloe finally found her perfect "daddy", may we all be so lucky.

more please, ladies!

susan

pipersmum
1st July 2006, 13:52
WOW erm........... WOW thats all I can say please, please, please update soon :beg:

~Diane~

slayer44
1st July 2006, 20:08
Wow! That chapter was too good for words. I'm sitting at my computer drooling! Your coming back soon.....right?!?!!!!! :D

kimmie
2nd July 2006, 00:37
Please, please, please update soon, I seriously have no patience when it comes to theis fic!

-K-

BlueSabby
2nd July 2006, 18:51
A/N:Sabby: We're both happy you're enjoying the experience so far. This is going to be one long ride and at first we weren't sure how you'd react to it. Glad to know we have an appreciative and active audience *smirk* As for any lingering concerns about psychological motivations and whatnot. You will find opinions and clues regarding mindset and inner working all through out the text. However, they're in between the action and most importantly. This is NOT a scientific study on the subject of Dominance and Submission! Please, bear that in mind. If you look for more inside info or are interested in the matter beyond reading this story, you can pm us and we will try to give you a bit of starting research material. Thank you and enjoy the story.

A/N: Blue: Not many witty comments available for this story. Just sit back and relax. Between shouting for updates that is. :)



Lex had spent the last few days preoccupied, his mind crowded with thoughts of his next meeting with Chloe. After he'd left her office, he'd barely been able to manage his way back to the car. As soon as he'd gotten settled in the seat, he'd taken his cock out and it had only taken a few strokes before an explosive orgasm had snapped through him.

Now, he was sitting in his office in LexCorp towers, looking out over the city and contemplating what he would do with Chloe once he had her in the same room with him. She was a beautiful woman and an even more beautiful submissive. He would make good use of her ability to hold a position for an extended time and enjoy everything her body had to offer in due time.

Lex had decided he would call her in a few hours and have her come to the penthouse. This was where their sessions would take place when he didn't care to take things to a more public scene.

As far as he could tell, she had followed his rules. He had assigned a professional to follow her the same day the arrangement had been agreed on. Lex couldn't be expected to have an eye on her at all times personally, but his resources allowed for constant observation non the less.

He was pulled from his musings by the ringing of his cell phone. Recognizing the number as that of the man he'd hired to follow Chloe, he picked up immediately.

“Speak.”

“Mr. Luthor, I have followed the assignment to a rather secluded restaurant and she is meeting with a man there. They are having an early dinner and getting awfully cozy.”

Lex's eyes narrowed as he leaned back in his chair. There was no need for assumptions yet. She wouldn't be careless enough to break his rules so soon. “His name?”

”I got his ID confirmed by the hostess. Walter Medley.”

He growled under his breath as the name clicked in his mind. Walter Medley was in his mid thirties and a relatively big animal in the ad business. LexCorp had signed a contract with the firm he was working for not three weeks ago.

The possibility that Chloe was meeting with the man on a business matter was highly unlikely. The ad company she worked for was one of the harshest rivals of Medley's firm and would sooner declare one of their advertised products faulty than cooperate with them.

“That will be all for today, you will get your usual pay within the next twenty-four hours.”

He snapped the cell shut and fluidly rose from his chair. With a few controlled strides, he made his way over to the bar and poured himself a drink.

Not even a full week and she was breaking the rules. He had expressly stated that she was not to seek pleasure in any form unless he allowed her to do so. She had agreed to being his and now she was meeting with another man.

There was no chance that Chloe was platonic friends with the man, he knew as much from his extended research. There was also no reason to assume she was meeting Medley for business purposes. Which left one conclusion.

She was going out on a date.

The only reason for going out on dates, to his knowledge, was to try and get in bed with a person you felt attracted to, or stood to gain some other advantage from sleeping with them.

He downed his drink and sneered in distaste. Obviously, the punishment he'd doled out for her last disobedience hadn't made a lasting impression. That would not be the case this time around.

~~
Chloe couldn’t remember the last time that she’d been in this building. A lifetime ago, that was for sure. And it had been for a very different reason. She certainly hadn’t been here to please Lex Luthor. Though, from his tone on the phone, she wasn’t exactly sure if that was going to happen tonight.

She’d just gotten done with her meeting with Medley, it had gone well and she was almost sure that the man would jump ship to her firm, and she’d been congratulating herself when her cell phone rang.

Lex had been clipped and told her to come to his penthouse immediately. He’d hung up and she’d changed direction mid stride.

The last week had been interesting. First there was Phoebe to deal with. The woman hadn’t been sitting at her desk when Chloe had come out of the office to use the bathroom after Lex had left. When the woman had buzzed her about two hours later and brought in some files, she’d looked at Chloe with caution.

She hadn’t spoken but something had to be done when Phoebe had thrown out one of the useless files. The woman had stared in the trash can and then back at Chloe. Chloe, never looking up from her papers, had informed Phoebe that while she liked her very much, if anything that she had thought she’d heard coming from Chloe’s office made it’s way around the building, Chloe would ruin her. Phoebe nodded and Chloe said that they were never to discuss it again.

Their working relationship was strained now but Chloe thought that, with time and a hefty quarterly bonus, things would go back to normal. She was wondering if the same could be true about the rest of her coworkers.

Wearing no panties wasn’t a problem. The bra thing, though, had been noticed far and wide. Chloe’s breasts were hardly small. She stopped wearing white shirts and kept her suit jacket on quite often, but it was still difficult to hide the fact that she was braless. She’d solved the problem by buying a variety of tank toplike shirts that supported her a little. Not breaking the rules because she still wore no bra.

The elevator operator nodded at her and pressed the “P” button. Lex had alerted the man at the desk that company was expected, she supposed.

When the doors to the penthouse opened, Lex was standing there, his hands clasped in front of him. His body language was telling. This wasn’t the regular Lex, this was her dom.

Chloe murmured a thank you and waited for the doors to close. After she was certain that she and Lex were alone, she got down on her knees, spreading her thighs the way Lex had told her and clasped her hands behind her back.

She looked straight ahead and could see that he was not in a state of arousal as he’d been last time.

Lex approached her slowly and began to circle her kneeling form. The fact that she'd immediately assumed her default position was not mollifying him in the least in light of recent developments.

“How long has it been since our last meeting?” he asked neutrally as he came to a stop behind Chloe, looking down on her.

His anger was running very close to the surface, but he would not jump into the punishment. She would reveal her failure to him herself and then she would pay for her disobedience. Dearly.

“Seven days,” Chloe answered quickly. She’d thought she’d been nervous on the ride up here but it was worse now.

Her past dealings with Lex made her know the warning signs when he was beyond mad. She’d seen him in a rage more times than she would have liked. Been on the receiving end of them before, too.

But, this was different. This was worse. He was circling her like she was his prey. It made her nervous but Chloe also knew that it excited her.

He nodded and finished his circling until he was in front of her once more. “Take off your clothes and put them on the couch, then get back in position.”

His mind was rolling through different scenarios for her punishment, trying to suss out what would make the most vivid reminder to make her not even think about disobeying him again. Since they were at his home, he had a wider variety of instruments to choose from. If things continued like this, he might have to acquire even more of them and start her training from scratch. The idea was most displeasing.

Chloe leaned forward a little and let her momentum carry her in a way that allowed her to get gracefully to her feet without touching Lex. It was a trick that had taken her a long time to perfect.

Hands still clasped, she walked over to the couch. Her jacket came off, followed by her suit jacket, shirt, pants and then shoes. More sensible ones than the last time they’d met.

She returned to kneel at Lex’s feet.

“I see you have followed my instruction not to wear any underwear that covers your tits or cunt.”

He looked down at her naked body, but failed to be pleased by the sight, still too irritated by the thought that she had broken the much more important rule. “Tell me, what have you done today?”

Forced to repeat the course of her day, she would have to reveal her meeting with Medley, unless she lied to him. In which case, her punishment would become yet more severe. Lex did not tolerate subterfuge in his submissives.

Still staring at Lex’s groin area, Chloe said, “I went to work and then I had a dinner meeting. After the meeting, I got your call. I came here.”

Chloe wasn’t sure how much information Lex wanted. However, he usually did not do well with people meandering around the point. He liked to get down to it as quickly as possible.

“Look at me,” he commanded sharply and waited for Chloe to raise her head to meet his gaze before he continued. “Did you intend to break one of the rules today?”

She had not outright lied about the meeting, but she'd glossed it over as something unimportant and that simply would not do. She would have to look him in the face and tell him exactly what had happened and what she had set out to do. It would play a major part in his final decision on her punishment.
Break the rules? Why would she do that? She’d been looking for a dom and had found one. She wasn’t new to this. She didn’t wish to have to find another arrangement. She wasn’t one of those simple girls who forgot what they were and were not allowed to do as soon as they left the presence of their dom.

“No, Lex,” she said. Chloe had come very close to shaking her head. And that was unacceptable. She’d done much better last week. Just out of practice, perhaps.

Clearly Lex had gotten wind of something that had upset him and following his line of questioning she thought she knew what it was. The meeting with Medley. He thought that she had intended to use him to please her. But that was Lex’s job now.

“What was the purpose behind your meeting with Walter Medley?”

His eyes bored into hers as he waited for an answer to his question. She seemed sincere in her statement that she hadn't intended to break his rules. She had also almost slipped and shaken her head in denial. He had noticed the small movement of her chin before she'd stopped herself. But even such sincerity could be deceiving and he wasn't so easily appeased.

“I was trying to get him to join Pettinger, Dodson and Veiss,” she explained. That was the firm that she worked for. “He’s been unhappy at his firm and I offered him a job with ours.”

It made sense now. She’d been seen with another man in an out of the way restaurant. Lex had clearly kept tabs on her. In any other situation she’d find herself up in arms about it. But, not now.

Chloe had given over control of her body. Lex got to look at it, position it, touch it…or not. So, following her wasn’t all that shocking.

“He didn’t touch me, Lex, I made sure of it.” Now that she was Lex’s, Chloe was careful not to touch other people. She was only for Lex. It took constant vigilance but it could be done. Crowded places were the worst.

So it wasn't a personal date. It was a hostile take over scenario. His anger deflated slightly. However, this explanation did not get her ass out of the coals quite yet.

“And how did you plan to convince him to join your firm?”

A woman's best weapon was still her own body and she wouldn't be the first to use illicit promises of pleasure to get her way in a business deal.

“Money,” Chloe said, simply. “He’s being underpaid. Everyone knows it. But, he’s a loyal man and has been reluctant to leave.”

“Even if my body did not belong to you, I wouldn’t give it to him.” She looked up at Lex steadily. He’d gotten closer to her, forcing her neck in an uncomfortable position. Had she not known him well, she would think that it was an accident but she knew better.

“He would not know how to properly use it.” She thought of the last man who she’d tried to fuck.

Lex nodded his acceptance of her statement. The answer had come too fast to be anything but honest. Considering what he knew about Medley, she was also right in her assessment that he wouldn't have been able to use her properly.

Taking a deep breath and releasing it slowly, he took a step back from her. His mind let go of the idea of punishing her, now that he was convinced that she hadn't broken his rules. Lex was relieved. He truly hadn't enjoyed the thought of having to reprimand her. He didn't gain pleasure from giving pain, he gained pleasure from the complete submission of a woman. Disobedience defied that purpose.

“Lie down on your back, hands above your head, crossed at the wrists. Legs spread at forty five degrees.”

It was over, for now. There’d been a slight shift in Lex’s tone and cadence of voice. When you were a sub, it was helpful to be able to read your dom. Chloe did as instructed and spread herself out on the cold floor.

During the week, she’d had her pubic area waxed again. Lex had made a comment last week about a closer shave and she’d seen to that. Even though he hadn’t asked her specifically to do so.

She saw his eyes flit to her spread legs briefly before returning to her face. She was still looking at him. He had never told her in the contrary so she assumed that order still stood.

Chloe felt the goosebumps cover her body and her nipples tighten but she didn’t move or react to the tiny bumps that had sprung up on her body.

“You've not had an orgasm in the last week.” It was a statement, not a question. “Unable to pleasure yourself or find pleasure with anyone.”

His eyes traveled over her body as he spoke, noting the small signs of excitement. He was also pleased to find that she had taken his comment to heart and gotten her cunt waxed. “How did it feel to be denied release?” His gaze went back to her face.

It was a question that was difficult to answer. She didn’t think ‘it fucking sucked’ was exactly what Lex was looking for. And she’d be punished for such a lippy answer.

Besides, it wasn’t the total truth. Chloe knew how much watching her deny herself had pleased Lex. And that made her feel very good.

“It was very frustrating. Bordering on painful,” she answered. “But,” she said, focusing on his face, “I know that it brought you pleasure. To watch me like that. To be the cause of that. It was exciting to please you in the middle of the day, in my place of business and to be denied what I wanted because it was contrary to your wishes.”

Lex smirked in acknowledgement as he stepped away from her and towards the kitchen area on the other end of the spacious room. “Did you get aroused after our initial meeting this last week?” He raised his voice to carry back to Chloe as he opened the fridge and perused its offerings.

Picking out a bottle of merlot he closed the door and went about pouring himself a glass. Crystal wine goblet in hand, he waited at the doorway of the kitchen for her answer.

Her eyes did not follow Lex. Instead, they fixed on the ceiling. For the second time in a week, Chloe inspected the space above her head. Pristine.

“Yes,” she said. “When I thought back to our time together I got wet.” She swallowed once. “Being in my office was the hardest part. I could hear your voice and see the scuff marks on my desk.” Chloe had often closed her eyes and wondered what she had looked like, spread out for Lex and open for him.

He slowly reentered the room and stepped closer to her. “What did you do then? How did you deal with the arousal?”

He swirled the deep red liquid around and inspected its luster. Not one of the best vintages, but it was passable enough. He took a small sip and savored it on his tongue. The warmth of the alcohol mixed with the warmth of his growing arousal as he took in the lines Chloe's body. The position pushed up her breasts and put a subtle emphasis on her well groomed cunt. His cock started to rise in interest.

“Nothing,” Chloe said. There was nothing to be done about it, really. “I couldn’t stop thinking about it,” she said. “I didn’t want to. Your lesson was sublime and I wanted to remember how it felt.”

“But,” she paused, “that only made my situation worse. What I did was fantasize about our next time together.” Chloe had done that a lot during the past week. Wondering what Lex would come up with. “I wondered if it would please you to touch me the next time.”

Instead of answering her implied question, he asked one of his own as he came to a halt directly beside her. “Would you care for a taste of wine?”

He swirled the red liquid once more and tilted the glass slightly from side to side. The crimson would look beautiful in contrast with her skin. It pleased him that she had thought about their previous session and tortured herself with fantasies. Sometimes, the imagination of a sub was the best device of domination.

“Raise your head, tilt it back and open your mouth wide.”

Chloe had been surprised that Lex had given her a choice. Some doms would do that. They would pick out what they wanted you to wear, a top five if you’d like, and then leave the choice up to the sub.

Not now, though. Lex wasn’t about choices, he was about absolute orders. And she followed this order to the ‘t.’

His eyes took in her new position for a moment. Not particularly attractive, but that wasn't the purpose of it.

He shifted his grip from the stem to the goblet, then lowered his arm until it was straight and slowly tilted the glass. His eyes followed the flow of the liquid as it trickled down to land with a splashing sound on her tongue. Some of it overflowed and trailed down the sides of her face, tickling her ears.

Lex watched her throat muscles straining as she fought to keep the liquid in her mouth. “Swallow.”

Thankfully he’d given her the command. It was a little hard to let yourself be drowned. No matter how good a sub, the instinct to live might outweigh everything else.

Chloe did as she was told. She could feel that part of her face was moist from where the wine had missed her mouth and that a few drops may have splashed onto her neck.

While she swallowed, she was sure to keep her mouth open, as Lex had not told her to close it. The muscles that moved caused some of the wine to spill out from the sides of her mouth. Chloe was lucky that she had mastered the art of being outside of her body. Otherwise, it would have tickled like a bitch.

Lex watched the wine flow down her face, leaving barely visible red trails on her cheeks. His gaze followed the line of her throat down to her chest. Her nipples stood out stiffly from her ample breasts in the middle of the dollar coin sized areolas. She did have very nice tits.

He tilted the glass again and trickled more of the wine into her mouth until it was completely filled. Then he took his time taking another swig himself, watching the renewed fight of her throat muscles before he instructed her to “Swallow.”

“You have very good control over your throat muscles. I'm sure you will be able to please me when you suck my cock. I expect you to take all of it down your throat when you do.”

He took a step across, so he was standing over her body, her waist between his feet. “I have read about your experience in pleasuring a man with your mouth and I expect you to live up to your potential.”

What, exactly, was in that damn file? Were the subs rated on each of their skills? It wouldn’t surprise her if that was the case. But that mattered little. What mattered was that Lex’s words had piped her interest.

Would he really let her touch him and please him tonight? Chloe wasn’t sure but the thought of that increased her arousal…which was what Lex had intended.

In addition to the renewed discomfort between her legs, her arms were beginning to hurt a little. She had flexed them above her head to begin with and the muscles had not relaxed yet. Chloe knew she looked better that way.

It wasn’t only her arms and the throbbing of her cunt, her neck was beginning to pinch. She’d already started on some exercises at home, loosening the muscles up and the like. But, she was out of practice.

“Does the idea of sucking my cock excite you?” He needn't have asked, as he could see that her pupils were dilated with arousal and her breathing had become deeper as she listened to his words.

The glass was almost empty and Lex swirled the liquid around inside the goblet, his eyes focused on the motion.

”If I am pleased with your performance once I allow you to show me your skills it will become a regular occurrence.”

He slowly upended the glass and let the wine flow out in a trail across her chest, watching it splash across her breasts and flow down the sides of her body.

The liquid against her nipples almost made her jerk. Now that she didn’t wear a bra, her shirt constantly chafed them. They were more sensitive than ever. But she had won that battle. Probably because she had been focused on his words and the picture they painted.

Chloe would like nothing more than to please Lex with her mouth. Suck him inside as far as he would go and let him fill her mouth with his come. And then wait for him to command her to swallow.

“Yes, the idea of me sucking your cock excites me.” She didn’t lick her lips, she was careful not to. She didn’t look at him though she wanted to. Chloe kept her neck and arms tense as she looked up at the ceiling.

“If it pleases you I will do it as often as you command, however you command.” She paused. Chloe thought that she had said enough on the subject. Especially since she wasn’t sure if it would help her standing with Lex. He would either allow her to suck him off or he wouldn’t. His decision had been made long before she entered the penthouse.

The only question was: did he want her to beg for it?

lj715
2nd July 2006, 19:24
OH.....MY...GOD!!!! How could you leave it there!?! Cruel, simply cruel. I don't think there's a thing I can say about this chapter that I haven't said yet. Hot & .......hot.
More please.

kimmie
2nd July 2006, 19:28
I can't believe you would leave it there. You are making US beg for it, I'm not too proud, I'll beg, please, please, please, please, please don't leave it there are you trying to send me insane! It was WOW!

-K-

somethingeasy
2nd July 2006, 19:36
wow! that was just... AMAZING! I should have figured out that Lex would act like the complete controlling dom bastard not only during their 'private time' but even when he wasn't around to keep an eye on Chloe. He actually hired someone to keep a close watch and surveillance on Chloe during all times and all days. It makes me wonder if he got as possessive with all his other subs, or is Chloe singled out for this 'special treatment' because she seems to be such a perfect sub to his perfect dom?

Chloe really is an amazing sub. She actually makes the art of submission into an Olympic sport, containing all her muscles, reactions and responses with complete control and perfection. It's interesting how allowing someone else complete control over her body enabled and drove her to strive for complete control over her own self. Its as if... the competition for complete command over her own body pushed her into establishing mastery over herself at a near super-human level.

One thing that does bother me about the arrangement between Lex and Chloe is the fact that Chloe is not allowed to date anyone. Isn't she allowed to enjoy the company of other men? Perhaps not fuck them, but just go out for dinner, theatre and dancing? Sex is not the only thing that makes up a satisfying relationship, usually it's not even the most important thing.. So why is Chloe depriving herself of all the other aspects of being in a relationship just to enjoy kinky hot sex with Lex....

I just realized what I wrote... Kinky, hot Lex sex is more than enough to make up for all the boring stuff like companionship, sharing.... love?

(sigh) confusing choices... It makes me wonder if Lex is allowed to date, or whether its an informal part of the agreement that Lex will not date other women while he's 'seeing' Chloe.

I'm looking forward to seeing Chloe finally gain some gratification from this relationship. That's my not-too-subtle way of saying 'bring on the smut'. I'm looking really forward to upcoming chapters.

At this point, the two of them are still quite cold and callous (in their feelings) towards each other. It's a business arrangement that involved sexual favours instead of money. But no affection.. It makes me wonder whether there is even a chance for feelings to start rising up between them. At this point it seems like getting emotionally involved would actually be a deal-breaker between them. If either one of them happens to admit to affectionate feelings, the other will probably go seeking another sexual partner.

Makes me look all the more forward to seeing who falls first. Someone is going to fall right?
Bring on the angst!!! :D

asharnanae
2nd July 2006, 19:37
now you know... i didnt think a fic could get more sumttasically better than "smut and almost nothing but' oh boy was i wrong!

this is like a dirty sexy gourgous version of birthday, xmas and bliss all roled into one!

fantastic!

letia84
2nd July 2006, 20:20
You two are evil :devil: But I love you for it. :evil:

I was hoping CHloe wouldn't be so dumd as to break the biggest rule of them all. She has really trained her self in this one to be stiff as board when need.

I'm having a hard time thinking about how painful the postions must be to sit in but then the rewards if Lex is happy have to be worth the wait.

I can't wait to see what happens next. All this teasing of power Chloe is painful. Lex has really trained himself as well to hold out to the very end.

More...more...PLEASE:yeahbaby:

hfce
2nd July 2006, 21:24
DAMN!!! That is all I am saying. One more time DAMN!! :drool2: Yeah more please...
:beg:



Hope ;)

Gaia
2nd July 2006, 22:03
heiheihei...you left it there? Now that is just cruel.....

lilinny
2nd July 2006, 23:42
Wow!! Those mind games. Now I'm getting the feeling that you're the dom and we're the subs. Interesting chapter. I shall wait for the next chapter.

Btab12207
3rd July 2006, 00:14
WOW! I can't believe you left it there. That was an AMAZING update. I can't wait for more. Soon? The last wait was torture!

westwingwolf
3rd July 2006, 00:45
Wow this is good, it's the whole anticipation thing that makes it so wonderful. I'm amazed Chloe can stand it.

Willower
3rd July 2006, 00:54
that. was. so. WRONG! Leaving it right there. I'm still in shock, still scrolling up and down the page looking for the rest. dom lex = super hot. i really respect chloe as a sub, she really puts a lot of work into it and it seem super difficult; the whole holding liquid in your mouth thing, I could not do. great update

pipersmum
3rd July 2006, 02:54
You can't leave it there OMG!!! You have to come back and update please!

You guys are doing a fantastic job I am loving this story :)

spaceboi's pixie
3rd July 2006, 06:25
love it want more please

autumngold
3rd July 2006, 06:54
I'm almost starting to feel sorry for Chloe. Of course, if being denied pleasure while giving it to someone else turns her on then good for her. Thank you so much for the update!! I can't wait for your next chapter!!

maire78
3rd July 2006, 09:44
Great chapter! (its extremely cruel of you to end it there though). Please update soon.

gecko
3rd July 2006, 10:35
great update, this just keeps getting better an better, great work can't wait for the next update

teejei
3rd July 2006, 13:25
oh. my. gawd. :drool:

where the hell have i been?!! how could i've missed this?!! argh!!! :nono:

...

more please. :devil:

sydsvaughn
3rd July 2006, 16:16
Yep, this is definintely keeping my interest ... 'peaked.' :) You guys always handle this stuff so well--and sooo steamy!

SaraC

Mel
3rd July 2006, 17:27
An update as soon as possible is about the only thing that will keep me from having a heartattack right now.
But seriously.
GREAT JOB.
And also.
Update.

holmes
3rd July 2006, 17:48
Oh my gawd you've done it again. Left me speechless and very frustrated. A cliffhanger is nobody's friend!!!

Well done but please update soon!!

Or you'll be punished!!

Evelyn
4th July 2006, 00:51
Holy crap, that was amazing! I think we are the ones who are begging for more. Excellent update, as always, ladies. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Shanna
4th July 2006, 03:30
You two are cruel. Mean and cruel, and...and...Chlex Smut Withholders!!!! Yeah, that's what you are! Darn it.
:wth:

Can someone get out the rule book, please? Isn't it against NS guidelines to withhold Chlex smut? It has to be in the bylaws somewhere. I know it has to say it! This is NS, gosh darn it! Home of Chlex Smutaholics Anonymous. I know I'm not the only member. (Looks around accusingly)
:rules:
Ladies, you are soooooo lucky I love your fics. I'll wait, but not patiently. I think I'll go play with Thora while you work on the smut, k?

xxasaxx
4th July 2006, 05:39
you can't leave it there!!!:rules::drool2::drool2:

GivenToFly
4th July 2006, 07:43
I could sit here and rant about how utterly cruel you gals are, but I think you already know that.

So I'll rave instead and say that I'm loving this story so far. And that was an excellent update.

BellaMR
5th July 2006, 06:45
You girls are so mean. I'm sure your evil enough to make Chloe beg for it too and continue the torture for us all.
Well bring it on. I can't wait for more.

teb85
5th July 2006, 12:22
OMG ,This is one Hot fic ! Love it and can't wait for more !!

Skye
6th July 2006, 01:04
OMG is right. You two are very evil masterminds knowing that you can end it there leaving us hanging like that. Now we are reduced to begging for more. For shame!!!

teejei
6th July 2006, 06:35
first of all, dunno if this comment is a bit OT, but...

i'm currently reading Narcissus in Chains by Laurell Hamilton. mainly has themes of D/S and S/M. such a good coincidence that i discovered this fic at almost the same time as i started reading the book.

and oh yeah, right now i'm at a coffeeshop, enjoying its hotspot, ruining my underwear here at the NC-17 section.

so there. :devil:

p.s. thanks to Xevaral and her Pluie Calme for putting the idea of Anita Blake in my head. :blinkkiss

Dark Topaz
7th July 2006, 09:21
can't wait more

peggy
7th July 2006, 15:24
Very very good story, please come back soon wih an update

letia84
7th July 2006, 16:25
you can't leave it there!!!:rules::drool2::drool2:
Again I 2nd this plea.

I'm ready for the smut. :yeahbaby:

sexi_angel_babee
7th July 2006, 17:13
hmmmm... this fic... it intrigues me... therefore i love it!!! :D i'm not familiar with the world of doms and subs, but it's very interesting. i didn't know there was such a intricate relationship between the two. very good job! i looooove it. i really appreciate how lex and chloe respect eachother and care for eachother in the midst of the 'roleplaying'. i can't wait for their relationship to progress to another level, where they will find satisfaction in being an equal in a relationship. tee hee... GREAT JOB! but please update sooon... i've been waiting for so long... :( and i was being so good. ;)

celticangel
7th July 2006, 19:30
Please, please update!!!!

slayer44
7th July 2006, 19:34
:o, you can't just leave it there! That's a horrible thing to do. The way you two write is completely different than so many others out there. You put Chlex in a very interesting light.

randa
7th July 2006, 22:00
uhn...well thats one way to get my attention.
more soon...


randa

whodunit??
8th July 2006, 13:05
i cannot believe that you ended it there!!! that is just plain mean!!! but on the otherhand i loved how lex got all angry at the possibility that chloe might have broken one of his rules. it was very interesting, his reaction to it. i cannot wait for another update, so please post soon!!!

heather

BlueSabby
8th July 2006, 21:02
A/N: Sabby: Here's what you've been waiting for. And it's downright amusing how you all are begging before Chloe even gets to do it *G*. Have fun with this one and don't forget to leave feedback.

A/N: Blue: The resolution, so to speak, of their latest meeting awaits you. Just something to keep in mind, not every session will be tied up so prettily as this one.



Lex smirked at the eagerness in her voice. He was sure he would enjoy the experience very much. Once it came to pass. He denied himself the pleasure as much as her for the moment. Satisfaction was always so much sweeter when delayed.

“You may relax your head.”

He lifted his leg and stepped back over her body, then went to return the glass to the kitchen, leaving her on the floor without instructions for the moment. He took his time refilling the glass to about a quarter. Lex didn't hurry in finishing his drink and then made sure to wash the glass before he left it in the sink. He dried his hands and hung the towel back in its place before he returned to the living room.

The mind games in an arrangement were often more dangerous and taxing than what was done to the body. Chloe had suspected that Lex would be well versed in them and he did not disappoint.

Her first dom had left her alone for an extended period of time during their first meeting. Chloe really had no clue how long it had been. It may have been two hours but it easily could have been more. Time had no real substance during sessions. It slipped away and sped up with the same ease.

She could hear Lex moving around in the penthouse and waited for his return. At least her neck was feeling better. Her mind, however, was jumping from one topic to the next. She now had a sneaking suspicion that this would end exactly the same way their other meeting had. With no actual touch passing between them.

“Raise your knees and spread your legs, then lift your hips,” he commanded as he approached her.

Lex stepped around her until he was standing between her legs, looking down between them. They were mirroring the exact position of their first meeting. He wanted to spark her memories now that he prepared to get deeper into the game.

This position was easier now that she didn’t have her heels on. However, it was the end of a long day and she wasn’t sure how long she’d be able to hold it. Still, she gracefully obeyed his command.

She waited for him to tell her to spread herself open to him. But perhaps Lex had other things in mind.

Lex's gaze was firmly fixed on her cunt as he spoke to her. Her body was his possession now and he enjoyed inspecting his possessions thoroughly.

“I see you've taken my recommendation about a closer shave. I approve. Spread your legs wider.”

He wanted her completely exposed to his view.

“You're dripping wet. It doesn't take a lot to get you turned on, does it? Do you enjoy being so completely exposed? Do you like the feeling of somebody's eyes focused on your cunt, seeing it glisten with your juices?”

He stepped closer, ignoring the twinge of his hard cock as he moved. The display she put on was taking its toll on him and he would need release soon.

“Your body is begging for release already. Do you feel the urge to beg for it yet? To ask my permission to achieve orgasm in any way it would please me?”

Chloe remembered to spread her legs wider, as wide as she could get them without teetering over and collapsing into a heap on Lex’s expensive wooden floors.

The questions came quicker and quicker, one after another. He gave her no chance to answer them. Clearly, the most important point was at the end.

Yes, were the answers to all of his questions. Especially about begging. But some doms only wanted their subs to use it as a last resort. It was seen as classless and that the dom wasn’t giving the sub what he or she needed.

“Lex, yes. Yes to all of it. But it’s not the feel of someone’s eyes, it’s the feel of yours,” she said. “I want to beg for release. Beg for you to let me come while you watch, while you are the cause of it. But only if it’s what you want. Only when you are ready for me to get to that point.” Her voice was breathless and she knew how desperate she sounded. If only he would let her get herself off when she went home.

But it wasn’t about her pleasure, her release, it was about his. She was here for him. And would do anything to please him. Including deny herself what she thought she needed.

The desperation in her voice made his cock jump inside his pants. Up to this point he had planned to uphold the physical distance between them. His touch was a privilege she had to earn. However, his own body was demanding attention. Lex took a deep breath to regain control of his urges and concentrated on his next command.

“Touch yourself. Feel how wet you are and play with your cunt. Stroke your clit and fuck yourself with your fingers.” He paused for the fraction of a second as he stepped closer yet. “But don't come.”

“Thank you, Lex.” She said it before she thought about it. Though, it might be more like torture than pleasure if he didn’t allow her to come. But she wouldn’t think about that now.

She had to think about staying in position and fucking herself with one hand. She supported herself on her right arm and placed her left hand on her cunt.

Chloe made sure to keep her legs wide so Lex could see what she was doing. As soon as her fingers touched her cunt she wanted to cry out and move against them but she held still.

They slid against her dripping pussy and Chloe rubbed her clit with her thumb. However, she could feel her orgasm approaching after a few moments of this so she stopped doing it.

Instead, she worked two fingers inside. Chloe didn’t move her hips so it was only a small relief. But, she did start to move her fingers in and out of her pussy.

After a few more strokes, she added a third finger. Her eyes were opened and looking upwards, her chest was heaving and she was panting. But she said nothing and moved nothing else but her hand.

Lex devoured her body with his eyes as she masturbated herself more and more harshly. His cock was throbbing with the need for release. “You have permission to move your hips and speak freely.”

He silently opened the button to his pants and waited for her first outcry to lower his zipper unnoticed watching her face contort in pleasure/pain as she stared at the ceiling.

The first noise that was wrenched from Chloe’s throat wasn’t a word. She cried out loudly as her hips were finally allowed to help her in order to pleasure Lex. And herself. Once given permission to move them, Chloe couldn’t stop them.

In addition to moving them forward, she also angled them upwards as her finger moved downwards. She didn’t know how long she could last like this, but she needed to hit herself in a particular spot. But, not too hard. It wouldn’t please Lex for her to come just yet.

Chloe worried about the puddle of wine that had formed under her arm. It was crucial in supporting her body and if she slipped on it….

“Oh, fuck, yes,” she moaned as she flicked her clit. Her hips levering up at the contact. Her whole body was jerking with effort and she could feel the droplets of sweat forming on her hairline and then sliding down her face.

When she realized that she was speaking again, she wasn’t surprised to find that Lex’s name was interspersed with the curses and begging that flew out of her lips. A good dom could have you thinking about him or her without even realizing it. Saying Lex’s name was now part of her sub programming, the same as wearing no underwear and kneeling before him.

Her voice rose in volume and pitch every time she said his name and Chloe realized that she was very, very close to coming. She continued to stare up at the ceiling and focused on slowing down. First her hips, and then her fingers.

As he watched her approach orgasm once again, fingers pumping in and out of her pussy, he took his cock out and bit down hard on the inside of his cheek to stave off any involuntary noise. “Drop your hand and get up on your knees,” he instructed roughly.

He was so close to coming, it wouldn't take much. He wanted her in a very specific position when that happened. Lex was planning to illustrate his ownership of her with a very pointed display. Keeping a firm grip on the base of his cock, he waited for Chloe to obey his command.

Chloe’s hand slid out of her body and fell to the floor. Her knuckles rapped painfully on the wood but she ignored the feeling that shot up her arm. Her hips returned gracefully to the floor and her knees came back together.

She pulled her upper body forward and then positioned herself so she was on her knees in front of Lex. Instead of coming face to face, as it were, with Lex’s clothed erection, she saw his cock had been taken out of his pants. He was fully erect and droplets had formed on the tip.

Once her hands were behind her back, Lex said, “Open your mouth wide.”

Lex’s voice was tight and rough and caused a shot of desire to run through her. Chloe opened her mouth, her jaw as wide as she could get it.

It didn't take more than a few strokes before he came with a strained grunt. Lex kept jerking his dick until the last spurt of his come had landed in her wide open mouth. With a sigh, he stopped his ministrations and tucked himself back into his slacks.

Looking down at her face, he gave a nod of approval at her obedience as she remained in position, holding his come on her tongue while she waited for his next command. “Swallow.”

He kept his eyes on her face as she obeyed his command, pleasure tingling anew at the display of her unquestioning obedience and submission. The knowledge of his power over her and the sight of her so completely given in to her own lust and baser instincts was heady.

The urge to lick her lips after she swallowed him down had to be checked. It felt like it needed to be done in order to show Lex that she had enjoyed swallowing his come. It had slipped down her throat, warm and slightly salty.

It was a sign that she had pleased him and Chloe felt pride that she had been able to do so. Especially since he had been so cross with her when she had arrived at his apartment. Yes, she still wanted to come. But she could resist her urges for Lex.

Lex relaxed his stance and took a step back. “Look at me,” he commanded. “Did you enjoy swallowing my come? Do you like the taste of it sliding down your throat?” His voice was smooth as silk as he drawled out the questions.

He knew she was still on edge, having purposely made her stop just before she achieved orgasm. His mind was not made up yet if he wanted to allow her release or not.

“Yes, Lex,” she answered, honestly. “I like the way that you taste. Plus, it shows me that I pleased you.”

Chloe watched as Lex looked her body up and down. She could only imagine how she looked. She had always been pale but it was probably even more noticeable with the red wine splashed across her body as she kneeled on the deep colored wood.

“Yes, your obedience pleases me.” He stated neutrally as he circled her once more. “You may use both hands to please yourself now. But don't make yourself come.”

After he gave the instruction, he pried himself away from the delicious sight of her body and left for the kitchen once again.

“And don't just play with your cunt.” He raised his voice as he passed the sink and retrieved the open Merlot from the fridge. The bottle was still a quarter full.

Now that his immediate desire had been satisfied, he could concentrate more fully on the game. He was not done with her yet.

Chloe kept her eyes straight ahead. She could see into the kitchen from here, but she couldn’t see Lex. Her breasts had been neglected up until this point so she’d fix that.

She wasn’t sure if it would please Lex for her to make sounds so she kept her mouth shut for now. She cupped her breasts and ran her thumbs over her nipples in tight, harsh circles.

It wasn’t enough friction so she started to use the palms of her hands.

Lex came out of the kitchen but was still not directly in her line of sight.

Her pussy was demanding attention now, the friction she had given her breasts had caused a tug between her legs.

As she pinched her nipple with her left hand, her right traveled down until it was between her legs. Chloe slipped three fingers inside and began pumping them up and down.

He made his way behind her, making sure to stay out of her direct line of vision. “You're allowed to speak,” he said as he came to a halt directly behind her, looking down.

She was a vision as she kneeled before him, holding the position perfectly as she touched herself, forcing the need for release to the surface only to push it back through sheer force of will. He enjoyed watching her silent struggle, but he wanted to hear the noises she made as she tortured herself.

Looking down at her fingers as they disappeared inside her cunt he ordered, “Add another finger, you will get used to being spread wide for my pleasure.”

A long groan was pulled out of her mouth and she added a fourth finger. It had been a long while since she’d pushed her physical limits.

She kept her wrist moving, strong thrusts upwards while her hips remained motionless. “Oh, god, tight.” She increased the force of her wrist, imagining how Lex would take her the first time with his cock.

A dull ache spread inside of her and she gasped. “Hurts, Lex,” she groaned. “Oh, god, harder, please harder.”

Chloe’s mind had always been active and now she imagined that it wasn’t her hand inside of her, but Lex. His dick ramming into her as she tried to please him.

“Let me please you,” she whimpered.

Lex ignored her desperate pleas and stayed motionless behind her as he watched her abandoning all common sense to fuck herself on her own fingers.

“Tell me how you've been used before. What did you do to please your last master and what you had done to you by his hand.”

He wanted her mind immersed in the idea of submission and obedience and this was also a first step to erase the traces of her last dom by outdoing the unknown man in his own game.

“I would suck him off,” she responded. Now imagining performing the act for Lex. “He liked to bind me and keep me in positions for hours.”

Her muscles had screamed for the first few months she’d been with him but she’d slowly become used to it. She’d then excelled at it.

“He let his friends watch me perform and pose for him.” There had been all night parties where she had been the main attraction.

“He fucked my cunt with his cock, his fist and toys. Once he even used the neck of a bottle. I came hard every time like he commanded.” Her hands were moving furiously over and inside of her body.

She removed the hand in her cunt and began to rub her nipple, spreading her juices on her chest. The hand that had been at her breast moved inside of her cunt.

“He took my ass repeatedly,” she reported. “He broke me in.” She remembered not being able to sit the next day. “He had me fitted for a dildo to make more room in my ass. It was placed inside of me each day until I was as wide as he wanted.”

Chloe could feel that she was starting to come again. She let up on her breast a little bit and slowed down her fingers.

“It pleased him when I begged for mercy.” Wax had been involved when she screamed the loudest for his favor. “And it pleased him when others could see how well he used me.”

Lex listened carefully to her recount, making note of everything that had been done to her so he could take it further. When she fell silent, he took a steadying breath before he spoke. Now came the crucial point to break any and all ties to her old dom.

“And despite all this, he failed to give you what you need. He failed to be your rightful master. His ownership of you was a mere illusion.” He let the words sink in as he stood still behind her. The bottle was still in his hand and he held it securely by its neck as he looked down at Chloe. “You were never really his or you would not have been able to walk away from him. He used you for his pleasure, but he failed to make you his.”

His eyes bored into the back of her head as she continued to fuck herself on her hand while she listened to his words, watching and waiting for her reaction to them.

Chloe slowed her hands even more as she considered what Lex had said. She had never thought of the failure of her arrangement in such a way. A dom was responsible for and to his sub. But her former dom had not remembered that.

He could see her hands slowing their movements and knew that he had pushed the right buttons. Now all he had to do was to continue pushing them.

“That won't be the case with me,” he stated authoritatively.

”I will push you past all the limits you set in your mind that you think you can't overcome. I will turn you into a vessel for my pleasure and you will gain ultimate release from serving me. You will forget everything and anyone else until your body and mind are filled with nothing but my ownership of you.”

Chloe was making helpless little noises in the back of her throat as she rocked her hand inside of her body. The thought of everything that Lex had put forth before her excited her in an almost unbearable fashion.

She harshly rubbed her nipple and when it became too painful, she switched to the other one. Chloe wanted to push herself to the ultimate limit for Lex. She couldn’t wait for it.

Now she forced her hand deeper inside of her body, as she imagined Lex would do. Slight tremors were starting below the surface of her skin.

Lex paused in his speech to inhale and lifted the bottle until it was placed directly over her kneeling form. “You are mine to control, mine to do with as I please and you will gain your ultimate release in your submission to me alone.”

His eyes fixed firmly on the woman before him, he raised his voice to a commanding bark. “Come, now!” After he spoke the words he waited for the first shudders, then upended the bottle.

Lex watched the wine spill over her head, down her front and between her wide spread legs in a perverted christening of her status.

Upon his command, Chloe had pressed her thumb onto her clit. She had barely touched herself when her cunt closed viciously over her fingers that were inside her body. She kept moving them as she started to scream.

Chloe screamed Lex’s name until her throat was raw from the force of her cries. She noticed that a liquid was covering her but paid no mind to it. She continued to come for Lex.

Once the first wave had started to taper off, she pressed her hand harshly deeper inside of her body as she twisted her nipple. The orgasm that had started to fade roared back with a vengeance.

“I’m yours, yours Lex,” she cried. Chloe noticed that tears were once again sliding down her face, the experience was quickly overwhelming her. Her internal muscles clenched around her fingers again. “I submit,” she whimpered out.

She was magnificent in her climax. Lex barely remembered to keep hold of the bottle as his eyes drank in the vision of her total immersion into pleasure and his cock was rock hard once more.

As she first screamed, then whimpered her total submission to him, he almost came in his pants. The rush of power that surged through him was strong enough to make him sway on his feet. Lex held on to his control by a thin margin as his eyes stayed riveted on the woman before him, riding out her orgasm.

“Mine,” he growled.

“Yours,” Chloe panted out as her orgasm finally ended. She was gasping for breath and her throat was dry from all of the screaming that she had done.

Her body stilled but she kept her hands firmly where they were until Lex gave her further instruction. Even after her release, she still felt keyed up and on edge. Chloe was at the ready for anything else Lex had in mind for her.

He took another deep breath and willed his own arousal back under control. Remembering the bottle in his hand, he finally shook himself completely from his stupor.

“Assume your default position,” he instructed her calmly, then went back to the kitchen to get rid of the bottle.

He stood over the sink for a moment and willed down his remaining arousal with the vilest thoughts his mind could conjure on short notice. His gaze fell on the clock on the wall and he could see that it was getting late. He'd abandoned his work for this meeting and had some work yet to do.

Nodding to himself, he made his way to the study next to his bedroom and retrieved his laptop. A last test of her submission before he would send her home.

He returned to the living room to find her kneeling inside the messy puddle of wine that he was sure was mixed with her own juices. Her hands were tidily clasped behind her back and she was facing forward, her thighs spread wide.

Passing her, he moved on to the desk and set up his laptop.

“Clean up the mess you've made. Use your mouth to do it.”

His words were devoid of any emotion, voicing the command blandly. While he started calling up the files he would need, he glanced at her from the corner of his eyes.

Chloe looked down first at the place where she was kneeling and assessed how much wine had been spilled. She also tried to come up with a plan that would take the least amount of time possible. But she still feared that she would be there for at least an hour.

She decided to start where she was and then work her way back to her previous position. Chloe bent over and placed her hands on either side of the puddle. When the taste of the wine hit her tongue, she had to admit that it was a very good vintage.

Lex watched her for a moment as she got down on all fours, putting her ass nicely on display as she started licking and sucking the wine with obscene little slurping noises.

Satisfied that she was showing perfect obedience, he turned to his work completely, ignoring the naked woman on his floor as he concentrated on reports and flow charts. His gaze strayed to her only a few times as she fulfilled her task, crawling around on his floor.

letia84
8th July 2006, 21:34
Ekkk!:eek: You updated. WOOHOO and :yeahbaby:


“And despite all this, he failed to give you what you need. He failed to be your rightful master. His ownership of you was a mere illusion.” He let the words sink in as he stood still behind her. The bottle was still in his hand and he held it securely by its neck as he looked down at Chloe. “You were never really his or you would not have been able to walk away from him. He used you for his pleasure, but he failed to make you his.”

His eyes bored into the back of her head as she continued to fuck herself on her hand while she listened to his words, watching and waiting for her reaction to them.

Chloe slowed her hands even more as she considered what Lex had said. She had never thought of the failure of her arrangement in such a way. A dom was responsible for and to his sub. But her former dom had not remembered that.

He could see her hands slowing their movements and knew that he had pushed the right buttons. Now all he had to do was to continue pushing them.

“That won't be the case with me,” he stated authoritatively.

”I will push you past all the limits you set in your mind that you think you can't overcome. I will turn you into a vessel for my pleasure and you will gain ultimate release from serving me. You will forget everything and anyone else until your body and mind are filled with nothing but my ownership of you.”
Everything in this chapter was so on point but this last bit was the best for me. Really showing what this arrangement is going to be about . Chloe’s other dom tried but some how he wasn't there.

Lex I doubt there will have any short comings with this matter. If anything he is and overachiever and his will power despite his need to please him self in order to control her is amazing.

This is a great account of sub and dom relationships. Great update. Poor Chloe will have to work hard but thinks she's overjoyed to do it. When he poured that wine on her I was just waiting for him to make her clean it up. More soon master BlueSabby.

lj715
8th July 2006, 21:54
I am convinced you are trying to kill me here. OH...MY...GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Each chapter is more WOW than the last!!!!! I like the point that Lex brought up about Chloe's old dom not being what she really needed. Couldn't wait for this update & I'm NOT, NOT, NOT disappointed one little bit. Can't wait for more!

somethingeasy
8th July 2006, 21:54
ooookay, that was seriously creepy. Quite honestly, when Bluesabby said that there wasn't going to be that much pain or punishment involved in the fic, I believed the whole thing would turn out relatively tame (as tame as hot, kinky sex can get that is). I NEVER could have imagined the depths of depravity a pair could authors could cook up... And most amazing of all, this level of depravity was acheived without the use or pain or even any external devices and toys. Everything was in the magnificient power of suggestion. Lex makes a truly excellent dom, and if I approved of the idea of owning people, I would have to admit that Lex actually deserves to own Chloe


”I will push you past all the limits you set in your mind that you think you can't overcome. I will turn you into a vessel for my pleasure and you will gain ultimate release from serving me. You will forget everything and anyone else until your body and mind are filled with nothing but my ownership of you.”

The whole ownership thing really bothered me in the last chapter. I felt like Lex was getting a little too possessive of Chloe. Making her do strenous and Olympic level acrobatics in the bedroom is one thing, but taking complete control over her personal life seemed a little too much.

But this chapter made everything just... well... perfectly reasonable. Chloe is actually depending on Lex to be a good owner, just as she is trying out her limits to be the most perfect and precious possible possession.

All those details about her last dom were undoubtedly amazing. And I loved the fact that Lex was taking notes about the ways he could out-do the last fellow. Is Chloe's former dom going to make an appearance in the fic? I imagine that possessing Chloe can get rather addictive, I'm surprised the last dom let her get away without putting up a good long fight over the issue. Just makes me shiver at the thought of Lex getting 'accustomed' to Chloe. What happens when she wants to put an end to it, and he is not anywhere near ready to let go? That would result in one seriously scary scenario.

Of course, I'm presuming that a sufficient level of 'Chloe addiction' is going to occur later ;)


“Clean up the mess you've made. Use your mouth to do it.”

Really creepy. Lex's semi-abusive words and actions would have really turned me off, but for the fact that Chloe is definitely not a victim in this scenario. I don't know how Bluesabby manage to put Chloe through such a torturous scene without making her seem weak and victimized... Instead she seems incredible, strong, magnificient. How do BlueSabby DO THAT???!!!

please write more, I need more magnificient sub/dom action :D

oh and plot... plotting is also very, very important ;)

xxasaxx
8th July 2006, 22:24
Please, Please Please update this asap!!!!:drool2::drool2::drool2:

Willower
8th July 2006, 22:45
all i can say right now is whoa.

kimmie
8th July 2006, 23:44
Good God, i really don't know what to say.

I've never read anything like this, its amazing.

Can't wait for the next installment!

-K-

happybum
9th July 2006, 00:16
Wow..now ladies you guys are going to have to surpass this chapter. This is very educational. =] keep dishing out some more hot scenes

hfce
9th July 2006, 02:51
DAMN!! I need a ciggy after that. My heart was pounding through the whole chapter. I thought Lex wouldn't let her get off but I am glad she got her orgasm. ;)


Hope :)

tiger04
9th July 2006, 04:37
WOW! I am glad that Lex is pleased by Chloe. I was afraid that he was going to leave her wanting again. Can hardly wait for the next update!

sydsvaughn
9th July 2006, 07:50
You know ... I'm getting an education from this fic... and it's quite interesting as well as extremely heated. I'm in awe of how you both make the characters really work in these dom/sub roles ... and make it sexy as hell. Another great chapter!

Plus, there's just something about a posessive Lex that I adore...

SaraC

westwingwolf
9th July 2006, 09:57
Um ... WOW!... and ... YEAH!... and oooh! Possessive Lex! and that's pretty much all my mind can conjure for the moment.

lilinny
9th July 2006, 17:25
“Clean up the mess you've made. Use your mouth to do it.”

This part bothered me, strange, isn't it? Great chapter.

Btab12207
9th July 2006, 20:42
Oh wow...I'm at a loss for words. That was...oh god. Fantastic chapter. CAN'T wait for the next update.

autumngold
9th July 2006, 22:56
Excellent update!! Can't wait for more!!

BellaMR
9th July 2006, 23:24
:drool2: :worship: :drool2:

Excellant work ladies. I glad Chloe got a little satisfaction, but I can't wait till the touching begins.

Gaia
10th July 2006, 14:48
can there really be anthing to be said? Don't think so....

Scorch
10th July 2006, 15:20
I find myself thoroughly enjoying this story. I penned a Pride & Prejudice sub/dom bondage fic, and can therefore appreciate how difficult it can be to find the balance.

There are so many ways to overstep the fine line between devilish erotica and simple porn, that it can often become blurred, if you understand that. You've captured the 'game' beautifully and gave a nice dark tone by leaving out romance, fluffy love and kisses etc etc.

Excellent work. I'm looking forward to much, much more :yeahbaby:

Hugs, S xxx

FroggyJump
10th July 2006, 15:29
What praise could I give you that hasn't already been said...nothing that I can think of. I really really like that Lex's dominance isn't something that is going to be coming up only when he is conflicted in some way. This is a part of him that he is comfortable with, and has no hang ups about it is great. I also love how immediate Chloe's submission is. I think you two did well in choosing to disclose another side of a dom/sub relation, it does not need to be seen as someone taking ultimate control of another for their own pleasure, and that a sub is confined to a meek, staved for attention person.

I am sure that after reading the chapters that you guys put up that there is not a dry seat on this board. I always enjoy your collaborations and definitely look forward to delving more into this arrangement with everyone else.



Chloe looked down first at the place where she was kneeling and assessed how much wine had been spilled. She also tried to come up with a plan that would take the least amount of time possible. But she still feared that she would be there for at least an hour.

She decided to start where she was and then work her way back to her previous position. Chloe bent over and placed her hands on either side of the puddle. When the taste of the wine hit her tongue, she had to admit that it was a very good vintage.

This part is something that I have only now come back to. I liked this thought process, you didn't slip into a normal thought pattern. It stayed firmly in the role of sub. I don't now if that made any sense at all if it did great, if it didn't better luck next time.

pipersmum
10th July 2006, 18:22
How do you do it each time you update is better than the last I just adore this story and I am dying for more!!!

Ainur
10th July 2006, 19:22
You know what I found interesting that even though Lex thought that Chloe was breaking the rules he never thought about gettting rid of her. I really like that. Everything in this chapter and in this story is amazing. Great job!

fleyval
11th July 2006, 08:07
Wow... that was a one damn hot chapter!!!! Love it!!!! I cannot wait for the next one!

Kitty Black Cat
11th July 2006, 19:37
I've read all the chapters of your story so far and I'd like to say first that I will continue reading it. Now you're probably wondering why i'm saying that. You see, for some unknown reasons, I really find it difficult to read this fic. REally difficult. It's like there is something deep inside of me rebelling against some things you write which is kind of weird for me 'cause I'm really open, especially about fanfics, and i'm not the rebelling type. And I accept whatever is good for each people. But this fic just makes me react stongly. Which is actually a really good point. I believe that no matter what strong reaction you get is good and that medium to none reaction is bad. Although I find it hard to read it, I must admit that you put the characters and the whole sub/dom thing extrodinarly well. I never in all my life even though of a sub/dom relationship that went as far as that! It's like I was a kid before and I just grew up! It's actually really good. Maybe it's hard for me to read a sumissive / dominant relationship pushed so far but I believe that it's what makes your fic so good and totally unique. I mean honestly I haven't read anything like it before and I,ve been reading lots of fanfics for over 4 years! I want to congratulate you on that by the way 'cause sometimes, although I love a lot of fanfics, it's really hard to surprise me. But you did it! Also I wanted to say that you write beautifully, you have a great style and I'll read more of you as soon as you write more!

skauble
12th July 2006, 01:04
I believe that no matter what strong reaction you get is good and that medium to none reaction is bad. Although I find it hard to read it, I must admit that you put the characters and the whole sub/dom thing extrodinarly well.


I agree with you that strong emotion of any kind beats an apathetic response. I also wanted to say that I think it's so cool that you're giving something new a try. But I do have to wonder if it makes me a pervert that I thought we were still at the really tame part of the story. lolol Actually, it's probably not worth wondering...I'm pretty sure I'm a perv. ;)



As for the fic, ladies, I'm really enjoying it. The D/S relationship is, IMHO, fairly misunderstood. It's really not that different from any other relationship. What turns a person on is what turns them on. There's something to be said for giving up control and letting someone else guide everything. It's a heady sense of freedom. By the same token it can be exhilirating to have absolute control over at least one thing in life.

I know that the prevailing opinion in society is that you have to get back exactly what you put into something or it's considered inequitable, but if both people enjoy it good for them. I loathe getting massages yet I enjoy giving them. So when I give one I get pleasure even though I never get a message in return. To me it's still equal even though we're both bringing something different to the table.

Besides, like Chloe said -


It was exciting to please you in the middle of the day, in my place of business and to be denied what I wanted because it was contrary to your wishes.

That's the best part about a D/S relationship. You can totally be engaging in it *all* the time. Simply obeying or knowing that you're being obeyed can be the equivilant of being felt up in more standard relationships.

Of course, my favorite thing about this story is that you haven't distracted us from the delicious smut by trying to justify the lifestyle. It just is what it is and you move on from there.

I can't wait for more.

I know this wouldn't be hot at all, but when I read that Lex was making her clean up all the wine by mouth the first thing I thought would be that it would be hilarious if all the wine made her drunk and she ended up puking on Lex. Behold the reason I try to avoid writing smut. lolol

More please.

~Sarah~

peggy
12th July 2006, 09:05
excellent fic, please update soon

Emsta
13th July 2006, 05:49
god I love you gusy

somethingeasy
14th July 2006, 23:10
this is driving me nuts.. please,please, pretty please I need some more plotting and progress on this fic. I need more dialogue, more acrobatics, more arrangement chlex!!!

I'm just waiting with high-wired anticipation for the feelings and emotions to start building up. Or perhaps for some other type of conflict to come in. I want to see the scene when Chloe is finally forced to use a safety word. I cannot imagine under what circumstances such a thing would happen, but I'm sure BlueSabby can manage to make Lex sink down to levels that even Chloe would refuse to follow ;)

Also curious... Did Chloe have a chance to have a good long ranting session against the club manager who just meekly handed over her HIGHLY confidential file to Lex? Granted it turned out great for her, but there are some principles involved here.

please write more

BlueSabby
16th July 2006, 20:08
A/N: Blue: I have to say how much I'm enjoying the debate that's going on. We appreciate that we're getting a discussion started. Whether you like the fic, hate it, think we're doing a good job with the characters or butchering them, thanks for the feedback. Having said that, both Sabby and I *expect* to lose some readers in the next few months. Now....Here's Clarky!

A/N:Sabby: Like Blue said, we expect to lose some peeps on the way. Like skauble said, this is still relatively 'tame'. We're working our way up the latter of extreme rung by rung and well, we'll see what happens to the audience as we do. *g* Still we love and crave all the feedback we get and always appreciate concrit and opinions.

Without further ado....

~*~*~

Chloe shook her head as Clark recounted some of Pete’s latest antics. He’d just had a baby with his wife and Clark had come back from visiting him. He lived in Utah, of all places, now. And had reported to Clark that not only was he not Mormon but he was sure that he, his wife and child were the only black people within a fifty mile radius.

But, his architecture firm had placed him there so they’d gone. Clark reported that the house that they lived in was “sick” and that Pete seemed happy.

Picking up her glass of wine, Chloe said, “I’m glad that he seems happy.” She had always liked Pete and thought it a shame that she’d had to hurt him when they were younger. But, he had bounced back quite nicely, meeting his wife when he was a sophomore in college.

As she sipped her wine, she thought something was wrong with it. Then realized that it didn’t taste like wood. Her last experience with the liquid had had a lasting effect on her.

Her body was starting to get ideas that were not good to have being that she was sitting across from Clark. They were in one of the nicer restaurants in Metropolis. She sat in the booth of their table while Clark sat across from her in his chair.

The ridiculous glasses that he’d taken to wearing adorned his face and Chloe tried to focus on what he was saying.

“Then he gave me the kid, sorry Bethany,” Clark said, remembering to use the baby’s name, “and I swear Chloe, I’ve never been afraid of dropping something so much in my life.”

She chuckled as she imagined how terrified Clark would have looked holding the tiny infant.

Lex looked up from his vantage point at a corner table and enjoyed the clear view he had at the couple one floor above.

The way he was seated he could look up the woman's skirt under the table if she spread her legs and he also had a clear line of sight to the guy's lower body if the need for that arose.

Lex took a sip of his scotch and sent off the waiter that had come to his table with instructions to not return until otherwise ordered from across the room.

His gaze slowly went up until he could see the face of the woman as she took a sip of her own drink. Lex could see that her interest in the obviously longwinded story her companion was telling was mostly fleeting.

A smirk crossed his face as he pulled his cell phone out of his pocket and dialed her number. Chloe wouldn't be bored for very much longer. They were going to play a little game.

The ringing was coming from her purse and Chloe gave Clark a chagrined look. “I’m sorry, I have to get it. You know how demanding my clients can be.”

Clark waved her off. She knew that he was used to their lunches being interrupted. Chloe had left him to eat alone more times than she could count. They weren’t really close anymore but did touch base with one another every few months. Old habits died hard.

After a few moments of not being able to find the damn thing, Chloe’s fingers closed around the smooth surface of the phone and she flipped it open. “Hello?”

“Hello, Chloe,” he said smoothly, then immediately fell into the tone of voice he used when in dom mode. “You looked a little bored, trying to entertain yourself in the company of your friend and I have decided that you would spend your time better serving me.”

He paused for a moment, watching her face avidly for her reaction. It was a shame that he couldn't be closer to her, to be able to notice all the subtle nuances, but that couldn't be changed now and he had a perfect view from his spot to see what was going on under the table.

“Put your hands under the table and lift up your skirt until it is up around your waist. You will please yourself in front of Clark.”

Clark was looking over at her, but not really paying attention, when she said, “Yes, I understand,” he sat back in his seat and started to look around the room, trying to entertain himself.

Quickly, Chloe crooked the phone between her ear and her shoulder and then put her hands under the table. She raised her hips up and then slid her skirt up until it was bunched up past her waist.

She hissed when she felt the cool leather hit the skin of her ass and thighs.

Only after she was done, did what Lex was actually saying hit her. She was going to please Lex by pleasing herself in front of Clark. The three of their lives had been intertwined for the past few years.

She also knew that Lex had to know about her past infatuation with Clark that had lasted years.

Lex watched her complete her first task then continued with his instructions.

”You are to make him come inside his pants, but you are not allowed to either touch him, or be touched by him and you won't come before he does. You will not utter his name. You are not allowed to speak my name, either.”

His cock was already rising in interest at the thought of what she would do to obey his command. She would be utterly humiliated in front of the other man unless she managed to fulfill his order. The feeling of pure power surged through him as he kept watching his submissive take in his orders.

Chloe looked back over at Clark. She’d been his first kiss. He’d been her first love. After that, everything between them had gotten screwed up over alliances, secrets and feelings for other people. But she’d never pushed their relationship this far.

Clark had never wanted her. Would she be able to do this?

Of course she would. It was to please Lex and she would not fail. She was a sensual, sexy woman. Clark was only a man. She could manipulate a man. He was no different than the rest of them. Except Lex.

“If you fail to make him come, or if he leaves the table before your task is completed, you will be punished. I will be watching the entire time and I will be able to tell if you succeeded or not.”

With that he pushed the disconnect button and returned his cell phone to his jacket pocket. With a smirk, he picked up his glass of scotch and leaned back to enjoy the show about to commence.

“Ok,” Chloe said, talking to the dead line. “Just tell him that these things take time.” She caught Clark’s eyes. “Especially since I just got the account today,” she rolled her eyes and he laughed.

“Right,” she said, “bye.”

She flipped the phone closed. “Sorry about that,” she said. She picked up her glass of wine and started to formulate a plan.

Chloe let another ten minutes or so go by before making her first move. She’d already started thinking about Lex watching them. About how much he would enjoy what she was doing for him. It made her hot and her hips were already starting to move under the table. She spread her legs wide, knowing that he had to be close. He had to be able to see her.

As Clark continued to speak, Chloe took off her suit jacket. His eyes briefly glanced down at her hardened nipples but he composed himself again quickly. What a good little boy he was.

She held Clark’s gaze as she braced her hands against the edge of the table and started to move her hips against the leather seat. “Oh.” She moaned the syllable and closed her eyes.

It was best to just go at it and field Clark’s questions as they came, she didn’t think this would take very long.

Clark's eyes widened as he watched Chloe's weird movement and heard the small moan from her mouth.

“C--Chloe?” he asked hesitantly.

His friend was behaving very oddly and Clark got a flashback to something that had happened years ago. When Chloe had been high on endorphins because of the weird alien parasite. She'd made the exact same noises when she'd practically seduced him in a corner booth of the Talon. “Are you alright?” His voice was filled with concern for his old friend.

“Yes,” she moaned. “God, yes,” she pitched her voice lower and bit down on her bottom lip. She kept her right hand on the table but moved the left to her blouse.

If Lex wanted to watch, he would have made sure that no one else could see. She was his and no one else would get to see her. So, she didn’t have any qualms about unbuttoning her shirt.

She only undid the buttons that were in the way of her putting her hand in her shirt. Once they were undone, she eased her hand inside the fabric and tweaked her nipple. Her hips jerked forward and she cursed again.

“So wet,” she moaned. And it was true. She was pleasing Lex and that was all she needed to know in order for her body to respond. He was watching her, his eyes no doubt focused on her bare cunt.

She opened her eyes and blinked once before looking over at Clark. His eyes were wide and his mouth was open. He looked almost undone. She took her hands off of the table and then unbuttoned the rest of her shirt. Her breasts bounced a little from the motion that her body was making as she moved her hips.

“Chloe!” He called out her name, scandalized by her actions.

She was practically, well, masturbating in front of him. “Stop it, please!”

But despite his protest, he couldn't look away from her hands and his pants tightened around his growing erection. Chloe was a beautiful woman and the sight of her, coupled with the sounds she was emitting made him undeniably hard.

Almost unconsciously, he shifted closer, torn between reaching out to close her shirt and cover her breasts and reaching out to just touch the soft mounds of milky white flesh.

He inhaled a sharp breath as he shifted yet closer and whispered. “What are you doing? What's gotten into you, Chloe?”

Lex followed the proceedings avidly from the floor below, taking in Chloe's flushed face and growing arousal as much as he could from his vantage point. He could clearly see that Clark Kent wasn't unaffected by her little display and Lex's eyes narrowed as the man shifted closer to his sub.

His hand tightened on the glass of scotch he was holding. If the other man tried touching what was his, this game would end immediately and he would break up the meeting between those two within five minutes. No one was allowed to touch her aside from him. His eyes stayed focused on the pair, not willing to miss even the slightest move on either of their parts.

“Nothing,” she answered. If she didn’t say anything, she figured that Clark might leave to get help. She needed to show him that she was still herself…..sort of.

She arched her neck, knowing that it would push her breasts out even more. Clark had been staring at them and, through the bottom of her eyelids, she could see that he still was.

Her hands cupped her breasts and she moaned. Her nipples were hard and already painful. Chloe clumsily dipped her hand into her wine glass and then moistened her nipple with it. She put her fingers in her mouth and then sucked on the liquid.

“I just need to come. Hard. I need to come hard so fucking badly.” One of her hands dipped below the table. “Watch. You can watch me come.”

Before seeing if Clark had listened, she started to finger herself. Just a little and with one finger. No need to start out with all cylinders. Clark wasn’t going anywhere and she knew that Lex would like it better if she took her time.

“Chloe,” her name came out in a strangled groan.

This was incredible. The woman that used to be his best friend in high school was sitting not even two foot apart from him and masturbating herself. They were in public! Anyone could come to their table or just see them!

Clark looked around in a panic and noticed that from their position, none of the other tables were visible. For being in a public place, they were very much alone. The only other table in their corner of the balcony was empty.

He licked his suddenly dry lips.

“Chloe,” he said again, his voice husky as his eyes turned back to her.

His x-ray vision kicked in unexpectedly as his gaze roamed down her half naked body and was obstructed by the surface of the table. As his focus came back to see what was going on underneath, he stifled another strangled groan.

She was moving a single finger in and out of her pussy in a slow thrusting motion and for the first time in years, Clark had trouble controlling his heat vision. His cock was so hard it was a miracle it didn't burst through the seams of his pants. “God, you're so hot,” he whispered in awe.

She had him. And she knew it. He wasn’t going to leave. His voice had dropped a few octaves and if he was going to go for help it would have happened already.

“Do you like watching me,” she asked, breathlessly. She saw Clark nod dumbly and she increased the speed of her hips. She still had one finger inside of her pussy and she thrust it in a few more times before pulling it out.

Chloe licked her lips and then sucked her finger into her mouth. She moaned around the digit and licked it clean. She grabbed both of her breasts and massaged the flesh before taking her shirt off completely.

When she lifted her hips up a little, she moaned as her bare skin was painfully separated from the leather. Two fingers were immediately filling her cunt now. She jerked her hips hard and bent her knee until it rested against the edge of the table. It moved a little but she ignored that.

“Fuck, fuck, fuuuuuck,” she grunted each word as she thrust her hips up and pushed her fingers deeper inside.

Clark's eyes nearly bugged out and his cock started throbbing painfully inside his pants. He wanted to reach out and massage those beautiful breasts, replace his fingers with hers on her pussy and screw morals.

However, those very same morals held him back. He couldn't just let go of his conscience and technically, she hadn't even given any sign that she wanted to be touched by him, so he wasn't sure if he was allowed.

He bit his bottom lip hard and tried to will his arousal to go away. It was impossible confronted with the sight and sound of Chloe as she was getting herself off beneath the table. Clark fought his indecent desire and tried to force himself to make Chloe stop, however no words left his mouth as he kept watching her fingers move in and out of her pussy under the table.

His x-ray vision kept fading in and out as he fought the heat building behind his eyes and he couldn't take it anymore. But instead of looking away, he shifted his chair back and stood up from the table.

His eyes were riveted on Chloe's body as he moved around and settled down next to her in the booth. As if of its own volition, his arm pushed back the table to get a better view at what she was doing.

Lex's eyes were beginning to hurt with the intensity of his gaze as he kept staring at the couple above. He was halfway out of his chair as he saw Clark moving from his chair to sit next to Chloe. When he was sure that the other man didn't touch her, however, he settled back. Waiting.

Anger was slowly building up inside him at the audacity of the other man to get closer. He hadn't seen Chloe's lips move to instruct him to do so, which meant Clark had just assumed his presence was wanted near her.

Lex's gaze hardened as he kept watching the proceedings above and below the table, his drink forgotten.
Chloe looked down at her own fingers pumping in and out of her body. She looked back up at Clark and while she was still looking at him, she slid another finger inside.

He groaned and shifted around in his seat even more. “It feels so good. I need it hard.” She increased the force again and started to pitch her hips up again.

Chloe gasped harshly as her fingers brushed against her sweet spot. “Oh, I’m gonna come.” She saw that Clark was looking back up at her face and then back down at her tits. She glanced over to his lap and saw that he was fully erect.

“You’re hard,” she said. “Come with me. Oh, god, come.” She let up just a little on herself. Clark was looking around again. “No one can see,” she said. Except Lex. Lex was watching and he wanted Clark to come first.

She waited until he was watching her and then said, “Show me your cock.”

“Oh god, Chloe!”

Clark shook his head in denial. Denial of her demand, denial of the entire situation, denial of the fact that he was so close to exploding inside his pants. “Please.”

His plea came out broken and he reached down to press the heel of his hand against his cock trying to stave off his arousal. It was a big mistake. Instead of putting a damper on his excitement, the touch added the last bit needed to send him over the edge and he came violently. His whole body shuddered as his orgasm raced through him and filled his pants with sticky heat.

As Clark’s head was thrown back and his eyes closed, Chloe smiled. She watched him lose it completely in front of her. He was jerking and saying her name. But it didn’t do anything for her. Her pleasure came from knowing that she had done as she was instructed.

Chloe looked away from Clark and then started to fuck herself in earnest. She changed her position a little, spreading her legs even more, wanting to give Lex a good view, wherever he was.

Her hand became more sure and she tossed her head back as she fingered her clit with her other hand. “Yes,” her voice came out in a guttural tone.

She was close…just a few more….

Chloe stopped abruptly. She wanted to be fully bare for Lex. She whimpered as she extracted her hand from her body and then pushed her skirt down and off.

Now totally naked, she went back to work. Clark was panting beside her but she ignored him. Hands back in place, she spread her legs again. Her eyes touched on her phone sitting on the table. She grabbed the phone with one of her hands and pressed a few of the buttons and then placed it against her clit, never stopping the motion of her other hand…then she waited.

Lex watched the scene come to an end from below, relieved that Chloe had fulfilled her task. He smirked as he watched Clark jerk back into reality the moment she pressed her cell phone to her wet pussy, ignoring Clark completely. The brunette hurriedly stood from the table and practically ran for the bathroom, valiantly trying to cover the wet spot at the front of his crème colored pants.

A vicious smirk curled the corners of his lips. He knew what she wanted but he let her wait for it for another moment. Lex slowly pulled out his cell phone once again and dialed Chloe's number then pushed the connect button.

He watched avidly as she started shuddering and if he strained his ears he could hear her outcries of pleasure from where he sat.

When the cell phone started to vibrate, Chloe came. She cried out loudly, partly in victory and partly because she needed to. As it was before, her orgasm was almost crushing. “Oh, oh, oh, fuck.” Distantly, she realized that her voice was colored with amazement. Her cunt was contracting rhythmically around her fingers and she tried to prolong her pleasure.

She screamed when she felt the cell phone vibrating again. Chloe hadn’t noticed that it had stopped until it started again. She withdrew her fingers once her cunt was done with them and placed them in her mouth as she held the cell phone against her clit.

Chloe wasn’t ready to be done and her lower body kept pressing up against the vibrating phone. Her internal muscles clenched one last time and Chloe slumped forward a little, her forehead now resting against the table.

The phone moved in her hand again. She flipped the phone open, she could see her wetness coated it, and then pressed it to her ear. “Yes.”

His tone was soft and approving as he said, “You did very well, Chloe. I am pleased with you and looking forward to our next meeting.”

That said, he hung up the phone and went back to his drink, finishing it off. His gaze remained on Chloe, enjoying the view of her post orgasm. She truly was a magnificent submissive. Lex would enjoy her for a very long time and in every way possible.

tbc...

lilinny
16th July 2006, 20:39
Jeez...it's like watching a car accident. Fantastic chapter.

peapod
16th July 2006, 20:46
I keep telling myself to stop reading, but I just can't. Wonderful chapter, can't wait for more

westwingwolf
16th July 2006, 20:47
Wow, I'm not sure what I found hotter. The fact that Lex was watching from a place unknown to Chloe. The idea of that Lex has so much power of Chloe and in this case Clark as well. That this was done relatively in public. But I think it was something about the phone that sold me on the whole idea. Very well done, and eagerly awaiting the next post.

kimmie
16th July 2006, 21:00
i swear, that was magnificent! Clark coming in his pants, ha thats the closest he'll ever get to Chloe! i don't know what else to say except WOW!

-K-

somethingeasy
16th July 2006, 21:13
Blue: I have to say how much I'm enjoying the debate that's going on. We appreciate that we're getting a discussion started. Whether you like the fic, hate it, think we're doing a good job with the characters or butchering them, thanks for the feedback. Having said that, both Sabby and I *expect* to lose some readers in the next few months. Now....Here's Clarky!

Sabby: Like Blue said, we expect to lose some peeps on the way. Like skauble said, this is still relatively 'tame'. We're working our way up the latter of extreme rung by rung and well, we'll see what happens to the audience as we do. *g* Still we love and crave all the feedback we get and always appreciate concrit and opinions.

I'm really glad BlueSabby provided us with that warning up there. I'm an angst junkie, but I'm also an eternal optimist. Which means, I love watching characters suffer and humiliate themselves, but I always hold firm to the hope of a happy ending.

But now I'm getting that there is probably NOT going to be a happy ending in this story. No emotional attachments that are going to grow, no satisfaction beyond orgasms, and no trustworthy relationship beyond that of an owner and his very beautiful, precious pet.

And I'm completely hooked. There is a very strange kind of attraction for me in this fic... I find the whole dom/sub thing to be a little degrading and not particularly arousing. That is only my own personal thing, the smut is beautifully written and almost hypnotizing to read through.

Despite my lack of arousal, I'm still hopelessly addicted to this fic... I find it.. compelling, mesmerizing, fascinating... and that is a great deal more than I can say for most of the fics available on NS Forum.

Even if there's never going to be love or happiness between the Chlexy couple, I still want to see how far along their relationship goes. More than anything, I want to see what is the thing that is finally going to compell Chloe to use her safeword and say 'I don't... I won't do that'. Even more than that... I want to see how far she's willing to go BEFORE using the safeword...


His cock was already rising in interest at the thought of what she would do to obey his command. She would be utterly humiliated in front of the other man unless she managed to fulfill his order. The feeling of pure power surged through him as he kept watching his submissive take in his orders.

I thought the last chapter was depraved, and I get the feeling I'm going to be using that phrase a LOT in this fic. But this... At least last time Chloe debased herself (licking the floor clean) in the privacy of her dom's home. But this time, its not only in the midst of company, but in the company of a childhood friend... a highly judgemental and rather narrow-minded childhood friend.

It was almost as if Lex was setting her up to destroy herself. And all this purely because 'he could'.


His hand tightened on the glass of scotch he was holding. If the other man tried touching what was his, this game would end immediately and he would break up the meeting between those two within five minutes. No one was allowed to touch her aside from him. His eyes stayed focused on the pair, not willing to miss even the slightest move on either of their parts.

Despite the general coldness (emotionally speaking of course) in their relationship, it seems like Lex is developing an attachment to, or a possessiveness of his latest acquisition. His aversion to 'allowing' Clark to touch Chloe, not to mention the trouble he undoubtedly went through to make sure Chloe and Clark got a private table away from the prying eyes around the restaurant.


His x-ray vision kept fading in and out as he fought the heat building behind his eyes and he couldn't take it anymore. But instead of looking away, he shifted his chair back and stood up from the table.

I liked that little detail you added about Clark almost losing control completely. It's the little touches in this fic that make such implausible scenarios seem so... REAL and genuine, sincere and true. Very impressive!


A vicious smirk curled the corners of his lips. He knew what she wanted but he let her wait for it for another moment. Lex slowly pulled out his cell phone once again and dialed Chloe's number then pushed the connect button.

He watched avidly as she started shuddering and if he strained his ears he could hear her outcries of pleasure from where he sat.

When the cell phone started to vibrate, Chloe came. She cried out loudly, partly in victory and partly because she needed to. As it was before, her orgasm was almost crushing. “Oh, oh, oh, fuck.” Distantly, she realized that her voice was colored with amazement. Her cunt was contracting rhythmically around her fingers and she tried to prolong her pleasure.

The ending was absolutely brilliant. One last final way for Chloe to figure out how to hand over yet more control and power to Lex, and let HIM bring her to her final orgasm. The line in bold really helps to emphasize how much of a control-freak bastard Lex really is.

Chloe is undoubtedly amazing, and Lex is going to have serious problems letting go of her later. I am assuming that Chloe is going to want to break it off eventually, but Lex's extreme possessiveness is going to come into play in a very hostile and negative manner.

I find the thought of it quite chilling... Looking SO forward to that happening :D


That said, he hung up the phone and went back to his drink, finishing it off. His gaze remained on Chloe, enjoying the view of her post orgasm. She truly was a magnificent submissive. Lex would enjoy her for a very long time and in every way possible.

heh heh heh... and the addiction has started.

BellaMR
16th July 2006, 23:26
That was magnificent. I can't wait to see how Chloe acts when Clark gets back to the table. I can see her blinking innocently and asking if he's alright. Pretending that nothing happened.

When will he touch her???

pipersmum
17th July 2006, 00:24
Wasn't sure when you said you were putting Clark into the mix but I have to say that was HOT!!! I loved Chloe making Clark cum in his pants and Lex wanting her to do that with Clark in the first place and in public! You two have great minds for storys and I am loving this as I have said before. I don't know how you do it but each chapter is better than the one before. Hangon didn't I say that last time?? See you even have me repeating myself.

I can't wait for more I hope it's soon.

~Diane x~

autumngold
17th July 2006, 01:11
Excellent chapter!! I'm so glad that it wasn't Clark that excited Chloe, but Lex!! Thank you so much for the new chapter!! I really like how possessive Lex is of Chloe, and how he doesn't want anyone to touch her but him!! Can't wait for your next update!!

crazychlexer
17th July 2006, 01:46
MORE MORE MORE!!!!:drool2: REMEMBER GIRLZ IS AGAINST THE RULEZ !!!! U MUST CONTINUE!!!:rules:

lj715
17th July 2006, 03:15
WOW! WOW!!! and WOW!!! That's all I have to say. Oh, that and MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

hfce
17th July 2006, 05:24
That was wow :drool2: I can't believe she did this in public and in front of Clark. Wow amazing job and I am in for the long haul damn it. LOL! :D


Hope :)

whodunit??
17th July 2006, 06:06
this fic is almost like a double edged sword. i dont even know if that would be a correct analogy, but its so good yet so peculiar. i mean i love this fic. the characters while not how i picture them are so fully developed and real and the situation, while i'm not one for sub/dom i find myself unwilling to stop reading it. i liked that you were able to make it clear that for chloe it wasn't the idea that she could turn clark and and get him off that turned her on but that lex was watching and had ordered her to do it that got her off. it was perfect. i can't wait for the next update!!

heather

Mel
17th July 2006, 06:10
So this is pretty much the best ever.
Be glad that I don't own you girls; as if I did, I would probably force you to update every 5 minutes.
Until I die.

xxasaxx
17th July 2006, 06:18
that was an uncomfortable chapter-in a good way!!!!:devil:


please continue ASAP!!!!

teb85
18th July 2006, 00:04
OMG that was HOT !!! I can't wait for next update !!

georgee5
18th July 2006, 04:14
OK, so I am not going to abandon you. Whereas (good word) I am not a sub myself, that doesn't mean I can't enjoy a story that the main protagonist gets exactly what she wants. So I say, go for it Blue and Sabby. Bring out your inner Doms and use Chloe and Lex for your sadistic, erotic, kinky pleasure.

sydsvaughn
18th July 2006, 06:01
Wow. Now that was a chapter. Like the majority of people, this sub/dom really isn't that appealing to me personally, but you guys have a talent for writing it so beautifully (I know, strange contradiction in words there) that I am hooked and will continue to be hooked until we come to the bitter, or not so sweet end.

I really find myself intrigued and slightly off put by this fic--which all means I'll be coming back for more and like always, begging you for updates!

SaraC

uncfaery
22nd July 2006, 22:59
I don't think I've taken the time to review this yet. Usually I'm so stunned at the end of the chapters that I can't think coherently, much less actually, you know, type. But I think that it's time I put forth the effort to be a good little reviewer.

I've quietly *cough*lurkingly*cough* read all of your stories here on NS (both the joint endeavors and the individual) and I have to honestly say that this one is by far my favorite. I think it has to do with the darker side of both Lex and Chloe (and even Clark from this last chapter) that you are showing us. I love this because you aren't glossing things over, your building up to it and showing us all the nuances of the "arrangement" and I adore that.

I very much look forward to more of this and just wanted to let you know that there is at least one reader that you don't have to worry about loosing along the way. I don't see much of anything stopping me from reading this.

Lily
23rd July 2006, 01:30
Can I just say how much I'm loving this fic! While I admit I'm a bit of a romantic sap, this is wonderful... and let's face it, while some mushiness can be nice (and there are plenty of other wonderful fics that takes care of that) Lex is always meant to be in control!

BlueSabby
23rd July 2006, 16:41
A/N: Sabby: Okay for all those of you who wanted Clark reaction...sorry. Blue mentioned earlier that not all sessions will have a nicely packaged wrap up and well Clark wasn't really our concern *G* So here be the next session and the next rung on the ladder of pervdom. Have fun!

A/N: Blue: So beginith the weird chapter breaks. Please get used to them. Enjoy!



Lex tinkered with the toys he had chosen for their entertainment today, checking once again if they were thoroughly clean and ready for use. He was meticulous about these things.

A few hours ago he'd called Chloe and asked her to come to the club after she got off work, giving her a little leeway in when she showed up, since he hadn't checked her schedule for the day.

Running his fingers over the length of one of the vibrators he'd picked out, a small smile curled up on his lips. He was reminded of Chloe's rather unconventional use of her cell phone two days ago, as she used its vibration setting to get off after she'd completed her task.

Lex had been surprised at her ready obedience when he'd given her that particular order. Clark Kent had been her childhood crush, he knew that. After her little display, it was highly unlikely that the two would meet for a while, or that their friendship would ever be the same again.

It had also given Lex a little thrill to utterly humiliate the man that had called himself his best-friend then turned around and proverbially kicked him in the balls.

When he was done checking over the toys one more time, he wandered back over to the comfortable sitting arrangement and sank into the deep leather chair with a sigh. He put thoughts of the past firmly out of his mind and let the anticipation for what was going to happen build.

Chloe strode into the club, this time from a different entrance, however. She had come in under the stairs, where she had first spied Lex a few weeks ago. Now that she was his, she was considered a VIP and he’d instructed her to use the appropriate entrance.

A man was quickly at her side, instructing her that Mr. Luthor was awaiting her presence. She was about to follow him when a figure by one of the bars caught her eye. “In one moment,” she murmured.

It was The Manager and Chloe was still fairly ticked off that he’d handed her file over to Lex.

She sidled up to him and took the drink off of the bar that he’d been about to pick up. She downed the double shot in one gulp and then slammed it down on the bar. “We need to talk.”

Even though she was a sub, she wasn’t one now. At this particular moment, she was a highly pissed off paying member of the association. And she would have to be dealt with. And appeased.

~~
As Chloe walked down the expensively décored hallway, one of the workers was no longer at her side. The Manager was. They’d struck a deal. But, once she entered the room in which Lex was waiting for her, she was a sub and would not be able to speak out of turn.

That’s why she had brought The Manager with her. He’d explain the deal that they’d brokered.

He opened the door for her and revealed a simple, yet elegant room. Lex was seated on a leather chair. Chloe walked over to him and kneeled at his feet, assuming her sub position.

The Manager could see that Lex was surprised at her entrance. He usually did not escort the members to their rooms. “Your sub and I had a conversation regarding my inappropriate use of her file.” Gary decided it was best to just get to it and then get out.

“In exchange for her silence on the matter, neither you nor she will pay your membership fees for the next two years.” He had expected that that was where their bargaining would end. He had not been so lucky.

“You will also not pay for the use of the rooms or any other of the amenities on site.” Chloe Sullivan had really stuck it to him with that one. The going rates on the private rooms coupled with the other tastes of Lex….well, this was going to cost him a pretty penny.

“Enjoy your time here.” He nodded at Lex and then quickly left the room.

Lex looked at Gary's retreating back, then down at Chloe who was kneeling at his feet, demure in her position and facing forward, waiting for his first order.

He shook his head and grinned as he got up from his chair. “You really are something, Chloe.”

Lex paced around her until he stood directly behind her. “But tell me, are you really that upset about me getting your file? After all, it is the reason you are mine now. Was the retribution really necessary?”

Not that he was complaining. A lot of his money went into the club and arranging to see the file had also cost him quite a bit, now those expenses would be nicely recompensated. Gary had to be biting himself hard in his office right now.

Chloe knew that her move was a dangerous one. If it upset Lex, there was no telling how he would react to it. However, Chloe was not one to let such a trespass go unpunished.

“It is the principle of the matter, Lex,” she said. “I am far from upset by my current arrangement.” It was true, Lex buying off The Manager for her file had been the best thing that had happened to her all year. But that didn’t make it right.

“However, The Manager and the club swear by their confidentiality clauses. It could not go unaddressed.” Chloe thought of the hundreds of files that were housed in locked cabinets in the building. “If he and the club were not called to task for what they had done, where would it stop? What would be stopping him from selling other files or equally damning materials?”

Lex nodded in acceptance of her explanation. It was true that one could never make sure enough that any files that held some kind of incriminating information were safe and didn't fall into the wrong hands. That's why his own file was comparatively thin and anonymous.

“Very well,” he said finally, then put the matter aside for the moment.

“I have plans for you today.” He let his voice drop into a neutral tone, completely sinking into his dom mode. “But first, I want you to tell me how you liked the last task I gave you.”

Whenever Chloe thought back to what she’d done a few days ago, it got her hot. It didn’t matter how wrong it had been, how it had tanked her relationship with Clark forever, she still got the telltale signs of arousal between her thighs.

“I enjoyed it greatly,” she answered, honestly. “It was freeing to get off in public, not caring who saw.” She knew that Lex would keep her sheltered from prying eyes, so that wasn’t a real concern. “I knew that you were controlling everything and it put me at ease.”

“Getting Clark off against his will was a heady feeling.” She remembered the strangled noise of protest he’d made. “I get wet thinking about it every time.” He hadn’t come back to the table and he’d called her the next day. She feigned ignorance, pretending that the last she remembered was their conversation and then she’d blinked and he’d been gone.

“What made it so heady?” Lex asked as he stepped over to the toys he was planning to use once the conversational part was over.

He had a feeling there'd been some deeply hidden resentment towards Clark on her part, for the fact that he'd strung her along and played with her, then returned to Lana at the first sign of interest like an oversized puppy dog with its favorite chew toy.

“Taking control of him for you,” she answered. “Knowing that I was finally the one with the upper hand.”

She thought a little more about it. Chloe knew that Lex wanted access not only to her body but her mind as well.

“He was the one who dictated our relationship for so long. Taking me for granted.” She paused, trying to get into the long buried feelings she had for Clark. “It was nice to have him be so helpless and humiliated for a change.”

“It was like getting back at him. For both of us.” Chloe didn’t smile but she could hear the pleased tone in her voice. “I know that he wanted to touch me, to take me, but I’m only for you. I almost wish that he had tried, just so I could have reacted to it.”

Lex turned around from the table. “Look at me,” he ordered and once she'd craned her neck around enough for her to meet his eyes continued, “I was close by the entire time, if he had tried to touch you, I would have ended the assignment immediately. No one is allowed to touch your body without my say so.”

Of course she hadn't known at the time how close he'd been. But that wasn't the point. What was important was that she trusted him in her submission to not only control her, but take care of her in any given situation. From her last statement, he was beginning to think that she hadn't quite reached that level of trust yet. But that was for another time. It gave him an idea though.

“Face forward,” he ordered then went about getting another piece of equipment that he hadn't thought to use before.

Lex’s tone had changed slightly and she wasn’t sure what he was thinking or feeling. Which could be a dangerous situation for a sub. Chloe liked to be surprised by what her dom had in store for her. But there would always be a part of her that worried about it, too. She was a very contradictory person sometimes.

Chloe quickly turned her head around and faced the chair again. She heard Lex moving around behind her but she could still tell that he was a few feet away, not yet approaching her. Or telling her to disrobe. She wondered if he intended to use her somehow while she was still clothed.

Lex set up the camera and tripod that were stored in one of the wall cabinets, then checked to make sure an empty tape was inside and that everything was ready for recording.

As his fingers ran over the plastic casing, a plan was already formulating in his mind about how he would use the tape once it was done to test and secure Chloe's trust in him the next time they met.

Shaking his head, he put the thought aside and concentrated on their current session. There was a lot in store for her today, which was why they had met after work, so that time wouldn't be an issue.

With everything set up and the focus adjusted to take in the free space in the middle of the room, Lex went back to the table with the assortment of toys he'd chosen.

“Stand up and come here.”

Chloe rose to her feet in the way that she’d practiced over and over again through the years. She kept her hands clasped behind her back as she stood and then turned towards Lex.

She smoothly walked over to Lex and kept her eyes averted from his face. She stared at the wall behind him and waited for further instruction.

She saw Lex tilt his head downwards, instructing her to look where he indicated.

There was a small table filled with toys between their bodies. Chloe took in the toys slowly.

A number of dildos of varying materials, colors and sizes. They were lined up by increasing length. Smallest to her right and largest to her left. Next to the last dildo there was a penis shaped gag. Nipple clamps were in the right hand corner of the table and the attachable weights that went along with them were right next to them, shining under the lights of the room.

Lex’s hands were resting on the table and close to his left hand there was a wooden paddle. Leather cuffs were placed next to the paddle. A bar was attached to the cuffs. It looked to be about three feet long but Chloe knew that there were certain bars that could be made to be any length up to six feet.

Lex watched her take in the toys and wondered what was going on in her head as she took a long look at each one of them. He would find out soon enough.

“Take off your clothes, then go and kneel over there, facing the camera.”

His eyes drank in her face as she reacted to the words. She hadn't been aware of the camera so far and now he wondered how she would take the idea of being recorded in her total submission, knowing that he could show the tape to anyone he chose.

Chloe knew that her face had not remained as impassive as she would have liked. When Lex did not immediately reprimand her for that, she knew that he had a specific plan for her and would not be deterred from it.

A camera. To her knowledge a dom had never used that with her. Doms were notoriously hush hush about their practices. Yes, they often put on shows for each other. But that was different. There was not a record of what was done and how. This was most unusual, to say the least.

She quickly pulled her shirt over her head and dropped it to the floor. Her pants followed and she kicked off her shoes. Her heart rate had picked up. She was anxious to see what Lex had in mind for her. She also wondered how long the videotape was.

Once she was naked, she walked over to the camera. She got down on her knees in the usual position. Her head was now on the same level as the lens. But, she made sure to stay far enough away so her whole body would be captured by the camera.

Lex stepped away from the table and moved around her and to the camera. He pushed the button and checked that the red LED was blinking to show it was recording.

“Today I will thoroughly test your body's capabilities to serve my pleasure.” He spoke with a completely neutral tone. “I will use the toys I have shown you to find your limits so I can see what I have to build on.”

He stayed behind the camera as he took in her reaction to that information. His own anticipation was building as he thought about everything he planned to do with her in the next few hours.

First, the preliminaries had to be taken care of though. “Have you cleaned yourself today?”

“I took a shower this morning,” she said. Chloe was answering Lex while still thinking about what he had told her.

The phrases test your body's capabilities and see what I have to build on kept repeating in her mind. This was the usual course when a sub was taken over by a new dom. However, being that she had only switched doms once, and had not even carried out the arrangement with her second, Chloe had never been through this before.

She’d spoken with other subs in the club and they had told her that it could be a grueling process. It was worth it in the end but your body was ruined when you woke up the next morning. It could take hours and sometimes was done over the course of a few days.

Lex took their arrangement seriously and would, no doubt, have a clear plan as to what he wanted to do with her body. Chloe knew that she was in for a great amount of pain and pleasure for the next few hours. She was scared of it and welcomed it at the same time.

Lex nodded and stepped away from the camera to circle around her, making sure he was not caught on film above the waist. “And have you cleaned yourself inside as well?”

He liked his subs to be just as meticulously clean as his toys before he used them which was the reason he had prepared the bathroom in case she was not.

“No, Lex,” she replied. Chloe had not expected this. He had never instructed her that she was to clean herself thoroughly before each of their meetings. Had he mentioned that, it would have already been done.

“I have not cleaned myself so thoroughly on the inside as well as would please you, I think.” This was new ground for her.

He had somewhat expected that answer, so nodded and stepped back a little. “There's a bathroom through that door.” He pointed at the second door leading out of the suite.

“You will find a set for a vaginal douche, as well as two enemas, one filled with soap water, the other with pure water. Use all of them and clean yourself thoroughly. Take a shower and wash your hair when you're done, then come back here.”

After his instructions, it occurred to him that she might not know all of the proceedings. Her previous dom had failed to adhere to the most basic rules in their relationship, so it wouldn't surprise Lex if the man had neglected more intricate parts of her training as well. “Are you unsure about the use of any of the materials?”

While still on her knees, Chloe thought the question over. She was fairly certain that she knew how to use everything that Lex had just explained to her. However, if she answered in the affirmative and then came back out, it may anger him.

But that was a chance she was willing to take. She was a grown woman and could certainly figure out how to properly cleanse herself inside and out. “No, Lex.”

When Lex was silent, she took that as her cue to go into the bathroom. She stood up again and made her way inside of the room. It was pristine and had all of the materials she would need laid out for her on the counter.

They were laid out in a line and she knew that Lex had set them up in the order he wanted her to use them. One of the enemas was first and it made sense being that it took some time for them to work. Chloe kept the door open so Lex could watch her if he wanted.

Chloe took a deep breath and inserted the enema. There was a fluffy towel on the floor and she kneeled down on it as she waited for it to begin to clean her out. She could feel Lex’s eyes on her from the other room.

It was interesting that even though he had given her such a prosaic task and that it would delay the start of their play that it was exciting her even more.

~~
It was about an hour later when Chloe finally left the bathroom. The enemas had cleaned her out, she’d douched, taken a shower and even washed her hair. She was now clean and empty.

She understood that she was a clean palate for Lex to use. To do what he wanted to her and fill her up with his come. It made sense but she’d never had that experience. She kneeled down again in front of the camera and waited for further instructions. She saw that Lex had turned the camera off. He spoke soon after the red light turned back on.

“I hope that the procedures weren't too uncomfortable, because I expect you to be cleaned inside and out in preparation for all of our meetings from now on.”

He circled around her once more and ambled over to the table, taking his time. Anticipation was like a drug, coursing through his system and giving him the kind of high only the complete control over another person could bring.

“Now that you're clean, we can begin.”

He picked up the gag and checked once more that the rubber penis and leather bridle were pristine. Adjusting the length until most of the gag was on the side she would take in her mouth, he walked up behind her and lowered his arms in front of her face.

“Open your mouth wide,” he commanded.

The girth of the rubber cock was substantial and would get quite uncomfortable after a while. He hadn't been joking when he said he was going to test her limits.

Chloe quickly complied. She had seen how big the gag was when it had been laid out on the table. It concerned her a little. She knew that she was going to be gagged the whole time. And, while she’d given her fair share of blow jobs, she had never been gagged with a huge replica of a penis before.

She was careful to remember to keep her throat as relaxed as possible. Tensing up would only make the situation worse. She knew that Lex would only carry this as far as he thought she could go. He didn’t want to cause her any more pain than was necessary, she was certain of that, so it put her a little more at ease.

The fake cock slid inside of her mouth until it touched the back of her throat. Chloe quickly breathed through her nose so she wouldn’t gag on the toy. She felt Lex fastening it to her but noticed that his fingers never touched her. He had to be a practiced hand at that.

Lex stepped back once the gag was firmly in place. “Are you still able to breathe?” When he received a nod from Chloe, he continued. “Good. This is the test for your mouth. The gag will stay in until I decide to remove it. If I find any teeth marks on the cock inside your mouth after I remove it, you will be severely punished.”

The task was not an easy one, since her jaw was forced to stretch incredibly wide around the toy to begin with and she would have to strain even harder to keep her teeth away from the rubber.

Lex moved back to the table and picked up the spreader bar. He examined the length and made sure that the buckles on the cuffs, as well as the chain links that attached them to the bar were in order.

He'd observed her being able to hold a position for a lengthy amount of time. Her limits in that capability would be tested as well today.

“Sit down properly, legs in front of you,” he instructed as he made his way back to her.

He watched her get into position, then held the bar out towards her. “Spread your legs and fix the cuffs to your ankles, then lie down on your back, hands at your side.”

Chloe’s mind was going to have to be strong today as well as her body. It was one thing to keep in position. It was another to keep in position, do what your dom instructed you and to remember to keep your teeth off of the gag that had been placed in your mouth.

She knew that it would be easy to forget about letting her teeth rest on the gag. She wondered what Lex would consider a severe punishment but didn’t want to find out. Not because she was scared of the pain but because she had no wish to disappoint her dom.

She took the bar out of Lex’s hands and placed it between her legs. Chloe made the cuffs tight on her ankles and then lay down on her back. Her hands placed as Lex had commanded her.

As she moved, her gag shifted a little in her mouth. It had brushed against the back of her throat twice and she had to concentrate on not gagging and keeping her jaw wide.

Lex nudged the toe of his shoe under the bar and lifted it until he could grip it in his hand without having to bend down. When he had a firm hold on it, he raised it higher, until Chloe's legs were forced straight up in the air. The position exposed her and put both her cunt and ass at a perfect angle to be used. “Hold this position.”

He let go of the bar and stepped away from her to make his way back to the table. Standing in front of the remaining toys, he deliberated which one to use first and how to proceed. His mind was easily made up, considering the dildos and vibrators were already sorted by size.

Lex picked up the smallest one and checked it over. It was a thin silver tube, a little rounded at the tip, about seven inches long and not wider than one inch at its base. He didn't consider himself a cruel man, so he would start out easy and gradually work her up to find her limits.

Chloe held her legs up above her body. Ever since she and Lex had made their arrangement, she’d increased her work out at the gym. In addition to going a few nights after work, she now also went during her lunch break.

Primarily, she focused on getting her muscles into shape, she wasn’t looking to lose weight. Her personal trainer was a little confused by the regimen she’d had him set up but it looked as if it was going to pay off.

It was hard enough keeping your legs above your head but to do so with a heavy metal bar and to make sure your body didn’t sway was even harder. Chloe thought that she’d be able to handle it.

She assumed that Lex had gone back to the table. She wondered how he would start out. She focused on keeping her breathing nice and even.

He turned around with the vibrator in hand and simply appreciated the view for a moment. She was completely exposed to the camera, her mouth stretched wide around the gag and legs stretched long toward the ceiling.

Lex stepped up beside her head and looked down at her strained face. “Hold up your hand.”

squeezumstang
23rd July 2006, 17:20
damn. you stopped right there? you guys are killing me. anticipation indeed. love it. may i have another, mistresses?

biscuits
23rd July 2006, 17:24
I am captivated by this new fic of yours. Every update I read leaves me speechless, so I find it hard to comment. It's informative and interesting, and even though I don't enjoy dominance and submission personally, occasionally arousing. You have me hooked to see what happens next.

kimmie
23rd July 2006, 17:53
Oh God! i never know what to say in feedback for this fic. You guys know I love it...right!!! Can't wait for more...

-K-

lj715
23rd July 2006, 17:59
I've been waiting for this update ALL weekend & you end it there!!???!!! The cleaning part was a bit squicky for me but I guess if that's what Lex wants her to do, Chloe has to do it. Can't wait for the next update!

Willower
23rd July 2006, 19:06
no no no no no no. you CANNOT end it there.

xxasaxx
23rd July 2006, 19:22
Oh man!!!! update this soonish please:drool2::drool2:

welshy
23rd July 2006, 19:40
I can't believe you guys stopped it there, I hope there's going to be more soon :blinkkiss

hfce
23rd July 2006, 21:02
Uhh not that I don't appreciate an update. But where is the rest? ;) I want more darn it. Please... :beg:



Hope :)

westwingwolf
23rd July 2006, 22:26
You know I knew that this session was going to take more than one chapter, but I'm still kinda upset that you stopped. Oh the anticipation will be killing me until next time. Great job ladies.

lilinny
23rd July 2006, 23:33
I have the strange feeling that you're testing your fans to see who stops reading this fic. I won't stop I tell you, no matter how strange you are!!!!
Great chapter.

georgee5
24th July 2006, 02:11
Defintely curious about where the heck this is going.

autumngold
24th July 2006, 05:55
You guys are good, you know exactly where to pause your story to keep us all on the edge of our seats!! Excellent update!! Can't wait for your next post!!

whodunit??
24th July 2006, 06:37
Lex’s tone had changed slightly and she wasn’t sure what he was thinking or feeling. Which could be a dangerous situation for a sub. Chloe liked to be surprised by what her dom had in store for her. But there would always be a part of her that worried about it, too. She was a very contradictory person sometimes.

contradictory is an understatement. but man do i love this fic. how do the two of you come up with all of this and seemingly have no problem with keeping it going?? i find it absolutely amazing. i mean the two of your are brilliant. i feel almost like a sub myself constantly having to beg you to update more because i simply cannot get enough. so please, update really soon!!!

heather

Btab12207
24th July 2006, 06:49
OH MY GOD! You guys are so cruel when it comes to this fic. Fantastic update.

BellaMR
24th July 2006, 21:06
Fantastic! I can't wait for more!

darkangel
25th July 2006, 04:23
Any other writer and i would have been grossed out. Great job in handling such a touchy subject.

somethingeasy
26th July 2006, 20:59
Once again, another spectacular and awe-aspiring update. Such a wonderful update to welcome me from my brief time away from NS Forum. I appreciated the fact that Chloe dealt with the indescretions of her Club Manager in this chapter. I was always perfectly aware of the fact that her 'sub attitude' didn't extend anywhere beyond Lex's control and/or proximity, but its always great to see Chloe descending into a witchiness form of asserting herself :)

More than anything else however, I love the attention to detail that's being given in this fic...


That’s why she had brought The Manager with her. He’d explain the deal that they’d brokered.

Dealing with the manager on her own private time is one thing, but informing Lex about how she dealt with the manager would be a delicate matter than needs to be handled carefully. I love the way you made sure to establish Chloe's complete submission to Lex, even to the extent of only indirectly informing him of actions she took for their benefit. Such an amazing and meticulous attention to detail, it takes me breath away.

I'm glad to see the Manager getting hit in a way to make his punishment suit the crime. He allowed himself to get bribed into handing over a file, and now he's losing money for his greed. Perfect punishment :D


She thought a little more about it. Chloe knew that Lex wanted access not only to her body but her mind as well.

The whole 'interrogating Chloe about her feelings and reactions to the last encounter' was fantastic. I keep gaining more respect and appreciation for Lex's abilities as a dom with each passing sentence.


“He was the one who dictated our relationship for so long. Taking me for granted.” She paused, trying to get into the long buried feelings she had for Clark. “It was nice to have him be so helpless and humiliated for a change.”

Lex really cares about Chloe getting maximum pleasure and satisfaction from this arrangement... and he wants to make sure that he satisfies EVERY part of her... this means not only pushing her body, but also stimulating her mind. I was really happy to see that Chloe had managed some form of satisfaction and closure from her 'game' with Clark... but it was still a very risky move on Lex's part, it was quite possible that he could have been sacrificing a valuable friendship in Chloe's life purely for his own satisfaction, and that's a simple abuse of power.

Does he even have the right to demand outright humiliation from Chloe in front of her colleagues... or perhaps clients?


Of course she hadn't known at the time how close he'd been. But that wasn't the point. What was important was that she trusted him in her submission to not only control her, but take care of her in any given situation. From her last statement, he was beginning to think that she hadn't quite reached that level of trust yet. But that was for another time. It gave him an idea though.

I suppose the 'trust' would cover assurance against any mishap that might occur during or as a consequence of their dom/sub relationship. But does the assurance cover emotional security as well as protection from bodily harm? Can he promise not to humiliate her past the point of no return?

I'd like to see how the camera comes into play in this trust excercise :D


The phrases test your body's capabilities and see what I have to build on kept repeating in her mind. This was the usual course when a sub was taken over by a new dom.

Lex took their arrangement seriously and would, no doubt, have a clear plan as to what he wanted to do with her body. Chloe knew that she was in for a great amount of pain and pleasure for the next few hours. She was scared of it and welcomed it at the same time.

wow... these paragraphs frightened me and thrilled me at the same time. I was practically salivating for more by the end of them.


They were laid out in a line and she knew that Lex had set them up in the order he wanted her to use them. One of the enemas was first and it made sense being that it took some time for them to work. Chloe kept the door open so Lex could watch her if he wanted.

Your Lex (as outrageous as he is) seems like a real person to me. And his attention to detail scares me almost as much as your obsessive compulsive need cover EVERY part of the sub/dom relationship. The thought of Lex ordering Chloe to give herself an enema as part of a 'basic cleaning'... It was only overwhelmed by the visual I got of Lex carefully selecting and laying out the cleaning instruments in preparation for Chloe in the bathroom. Amazing writing!


Lex nudged the toe of his shoe under the bar and lifted it until he could grip it in his hand without having to bend down. When he had a firm hold on it, he raised it higher, until Chloe's legs were forced straight up in the air. The position exposed her and put both her cunt and ass at a perfect angle to be used. “Hold this position.”

Once again, its all the 'little' thing that you cover in the story that keep slamming into me. The visual I'm getting of Lex not letting go of his dominant position EVER... not even long enough to bend down to pick up a rod.

ooooh, but to end the chapter on such an abrupt note. I felt like tearing open my powerbook in the hopes of getting some more BlueSabby sentences. Only the stern lecture that I cannot afford another powerbook stopped me from descending into complete insanity.

please write more... please write quickly

letia84
27th July 2006, 01:48
This fb will be short seeing as how there are two chapters I missed.

First off I don't feel sorry for Clark in the least. It was nice for Chloe to get a bit of control back and one up on Clark. I have to say I would have loved to see Lex reaction to Clark touching Chloe. I wonder how far he could have gotten seeing as how Clark has all those super powers. By the way great use of the x-ray vision. He just had to look. The cell phone was and instresting touch. Great chapter and you guys are really showing how far Chloe will go to make sure Lex is pleased.

Secondly the next chapter ended to soon. I have to say Lex is going to give her a real work out and I hope you let Chloe get through with out punishment. I love how she got them free memberships and what not. She is a sub but I like that she only has to act they way with Lex everyone esel watch out. I was wondering if you would included anything about cleaning in here and see that you took care of it. Anal sex has to be clean and Lex seems like the type that would want it clean everytime. Its killing me a bit how he's making sure not to touch her. I wonder when he starts touching her will he just come right in his pants b/c he has waited so long.

Last words... Great two updates but come back here and finish us... I mean Chloe off.:P

crazychlexer
27th July 2006, 02:12
Love it!!! :drool2: u must continue!!!!:devil: maybe if I beg??? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! :rules:

randa
27th July 2006, 03:08
i love that this is from way out in left field. so more soon, cause i think im quickly becoming addicted


randa

BlueSabby
30th July 2006, 16:01
A/N: Sabby: So, you're getting a double whopper this time. And there's a reason for that. *holds up shield in preparation* I am going on an extended vacation from August 1st until October 2nd. I don't know if I'll be able to come online at all. As far as updates are concerned, I leave that in Blue's hands. Please do not come running after her with pitchforks, it's not her fault. Enjoy the update.

A/N: Blue: *peeks out from safehouse window* Kindly remember that this is not my fault. Enjoy your updates.


She did as told and he placed the slim toy in her palm. “Put this in your cunt and fuck yourself with it. Do it hard, but don't come.”

He stepped back a little to watch her. In her current position, it wasn't too hard for her to use the toy. The hard part would be not to move and concentrate on upholding her position and stay focused enough not to bite down on the gag in her mouth. And things were only going to get more difficult from here on out.

Lex adjusted himself inside his pants before he stepped around her and back behind the camera. He adjusted the zoom and angle to capture nothing except her body, then watched through the display screen as she carried out his order.

From Lex’s movement, she knew that the camera was now focused on her cunt. The vibrator in her hand was small and she thought that Lex was starting her out slowly, trying to see what she could and could not take.

Chloe slid the vibe into her pussy and remembered not to bite down on the gag. She also had to remember not to pump her hips, to keep her legs in the air and to keep silent until further instructions were given.

She was going to break. She knew it. Not now, maybe not for a few hours but this session would end with her getting punished. It was fine, she would take her punishment. She was just upset that she would disappoint Lex.

No, that wasn’t the way to think. She’d put all thoughts of failure out of her head. It was counterproductive. Chloe started to pump the vibe in and out of her body, setting up a brutally hard rhythm.

Lex watched her torment with growing arousal. So far, she was holding up nicely, but they would see for how long that held. Her pupils were already dilated and her breathing getting heavier. He licked his lips and stepped away from the camera, moving back to the table to pick up the next vibrator.

“Push it all the way inside then turn the switch on the bottom and set it to maximum, then take your hands away and lay them on the floor.” he instructed with his back to her. “Keep the toy inside.”

He wondered if he should already allow her to vocalize what this was doing to her. Maybe in another moment or two. Picking up the metallic blue vibrator, he again inspected it. One inch longer than the previous one and about one and a half inch in diameter.

He watched silently from his position at the table as her entire body strained to obey his orders.

Chloe focused all of her attention on Lex’s voice and what he was telling her to do. It was the only thing holding her together. If she forgot, even for one moment, that she was there for his pleasure, she might come.

It startled her how close she already was. Her body prepping to please Lex. But she knew that he may choose to keep her on edge for hours.

She carried out his words, plunging the toy deep inside of her body and then turning it on to the highest setting. She kept her eyes focused upwards, looking at her feet above her. Once the toy was where Lex wanted it, she released it from her grip and put her hand back on the floor.

Once she had let the vibrator go, she had clenched her internal muscles. They were also stronger now that she’d been doing Kegel exercises every day.

Lex watched her for another minute or two before he stepped up to her once again. Her hair was hanging loosely today and was still a little wet from the shower. Soon enough, the water would be dry and it would be sweat matting her hair to her face.

“Now take it out of your cunt and push it in your ass, all the way in, keep it there and take your hands away.”

He rolled the second vibrator between his palms, warming the metal as he waited for her to carry out his instructions. “Since this small toy was hardly a challenge for your cunt, I'll give you something bigger. Hold out your hand.”

Lex’s words were coming a little faster than they had before. He was still in control of himself, though. Chloe thought once the words started to come out in a rapid fire style that it meant that he was ready to let her go. She was still trying to figure out cues like those. It would take some time.

Chloe extracted the silver vibrator from her body, it was still on, and then angled it downwards a little more. She found her rear opening and then pushed it inside of her. It wasn’t as comfortable as her cunt. She hadn’t had any anal sex or play since her last dom.

She pressed it inside of her as far as it could go and then flexed the muscles surrounding it, holding it in place. After it was secure, she held out her damp hand, waiting for the next toy.

Lex placed the vibe in her palm, then took a step back. “Fuck your cunt with it. Again, do it hard. Get it wet with your juices.”

She still had a ways to go. Lex remembered what she had told him at their last meeting; knew what her dom had gotten her used to. He could already hazard a guess where her limits would be. And when they reached the first, he would push her past it.

“We're just getting started, Chloe, remember, you are not allowed to come until I tell you so.”

The reminder was not necessary. While Chloe knew she would soon want to come, she would get past it. She was there to please Lex. Pleasing Lex brought her more pleasure when she was allowed to come. The orgasms reached while knowing her dom was impressed and satisfied with her performance were worlds better than regular ones. They lasted longer and were stronger.

Her hand wrapped around the new vibrator. He was both longer and thicker than the silver one which was held in her ass. She quickly sheathed it inside of her body and then used the considerable strength in her wrist for maximum penetration.

For the last few minutes, she’d only been able to hear Lex. Not seeing him made it difficult to know if she was pleasing him. She wondered if he was hard.

Their breathing filled the room, hers considerably louder and more strained but she didn’t think that she had bitten down on the gag. Her cunt was wet and she could also hear the sounds of the vibe being driven into her by her hand.

“I think you're ready for the next step. Take the vibe from your ass, switch it off and put it aside, then take the one from your cunt and push it in your ass.”

He was already picking out the next bigger model. This one was a plain flesh colored dildo, shaped to imitate a real cock with a flared head and ridges down the length of the shaft.

His own cock was fully hard by now and Lex had to press the heel of his hand sharply against the base to keep his arousal at bay. He would have to take care of this soon. But he wasn't nearly done yet with Chloe's training, so it looked like he had to take care of it alone.

“Fuck yourself with it, slowly, all the way inside and back out to the tip.”

Chloe tried to remember how many vibrators had been on the table but was having difficulty with it. Her brain was all being used up by keeping her legs straight and her muscles in her ass, legs and cunt flexed properly. There had been three or four. But she couldn’t recall.

She relaxed the muscles in her ass and pulled the vibrator out. It almost slipped from her fingers because of her juices but she was able to hold onto it. Chloe switched it off and then placed it on the floor.

Her focus had been on the vibe so she had forgotten to swallow for a little while. At first, the muscles in her throat were giving her trouble and she thought she would have to cough. After taking two deep breaths, she was able to breathe past it and swallow.

Gripping the vibe in her cunt firmly, she took it out of her body. It was also covered in a sticky, clear fluid. Chloe was sure not to raise her hips up any more and then she put it inside of her ass. Even after a year, she could handle it.

Slowly, as instructed, she slid the vibe into her ass. When it hit bottom, she pulled it out until just the tip was inside of her. Then, she pushed it back in. She kept up the slow teasing rhythm. Lex was breathing harder now.

He took a deep breath and walked back to her side. Lex watched as she fucked herself like he'd instructed. His gaze roamed over her body from her outstretched legs up over her heaving chest to her face.

A little drool had run out over the corners of her wide stretched mouth and her eyes had lost all focus as she stared at the ceiling. Her hair was damp still, or maybe again and clinging to the sides of her face. A picture of debauchery already.

“Push it all the way in and hold it there, then hold out your hand.”

Chloe was already on the down stroke when Lex spoke so she made sure to push it in hard. Making it go as deep as it could. She flexed her muscles around it and let go. The vibrator was held firmly by her ass.

Her hand, which had not yet begun to shake, made its way into the air. Her fingers, palm and wrist were all damp. Basically, her hand was covered in herself.

He pushed the nine inch fake cock into her soaking hand and stepped back again. “Put this in your cunt, all the way in.”

His cock needed taking care of, and he would do so as soon as he'd finished his next instructions. It wouldn't only relieve him, but also serve as a test of her staying powers. He wanted to bring her to a point where nothing other than his command would be able to make her come. It would take a lot of training, but he didn't doubt that it could be done.

“Turn the switch on the one in your ass and put it on maximum. Keep both those cocks inside you. Clamp down on them with your muscles. If you lose either one of them, you will be punished.”

Chloe’s mind was awash with the words that Lex had just said. She had to focus on what he wanted her to do. And in what order.

Her fingers wrapped around the next toy. Both thicker and longer than the previous one. She was noticing a pattern.

Without preamble, she pushed it all of the way inside of her cunt. She was being stretched at both of her openings and could feel the beginnings of some soreness. She was plenty lubed up, she was just out of practice and use.

Once it was firmly in her cunt, she squeezed her muscles around it. Carefully, she found the base of the vibe in her ass and then turned it on to the highest setting. Her eyes widened a little, but she made no other movements.

Chloe placed her hands on either side of her body and concentrated on her internal muscles.

She was done with his instructions…and then heard his footfalls as he left the room.

Twenty minutes or so later, Chloe was sweating heavily. She was also panting. The muscles in her ass and cunt twitched but still held on to the toys. Her legs were still straight above her, not wavering in the slightest. Then, she finally heard Lex returning.

Lex was tempted to hum in contentment. He'd taken care of his insistent erection in the bathroom and given himself a few minutes to calm down after an explosive orgasm. For a moment, he had contemplated keeping the seed and covering the next toy in them, but then he didn't want to make things easy on her or award her before she'd run through her course.

Ambling over to the wet bar against the far wall, he poured himself a drink and took his time emptying the glass. His glance cut over to Chloe and his dick gave a valiant twitch inside his pants. Her entire body was covered in a layer of sweat, her chest heaving with deep, labored breaths. The toys were still firmly inside her holes, telling him that she'd kept up the muscle tension for the last twenty minutes. He was impressed.

Placing the glass aside, he made his way to the table and picked up the nipple clamps and their weights. Time to step up the lesson.

He slowly walked back to her side, coming to a halt next to her head. Lowering his arm, he let the clamps and weights fall onto her stomach. “Clamp your nipples. There are screws to adjust the grip, be sure to make them tight and don't forget to attach the weights.”

His voice was once more completely calm, since he was back in control and not distracted by his own arousal. He inhaled deeply, enjoying the scent of sex that had started to pervade the room. “You don't have to keep silent from now on. I want to hear you.”

A low whimpering sound tried to escape Chloe’s mouth. It got past her throat but was muffled by her full mouth.

The temperature of the clamps and weights contrasted with the heat on her body and it sent a shiver through her flesh. But, she didn’t shudder. Only her nipples tightened.

Small noises were constantly filling her ears but she ignored them. Chloe had to concentrate on attaching the weights to the clamps and then attaching the clamps to her nipples. With slick hands and not looking at the small devices.

Using her fingertips to feel around the clamps and weights, she was able to attach them only after a few false starts. She did almost sigh in relief once that part was done. One of the weights had fallen out of her hand but she’d caught it as it skittered around on her skin.

Once they weights were secured, she attached the two clamps at the same time. And screeched around the gag in her mouth. She blinked back tears and tried to slow down her breathing. It felt as if her nipples were on fire.

“Well done,” Lex commented as he circled her.

He kicked the discarded toys aside, they would be cleaned later. “Now, expel the cock from your ass, but make sure to keep the other one in. You may use your hand to hold it in your cunt.”

He was already making his way back to the table as he spoke. The last dildo was a replica of the one inside her cunt right now. The only difference was that it was even bigger. A solid eleven inches long and three inch in diameter, this would be the challenge he was sure would make Chloe reach her limits.

Chloe held the base of the vibe in her cunt as she used the muscles in her ass to push it out of her. It clattered to the floor with a loud bang. It probably seemed louder because of the relative stillness in the room.

She was happy that Lex had been pleased by her actions, so far. She wasn’t certain if he was impressed or had merely expected her to be as adept as she was. It was hard to tell.

Lex was circling her again, tapping something in his hand but she continued to look at the ceiling. She knew that most doms didn’t allow their subs to look at them consistently until a few months into the arrangement, if ever. With every breath that she now exhaled, she could hear that she was making small, strange sounds.

His cock was steadily rising again, the sight and sounds of her turning him on more than any display put on by any professional seductress. She was honest in her submission and desire to please him. The feeling was heady and Lex knew he would need to get off again before this was over.

“Get on your hands and knees,” he ordered calmly. “Then take the cock from your pussy and put it in your ass, all the way in, and fuck yourself with it.”

Watching her carry out the first order, knowing her muscles had to be screaming after such a long time in the same position, he felt a thrill of pride at her ability to do what she was told without faltering or stumbling. The bar between her feet wasn't making things easier, but Chloe somehow still managed to look graceful as she got into the new position.

“You're doing very well so far, but we're not done yet. I want to know how much you can take for me. I have plans for your body and I want it to be able to carry out all of them.”

The muscles of her legs wanted to protest and fold in on themselves, but Chloe would not allow them to do so. Her weight was held under her. The bar had caused some problems as well but now she was in the proper position.

Chloe made a strange, almost weeping sound once her attention was brought back to her tits. They were aching even more now. The weights were swinging a few inches above the floor, distending her nipples and causing her more pain. She blinked a few times and tried to concentrate on her lower body.

Her breath hitched when she took the toy out of her cunt and she groaned low and long when she took it and started to ease it into her ass. This toy was not nearly as easy to put inside of her.

Chloe took another deep breath and relaxed her body even more. It slid a little further in and she grunted with the effort. Her hand started to apply more and more force, her eyes closing as the pressure inside of her increased. Then, finally and blissfully, it slid in all of the way.

She gripped the base of it firmly and then began to fuck herself with it. The only part of her body moving was her hand. Her ass remained still as it was fucked by the vibe.

The noises were constant now. Between the throbbing of her nipples and the tightness in her ass, Chloe couldn’t stop whimpering and moaning. She was panting, which only caused her chest to move quicker, which only caused more motion to the weights, which made her make more noise. It was a vicious circle whose motion she couldn’t stop.

Lex watched her struggle to accommodate the length and girth of the toy and wondered how far she would get with the one he still held in his hand before she had to give up. How far she would push herself before she surrendered to the fact that she'd reached a limit she couldn't overcome on her own.

The clamps were swinging with the motions of her chest and he knew the pain they caused was probably the only thing distracting her from getting carried away. By now she had to be about a hairs breadth from coming. She was so wet, her juices were running down her legs. Something she would be glad for in a moment.

“You will take more than you've ever taken before and you will crave it. You will accept everything I give you and you will not come until I tell you to do so, no matter how much your body wants it, because you are mine and want nothing except to serve my pleasure.”

Chloe’s jaw ached along with the rest of her body. She realized that she was quickly becoming exhausted. The body was not used to being on edge for such a long period of time. Especially a body that had skipped both lunch and dinner. But she would not fail Lex or herself.

She nodded at his words and doubled her effort with the vibe. She pushed it harder and harder into her ass. The weights swayed back and forth faster. Her cries were becoming louder. Her hand slipped around the toy but she quickly regained her momentum.

Lex stepped around her until he was standing in front of her face. More drool had gathered and was running down from the corners of her mouth, but he would bet she wasn't even aware of it. She had a far away look in her glazed eyes that spoke volumes of her current state of mind.

“Push that cock all the way in and keep it there. Then hold out your hand.”

After she'd done as instructed, he silently placed the largest dildo in her hand, watching her reaction as her eyes widened further. With a neutral expression, he continued his instructions. “Use this on your cunt. Get it soaking wet with your juices, because they will be the only lubrication I allow you to have.”

Chloe knew that even though it would start inside of her cunt it would end up inside of her ass. Like almost every other toy that had come before it. She flexed her fingers around the dildo, trying to see how much, if any, give the toy had. None whatsoever.

She kept her muscles flexed around the toy in her ass and then eased the dildo into her pussy. Her eyes widened even more and she whimpered. It was very tight and only because she was so lubed up could she get it inside of her.

Confidently, she worked it in and out of her cunt. She kept the pace steady but not too hard or fast. Her whole body ached now and she had to constantly blink back tears. She wasn’t always successful and they fell to the floor.

However, the pain was worth it. She could tell that Lex was impressed with her. That she was showing him just how good of a sub she was. It made her feel proud of all of the hard work she put herself through. Lex was not an easy man to impress.

Lex watched her fuck herself with the toy, his cock throbbing inside his pants. He circled her to stand between her legs before he allowed himself to take a firm grip of the base and stave off his arousal once again. A groan got trapped in his throat as he clenched his teeth against the unpleasant sensation.

Taking a deep breath, he gave his next instruction. “Expel the cock from your ass, same way you did with the other one.”

He knew that his own satisfaction would have to wait a little longer. They weren't done yet and he was sure that his full concentration would be needed soon. He had noticed that she had trouble already taking the large dildo up her cunt, so he had no illusions about what would happen once she tried to insert it in her ass.

Chloe closed her eyes briefly after Lex gave his instruction. This is what it all came down to. She focused on her ass and then the vibe clattered to the floor. She could tell that Lex was directly behind her from his voice.

She kept fucking her cunt as she waited for his next instruction. Chloe already knew what it would be but she couldn’t jump the gun on it. Besides, she used the time to try and untense her body.

It was going to be difficult because she now realized that her body was ready to orgasm. And had been for, well, she didn’t know how long. The pain in her chest had distracted her. But now that she had become accustomed to it, the throbbing between her legs made its presence known.

Another fortifying breath and a few more moments for Chloe to properly soak the toy. Then Lex decided it was time to start pushing the limit. His hand had returned to the base of his cock, giving it a hard squeeze to prevent himself from coming.

“Now, take that dripping cock from your cunt and push it in your ass. I expect you to get it all the way inside. It is large, but I know your body will take it for me.”

Chloe wasn’t so sure about that but she started to comply before her brain brought up that point. She pulled the dildo out of her and then positioned it properly.

Once she started to push it in, she let out a broken whimper. The hand that was on the floor balled up and her tears started to flow freely. It hurt. And it wasn’t in a pleasant way. She took another deep breath and tried again.

She was able to work the toy in a little further, she thought she had gotten in half way, before the pain flared up again. Her hand paused again. Maybe if he would direct her to spread herself wider it might help. Might, but there was no guarantee.

Lex watched her struggle with the toy for a moment longer before he spoke up.

“I can see we've reached your first limit. But I won't allow this to hinder you from pleasing me. You will take this cock all the way.”

He hadn't thought she would be able to take it. That was what this entire lesson had been about. Finding one of her limits and breaking through it, within the rules of their agreement.

Some part of him was aware that he was blocking the camera while he was behind her, but his focus wasn't on creating a perfect tape. The center of his attention was Chloe and guiding her through this lesson.

He sunk down onto his knees, wincing at the hardness of the hardwood floor. He would make sure that she rested on carpet for their next lesson. Sure, it was more difficult to clean, but there was also no reason to cause her unnecessary discomfort.

“I will help you push through this boundary,” he spoke softly as he got settled behind her. “And you will enjoy it, because it will please me to see you carry out my order.”

He waited a moment, taking in her shivering form as she still held on to the toy, now holding it motionless inside her. His made sure his voice was gentler still when he continued. “Take your hands away and brace yourself on the floor. Lower your upper body and rest your face on the ground.”

Just the feel of Lex closer to her, behind her and with her in this settled Chloe a little more. They could do this together. She knew that was true.

She let go of the dildo and then eased herself down on the floor. The clamps caused her a momentary problem, she whimpered a little as one of them pinched her nipple uncomfortably. Once she was on the floor, though, the pressure from them abated.

Chloe turned her head so that her cheek pressed against the wood and she placed her hands flat on the floor above her head.

Lex waited until she had gotten comfortable in her position, then took hold of the toy and slowly pulled it out. He took care not to touch her with his hands as he ran the dildo back to her cunt. He rubbed most of its length over the swollen flesh, turning it to spread the juices equally over the surface.

“Remember, don't come,” he warned her just before bringing the tip of the toy to her clit circling it around.

When she released a pitiful whimper, he pulled the fake cock away and slowly pushed it into her cunt until just enough of the base was left that he could keep hold of the slippery toy without touching her.

He moved the dildo in and out in a slow motion a few times, then pulled it out. Trailing it up to the other hole, he circled the puckered muscle a few times before slowly pushing the toy inside.

It went about four inches into her body before it met resistance. He pulled back a little and pushed back in with a slight twist of the toy, gaining about another inch. Her body was shaking slightly, but she kept her position stoically.

Maybe she needed a little verbal encouragement to help her along the way. “You look gorgeous like this. Straining and sweating, shivering like a leaf, suffering to please me. And I am pleased.”

He pulled the dildo about an inch back, then eased it deeper again with another twist, slowly pushing through the resistance of her body.

As her breathing evened out, Chloe was able to focus on helping Lex. Her hips had wanted to jerk when he had touched her clit with the toy. But she kept them in place. Her legs wanted to widen their stance, but she kept them in place, too.

Lex thought that she was doing a good job and he would tell her when she should move. After a few more deep breaths, her body relaxed and she felt the toy slip further into her body.

Chloe wanted to claw at the floor from the intensity of it. She screamed instead.

She began to imagine the muscles in her ass and tried to focus on relaxing them. She wanted to please Lex and this would please him. It had to be done. She would do this.

Apparently, Lex had seen something encouraging in her body because he twisted the toy again and it went deeper into her ass.

He watched the toy slide another inch inside. Now that she was relaxing and letting him do most of the work, it seemed to go a little easier. The muffled scream had almost been his undoing and he'd had to take a firm grip of himself to stay in control. This was a challenge not only to Chloe.

“That's good. Relax, you're over half way there.”

He was breathing a little heavier himself as he concentrated on carefully pushing the toy deeper, twisting it around and retreating a little every time he went farther in.

It took a few more minutes that might as well have been hours, but finally the toy was in far enough that he had to take away his fingers, since he didn't wish to touch her yet. Instead, he pressed his thumb to the bottom of the toy.

“Alright, take a deep breath now,” he instructed. “Then push back.”

The last few minutes had been agony for Chloe. She couldn’t touch herself and Lex sure as hell wasn’t going to do it. She knew that she was pleasing him but her arousal was bordering on pain at this point. It would have to take a backseat to the task at hand though.

The dildo was almost fully inside of her. She felt stretched to the hilt. Even though she knew it was only in her imagination, she swore she could feel the toy all the way up into her throat. Then again, that particular body part was still filled with the gag.

Chloe moved a little off of the floor and planted her hands. She would need some leverage for what she was about to do. After filling her lungs, she pushed back steadily and forcefully.

Her screams reached a fever pitch and a drop of her sweat ran into her eye. She blinked, her eye stinging.

Lex was speaking again and she quieted herself down so she could listen.

“That's it, Chloe, breathe.” For a moment, he'd been afraid she'd pass out on him when she wouldn't stop screaming. “You've done it, breathe.”

He shifted back and stood up, then moved out of range of the camera on decidedly shaky legs. It took him a moment to collect himself enough to speak.

“Look at me,” he ordered softly.

She moved sluggishly, but finally brought her face around in his direction. Looking down at her, he had to stifle a moan. She was completely gone. Her wide open eyes were glazed over, the pupils swallowing the hazel of her irises almost completely. Tears were streaming down her face, mixing with the drool running out from the corners of her mouth. Her hair was a mess of sweaty tangles, clinging to her face. Her body covered in sweat from the exertions he'd put her through over the last few hours.

“Beautiful,” he murmured in the same gentle voice he had used before. “You're such a good girl, taking it all for me.”

The toy inside her was stretching her hole almost obscenely wide. Tomorrow, she would have a painful reminder of her lesson, but Lex had no doubt that right this moment, she was feeling the satisfaction and pride of a sub who had pleased her master. He would encourage this feeling, wanted to keep her suspended in it for a little while.

“Tighten your muscles around that cock. Feel it, how it's spreading you wide. Can you feel the ridges of it, rubbing against the sensitive skin of your walls.”

When her muscles tightened around the dildo, she could feel everything that Lex was describing. She held them tight and nodded. Chloe kept her eyes rooted on Lex’s.

Her body was still tense and in pain but looking at him made her feel better. It soothed her. As did the words that he’d said to her. She knew that it was because she’d done as he’d wanted. It was her reward.

She blinked a few times and looked up at him expectantly, waiting for her next command. Never mind the pain in her ass. The throbbing need of her cunt. The ache in her nipples. What did Lex want from her next?

He stepped closer until he came to a halt in front of her. “Reach back a hand and feel it. Trail your fingers around it and see how wide you've spread yourself for me.”

He smiled at her as she did as he ordered and lifted one of her hands to bring it around her body to her ass. He decided that this lesson was coming to an end, now that she had pushed past this limit and done as he'd told. She didn't know it yet, but his praise would not be her only reward.

“Eleven inches length and three inches width distending your pretty little asshole. And you will be able to take so much more for me by the time you've finished your training.”

Gently, Chloe ran her fingertips over her skin. She pressed them flush against the toy that was now practically enveloped by her body. A few more errant gasps were released by her throat as she imagined the picture she must be making.

She wondered how much more he would push her physical boundaries in their relationship. And she welcomed it.

“I told you I will push all your limits, both physical and mental and you will love it because it will please me very much to watch you develop under my care.”

He took a step back, but stayed in front of her, taking another look at her transformed features. His gaze slid down from her wide jaw to her breasts. He wondered if she even still registered the pain caused by the weighted clamps.

“Kneel,” he ordered shortly but still with a gentle voice.

He decided it was time to relieve her of at least one of the devices. “I will take off the gag now, and then we will see about your reward.”

The tone of Lex’s voice was like a balm on her body. As soon as she moved, pain flared up in almost every part of her but she focused on one thing. Her reward. Lex said that she was getting a reward. Would he finally touch her? Would she be allowed to touch him?

Once on her knees, Chloe gasped at the renewed pain in her chest. Her lower body was one, big dull throb but it was nothing compared to her breasts.

She looked straight ahead and could see that Lex was hard.

He reached around her head, careful to allow no more than his shirt to brush her face as he opened the buckle and slowly pulled the plug from her mouth by the ends of the leather bands.

When he had the toy in his hands, he remembered his earlier order. Hoping to find the rubber as flawless as before, he inspected the soaked material at its base.

His face darkened as he found what he'd hoped not to find. And unfortunately, he could not explain it away with a flaw in the material, since he'd thoroughly cleaned and inspected the toy before he'd put it to use. It had been brand new, not even a scratch on the material.

Now, there was a single tooth mark the sign of a canine digging into the rubber and scratching along it.

He shook his head and showed the toy to Chloe. “What is this,” he growled.

BlueSabby
30th July 2006, 16:04
No. It couldn’t be. Chloe just stared at what Lex was thrusting in her face. She knew that he had meant to reward her with his touch. He’d allowed his clothing to brush up against her, the first time that had happened.

She continued to stare at the indentation in the gag. It didn’t go away. It just stayed there, mocking all of her effort. It was small. Obviously only one tooth had marred the surface.

Lex had asked her a question. She tried to speak but had to clear her throat first. “It’s a tooth mark.” The defeat was evident in her voice. “I’m sorry, Lex.”

So was he. More than she could know. He had planned to reward her for her obedience and more so for her effort to push through a limit her body had set to please him. Instead, he was going to have to punish her now.

“What did I say would happen if I found a tooth mark on this cock once I removed it?”

Before she could answer he stalked over to the table and slammed the offending gag on the table, then made his way to the camera and turned it off.

He did not want to tape this. It was disappointment enough that he had to punish her, there was no reason to keep evidence of it as well. The part that was already on tape would be cut out when he edited the video.

“I would be punished,” she whispered. She knew that Lex could hear her. She heard him stalking around the room behind her. She’d almost jumped when he’d slammed something against the table.

Her mind immediately flashed on the paddle that had been on the table. It hadn’t been large but it had holes cut into it. That cut down the wind resistance, enabling the sub to be hit harder and more effectively.

Lex gritted his teeth as he stalked back to the table and picked up the paddle. He had really hoped that he wouldn't have to use it. The only reason he'd placed it there was as a reminder what could happen if she failed him. Not because he wanted her to fail.

“Stand up and come over here, then bend over the table, hands braced on the surface.”

This punishment would not be easy on her. His emotions were running too high and his erection had flagged effectively at the disappointment of her failure. That was the draw back to these games. Most times, the subs didn't even realize how much their success or failure really affected their master. There were different kinds of mindsets as well. Some doms could fake disappointment, all the while deriving pleasure from punishing their subs. Lex was not one of them.

Chloe got up off of her knees, the pain in her breasts immediately hitting her. She almost swayed on her feet but her unsteady legs carried her over to the table.

She didn’t dare look at Lex. The disappointment in his voice was thick and she didn’t want to see his face at this moment. She’d failed. It didn’t matter that he had pushed her further than any other dom in her life at the moment. All that mattered was the tiny mark on the gag.

Her hands splayed out on the table until she gripped the edge of it and she bent at the waist. She spread her legs wide and waited for further instruction or the first blow. The weights skimmed against the table but Chloe did not allow them to rest on the surface in order to decrease her discomfort. This was her punishment and she would take it all.

Lex could see that she regretted her mistake already and that his disappointment in her hit her hard. That couldn't be changed however. He had given an order at the beginning of this lesson and she had failed it. There was nothing he could do about that now.

“I am very disappointed, Chloe. You were pleasing me so much with your willingness to submit to me and push past your limits and then this.” He shook his head, turning the offensive paddle in his hand as he stepped behind her. “What if that had been my cock in your mouth?”

There was no need to lie. “I would have bitten you,” she stated. There was no need to point out that there would have been no way for his cock to be in her mouth for the whole time. That was besides the point. It wasn’t even close to the point.

“I’m sorry that I’ve disappointed you, Lex,” she said. It wouldn’t do anything to change her punishment but she still felt that it needed to be said. “I will do better next time.” Chloe knew that he wouldn’t throw her aside for this but she wanted him to know that she was committed to improving herself for him.

Her apology didn't do much to soothe his mood. Not when it measured up against the disappointment of having to punish her when he had wanted to reward her. That was why he chose not to give it any verbal acknowledgement.

“Expel,” he ordered shortly, not bothering to be wordy.

He waited until she'd pushed part of the toy from her body, then took hold of the base and slowly pulled it the rest of the way out, careful so he wouldn't cause any damage. Once it was all the way out, Lex threw it carelessly onto the table in front of her.

“You will count the strikes, continuously,” he snarled, then landed the first blow, squarely across both cheeks.

“One,” Chloe breathed out. Her lower body felt better for the split second that the dildo was out and before the paddle landed on her flesh. But not anymore. Lex had hit her squarely and she’d heard the swish of the paddle right before it landed on her. He was hitting her hard.

Her hands clawed into the table. The next sharp smack was louder than the first. “Two, Lex.” Her voice had gotten louder. She kept her head straight and let the tears flow down her face. They were more from disappointment than pain.

The next blow was harder than the second. Lex was clearly mad. But the blows were still not has hard as she’d taken before. “Three,” she squeaked out.

The fourth was very hard. It had struck her more evenly over her ass and she thought that maybe Lex was now gripping the paddle tightly with both hands. “Four,” she cried out.

The last blow had been particularly hard, mostly because his anger had gotten away with him. Not anger at her, but anger at himself. Her tears and the honest disappointment and regret he could hear in her outcries were getting to him and he could feel himself getting hard again.

That had never been the case before. When he had to punish a sub, it had more often been the case that his taste for playing vanished completely. Chloe Sullivan was getting to him in a bad way in her honest submission to him.

He switched tactics and gripped the paddle by the wide end then slipped the handle into her ass, deep as it could go, a reminder of the way she'd been used and of how she'd pleased him.

“That's right, cry and scream all you want, show me how sorry you are,” he growled as he slowly fucked her with the paddle. “Move your hips.”

“I’m sorry, Lex.” She said the words as her hips began to move. Chloe had noticed before that the paddle had been shellacked so she wasn’t worried about the splinter factor. She pushed back against the paddle and gripped the table.

“Oh, Lex, yes,” she moaned. Maybe she shouldn’t be feeling pleasure but her body was wound up in all sorts of ways. “I just want to please you. Whatever you want.” She was panting now.

Animalistic grunts spewed forth from her mouth as she kept pitching her hips back. She could feel her pussy throbbing and she became wet again. “Take me. Teach me. Punish me.”

Lex took her by her word and pulled the paddle out. The handle was slippery from sweat and her juices, but he managed to get a steady grip on it. Swinging back, he brought it down hard on her ass. “Don't forget to keep count,” he reminded her.

This was getting to be too much. The punishment was supposed to teach her a lesson, not him. He needed to reassert some control. How it was even possible that this made him hard was beyond him. He truly didn't like punishing her.

The blows came harder and swifter this time. Lex was losing control. Things sped up when that happened to him. She knew the pattern now.

“One,” she cried out. The paddle hit her sensitive skin and reawakened the stinging pain that had been ignored when he took her up the ass with the paddle. The throbbing of her nipples was a constant pain so she was able to push it to the back of her mind.

Her “two” was swallowed up by another smack and she quickly said, “three,” before he could hit her again.

The paddle sliced through the air and her “four” was a little more breathless than her other counts. Chloe was trying to regroup and get a hold of herself. Lex paused and she could hear him breathing heavily behind her.

She screamed “five” as the paddle connected with her skin. It had been the most brutal hit of all. Lex had geared himself up for it.

Then the paddle was inside of her cunt. “Oh, god, Lex.” She hadn’t expected it. Didn’t even know how he had gotten it inside of her so quickly.

His voice was rough behind her. “Move your hips. Fuck it.”

Instantly, her body responded. She thrust back even more forcefully than last time. “Uh, uh, uh.” The sounds escaped her lips as she fucked the neck of the paddle. “Feels so good, Lex.” The paddle entered her even harder.

The force of their motion caused her clit to brush up against the table and Chloe jerked forward. She could feel the sweat forming all over her body, a bead running down the center of her back.

Lex watched her undulating against the paddle, fucking herself hard. He hardly had to move in counterpoint to her motions.

His eyes narrowed as he watched her deriving pleasure from her punishment. She would learn that no real pleasure could be gained from disappointing him.

“Yes, that's good, Chloe, come on, fuck yourself for me. Show me how much you want it.”

He could see her starting to shiver as she neared her climax. “Do you want to come? Do you want me to bring you off like this, with nothing but a paddle up your cunt?”

Not that he would allow that. He was still angry at both her and himself. His erection was unwilling to recede and something would have to be done about it. Somehow, he would incorporate it into her punishment.

“Touch yourself, Chloe, bring your fingers down to your clit and rub it.”

“Yes, I want to come.” Chloe moaned out the words. Her body was ready for it. All of her muscles had tensed in anticipation of her orgasm.

Her hand made its way down to her clit and she kept fucking the paddle. “I want you to get me off with the paddle. If it pleases you.”

“Lex, Lex, Lex.” She chanted his name as she pushed against the paddle and fingered herself. “Oh, god, coming.” Her voice tightened up as she could feel her orgasm just out of her reach. But, she wouldn’t come until instructed to.

“Ease up on your clit.”

Her shaking worsened, even as she took her hand away and he knew that she was about to climax. All it would take were a few more thrusts of the paddle and two words from his mouth.

“Do you think you deserve to come?” He paused for the fraction of a breath, holding her at the brink of orgasm. “I don't.”

With that, he pulled the paddle from her cunt and switched his grip, then brought it down hard on her ass, turning the abused flesh an intense shade of scarlet.

Chloe screamed. But not in release. And not in pain, so much. More in surprise. If she had been thinking, she should have known that it was coming. She had disappointed him. Failed them both. Of course she didn’t deserve an orgasm for that.

But she hadn’t been able to think once Lex had started to fuck her with the paddle. She kept her position on the table and waited for another command. Or blow. Or something.

She ignored the fact that she was still on the brink of orgasm. She couldn’t think of Lex hard and panting behind her. It would lead to more trouble. Her internal muscles were twitching and she breathed deeply, trying to control herself.

“No,” she finally said. “I don’t deserve to come. I failed.”

At her soft spoken words, his control finally snapped. The paddle landed on the table with a harsh clatter and Lex tore at his belt to get it off and open his pants. He pulled out his dick and gave it a few harsh strokes. The unwanted pleasure was strong enough to make him lose his balance and he caught himself with a hand against the edge of the table, barely an inch away from touching any part of Chloe.

It took way too little. With another three strokes, he was coming hard, pleasure exploding through his nerves as his seed spilled out onto Chloe's back and ass.

It had all happened so fast that Chloe thought that she had imagined it for a moment. But, the sticky heat of Lex’s come on her ass and all over her back wasn’t a figment of her imagination.

Neither was the arm that was almost touching hers on the table. Or the harsh gasps of air that, while not in her ear, where close enough to fan her hair out.

She moaned as a little of Lex’s come slid down her back.

As soon as he could see clearly again, he pulled back and straightened up again. Another deep breath and he was able to speak as he tucked himself back into his pants.

“You're right. You failed.” He took another step back, putting more distance between them. “Because of that you will go home unsatisfied tonight.” Looking her over, grime, sweat and semen streaked, a cruel smile curled at his lips. “You are also not allowed to clean yourself until tomorrow morning.”

He smoothed a hand over his own shirt, making sure that it had stayed immaculate. “You've disappointed me today, Chloe. Don't make the mistake of thinking that I was pleased, simply because I achieved an orgasm.”

He lowered his voice to a harsh growl with his next words, still frustrated at his own inability to control himself. “If you had not failed, my come would not be running down your back right now. Instead you would be able to feel it inside you.”

“I’m sorry, Lex,” Chloe said for the third or so time. This was real punishment. Knowing how close she’d come to having Lex inside of her instead of some fifth rate replacement. “I understand that punishing me does not please you.”

Her last dom had been very into it. He always got hard when he did it. Chloe got the feeling that Lex had come almost against his will. Lex was a dom, not a sadist. She knew that he would be happy once she was actually able to succeed at all points of their sessions.

“I will not wash myself until tomorrow morning. I will feel your come on my back and be reminded of my failure.” Lex usually liked her to repeat his instructions when they finished up.

Lex remained silent but she heard him walking around the room. She heard Lex turn the camera on again. She was confused until she heard the tape rewinding. He would take it with him.

After another moment, she heard the door open and close.

Chloe stayed that way, bent over on the table and covered in his come, for a minute or two. Then, she stood up. The nipple clamps were taken off and she breathed a sigh of relief. She hobbled over to her clothes, biting her lip a few times as Lex’s come shifted on her body, and then dressed herself.

She was limping as she left the club.

squeezumstang
30th July 2006, 17:11
whoa, nelly. it is hot in here or is it just the chlex? whoa. very nice.

lj715
30th July 2006, 18:00
WOW!!!!! That was intense! October 2nd is a long time. Well, have a nice vacation. I'll be here for whenever an update gets posted.

autumngold
30th July 2006, 18:02
I feel so sorry for Chloe!! Poor baby, she must feel horrible because she disappointed Lex so badly!! Thanks for the updates!! Have a great vacation Sabby!!

hfce
30th July 2006, 18:27
Oh man that was intense and hot and brutal. Why did she bite it? I can't believe he punished her for that. I know he said no bite but come on that is impossible not to do. UGH!! I know the rules..

I can't believe this won't be updated until OCTOBER!!!! Sabby why must you be so cruel. :eek: So that means your other story won't be updated until October as well. Please say it aint so.. Please.. :beg:


Hope ;)

holmes
30th July 2006, 18:44
Only one response is possible - OH MY GOD!!! Brilliant! Love it!!

See you soon.

letia84
30th July 2006, 19:24
Part ONE


Now, there was a single tooth mark the sign of a canine digging into the rubber and scratching along it.

He shook his head and showed the toy to Chloe. “What is this,” he growled.
Fuck. fucky, fukiedy, fuck fuck....

She was doing so well. I feel so bad for them both. Lex really wanted to touch and then he couldn't b/c she failed. This is so rough since she did so much just now. I'm little afraid to move on to the next part to see her punishment. It will for sure leave marks on Chloe but it will hurt them both.

Part Two


“I am very disappointed, Chloe. You were pleasing me so much with your willingness to submit to me and push past your limits and then this.” He shook his head, turning the offensive paddle in his hand as he stepped behind her. “What if that had been my cock in your mouth?”

There was no need to lie. “I would have bitten you,” she stated. There was no need to point out that there would have been no way for his cock to be in her mouth for the whole time. That was besides the point. It wasn’t even close to the point.
I can’t image if she actually bit him what her punishment would be. I think I would have to stop reading this if she did that and he had to punish her.

I must say poor Lex not being able to control himself just now was rather interesting. I assume he thinks all is other subs never really felt bad once they did wrong but Chloe really does. She is very serious about it and pleasing him only. Even when she was in that cycle of pain she was still only focused on Lex being pleased. I have to commend you for writing her in this way. It shows her complete dedication to sub life style.

It looks like even though Lex lost control just now and she failed him, that he’s found a good match. Even in her failure Chloe is willing to go the extra mile for him to make sure he is pleased first. Is need to control everything is really shiny though in this last part. Even though he has to wish to punish her after hours of solid hard work, he goes through with it anyway.

So sad there will be no update for a while but I think I need breather. Have a great vacation Sabby.

westwingwolf
30th July 2006, 19:27
Sheesh! That was hot and intense and oh boy do I feel sorry for Chloe, and a little for Lex since he was not only disappointed with her but himself.

Great job ladies, and enjoy your vacation Sabby.

Mel
30th July 2006, 21:09
Holy.
Crap.

somethingeasy
30th July 2006, 21:22
WOW! As always, the amount of painful excruciating detail in this fic completely sucked me in and blew me away at the same time. I cannot handle the level of emotional and intellectual involvement that comes into play when reading this fic. My brain goes into overdrive and slips over a few cogs, and I actually have to pause reading to recover.

I could go on ranting in this fashion forever, but I get the feeling it might get tedious :P

Let's discuss it from an intellectual point of view... I'm seriously loving how much detailed research you have obviously put into this fic, and even more than that, I love how you're combining your research with your considerably impressive imaginations. Whatever raw material and objective facts you might have found on the subject on a sub/dom relationship has been enhanced spectacularly by the plot weaving all the sexual training and experimentation together. Excellent research, excellent plotting, excellent delivery.

I have to wonder how much of this is derived from true research and how much has been skimmed off from the top of your heads. Is the part about 'professional/serious' doms testing out their subs true? Do they really make their subs go over rigorous hoops and trials during the early stages of the 'training'? Do doms even actually call it training, or is that Lex's word?

The sheer brilliance of testing out Chloe's 'insertion capacity' in every form possible... it was AMAzingly plotted and written. The most amazing thing about your writing is the fact that every test and new level of the arrangement flows through in such a natural and inevitable fashion, that I find myself flabbergasted that I didn't guess it was going to happen earlier. It just seems like the most obvious and natural thing to happen after reading through it... it's really not as difficult to maintain a suspension of belief in this fic as one might have imagined.

Now on the emotional response... ahem... this was actually the first time I actually found one of the scenes from 'The Arrangement' to be...well... hot. Up till now, I have been enjoying all the sex from an intellectual point of view... but for the first time I was able to accept all the pain and humilation that Chloe was going through, and still found it undeniably sexy.

Perhaps it was the increasing emotional response of the Chlex couple. Chloe defintely seems to be feeling more indebted and attached to Lex (in his capacity as a most excellent and domineering dom)... and Lex seems to be getting equally (or more) emotionally vested in Chloe's and her skills and talents as a sub.

I actually loved the fact that Chloe felt so proud and pleased with herself (earlier in the chapter/s) by performing her tests so well. And I loved how Lex was also experiencing a similar sense of pride for his highly accomplished and talented sub. The connection between them is getting undeniably stronger.

And THEN you followed up the 'good performance' and 'pride' with a heavy downfall. You really yanked the rug out from under your reader's computer chairs with the tooth mark. I seriously felt about ready to collapse. I felt exactly the same as Lex and Chloe did... I appreciated the way they both responded to the tooth mark with a sense of disbelief (lots of blinking and re-checking to make sure it's REALLY there).

oooohhh. And then their reaction upon realizing that there really was a tooth mark on that damned dildo... Lex shows his increasing emotional attachment to Chloe by losing temporary control of his emotions and reactions... by responding with a slightly more than ordinary sense of anger over the fact that CHLOE failed her task. I get the distinct impression that he wouldn't have cared even a quarter as much with any other sub... this one's a keeper, this is the one that he feels a true connection with. Even to the point of losing control and nearly coming in his pants during the action of punishing her.

And Chloe was so contrite, humiliated and perhaps even a little heart broken at the thought of failing her current dom's test. I'm not sure how she reacted to rejection and failing her previous dom, but the level of remorse and repentance that she showed here seemed quite considerable... AND it seemed compounded by the fact that it was LEX that she failed.

oooohh. I ADORE how you're increasing the attachment, attraction and connection between them by slow increments. I can't wait to see how this fic ends up.

Up till now, I always believed that eventually Chloe will want out of the arrangement (for whatever rhyme or reason), and Lex will become so addicted to the idea of being Chloe's dominant that he'll start implenting plans and schemes to re-establish control over her again... perhaps schemes and plans of a particularly nasty and underhanded nature? Chloe-addiction would be a hard habit to kick ;)

But now, I'm considering that fact that LEX might be the one to break it off... Not out of a case of dissatisfaction (dear god NO!), but because he might realize he is developing feelings for his sub... and he might want to break it off to protect himself with his usual armour of distance and dettachment.

Whatever the case.... I'm looking forward to the next update. I do hope Blue manages on her own for a while. I would HATE to have to wait for TWO months to this highly addictive fanfic.

please write more, please update quickly!

sabby
30th July 2006, 22:18
Hey guys,

I'm just popping in to thank you all for the well wishes and yea, for the wonderful feedback because we really really really dig it. The thought out, long reviews as much as the 'guh thud hot' s. They are what keeps us writiing. That and the fact our brains just won't stop spewing ideas...in an ever increasing 'out there' variety.

As for updates, well, blue and i do have the habit to be a bit ahead, but we're both not sure how much there is and when and where and how and...yea, you get the drift.

But thanks for enjoying this, and I promise that once I get back, all regular updating schedules will definitely be reinstated.

Oh and Sabrina? You've got Mail (toolittletoolate)

kimmie
30th July 2006, 23:19
Holy Crap, that was intense, i don't know what to say! They are both way too good at this!

-K-

lilinny
31st July 2006, 00:04
How do you know about these things? I felt the intensity of the story. Have a good trip and please come back to this story. It's too good for you to abandon it!!!

teejei
31st July 2006, 05:25
omg.....OMG!!!

yes, oh, yes. i think that would somehow tide us over....but, DAMN!

*swoon*

happybum
31st July 2006, 08:41
mouth is very dry, need a lake full of water to replenish. That's was Hawt..too brain dead to give you two the proper feedback you guys deserve. Well hope you have a wet and wild vacation packed with good 'ol fun. Remember to slather some sunblock or better yet pour it all over you. There's nothing worse then be sunburnt during vaction time. =]

crazychlexer
31st July 2006, 23:40
Well first of all great update!!! :drool2: and yeahh that's rigth I can't believe we're going to wait that long!!!:eek:

Shanna
1st August 2006, 03:27
Wow.

:drool2:

Ummm, oh, wow.

I'm not even sure what to say after those two posts. Poor Chloe. You can sense how disappointed she was, and Lex seemed to have a little anger mixed in with his disappointment too. Nuts! One little toothmark from full-fledged Chlex intercourse.

Oh my. Good thing I got my air conditioner in today finally, because it seems to be very, very warm in here.

Great intensity ladies. Enjoy your vacation, though, and hurry back to write more DomLex and subChloe.

Willower
1st August 2006, 08:14
dizamn that was intense...if only chloe hadn't bitten the gag!

georgee5
2nd August 2006, 06:04
She was limping as she left the club.

Now I know why Chloe is limping, physically speaking. But it almost sounds as if she is really limping due to her dissappointing Lex. They have been in this arrangement such a short time, but already she is attached to the Dom that Lex is providing her.

Notice I say the Dom, because I don't believe that she really thinks about Lex outside of the Dom/Sub relationship. I am wondering if this will lead to a lasting relationship, or will fade to a respect of some sorts as they move on to the right person for themselves.


And Sabby... October 1? Couldn't you at least have gotten together with Blue to provide us with a teaser to the next chapter sometime in September? You could have written it prior to holiday and given us just enough juice to tide us over.

Lily
2nd August 2006, 18:54
I am loving this fic in ways I should probably be ashamed of!!! Keep up the tremendous work.

redniblet
3rd August 2006, 12:53
OMG!! That has to be the hottest thing i have ever read!

nebti
5th August 2006, 01:10
Oh I like it very much. Please update. Thank you, nebti

randa
13th August 2006, 21:16
powerful!!

randa

pipersmum
14th August 2006, 13:34
OMG that was....I am not sure I can put it in to words I do love how your minds work though and I am on the edge of my seat for more whenever that will be, soon I hope :)

I hope you are having a nice vaction.

teb85
14th August 2006, 15:15
OMG that was Hot !! Can't wait for next update !!

BlueSabby
16th August 2006, 22:47
Blue: Hello kiddies. Here's the next morsel in your guilty pleasure. In addition to both Chloe and Lex, we have a guest star, as well.




Everything was in place and all that was missing now was Chloe. Lex relaxed into his leather seat and ignored the man to his left for the time being. He had given Chloe the instruction to prepare herself and come to the club at 9 pm sharp.

Their last session had been five days ago and Lex had used the time to prepare for this very specific set up. The video had been edited by his own hand to show only her success and he'd taken care to cut out his own appearances as well. It had shortened the tape considerably, so that the two hour material had ended up being cut down to twenty minutes of her training.

The man at his left side was a sub he'd borrowed from one of the female doms. It had taken a bit of convincing, but after he'd explained his purpose behind the borrowing, she'd readily agreed. After all, her property would not be touched and handed back in the same shape as it was given.

He'd also let the other dom give the instructions to her sub, not wanting to intrude on their relationship any more than strictly necessary.

He started the tape the moment the door opened and Chloe stepped inside. The male sub, John, relaxed into a sprawl immediately and got into character. Lex watched him from the corner of his eyes for a second, then turned his complete attention on Chloe

Chloe was a little nervous as she stepped inside the room. It was a little like going back to a store that you had shoplifted from. Not that she’d ever done that….well, maybe once. But she was glad that Lex had called. He’d been decidedly silent over the last few days. Whether it was to give her a break or because he was displeased with her, she couldn’t figure out.

At least her body no longer ached. She’d gone to the drug store after their last meeting and stocked up on the cleaning materials she’d used before he’d instructed her. But she hadn’t used them that night. She’d gone to bed sweaty and covered in the remnants of Lex’s come.

The next morning, when she stood up, her legs buckled under her. She’d made it to the bathroom and went through the routine that Lex had instructed her about.

All that day, she’d hissed whenever she sat down or stood up. And the limp had continued for three days. She’d made up some excuse about pulling her groin at the gym.

Now her gait was back to normal. And Lex was calling on her.

When she entered the room, she saw that Lex was sitting on the couch next to another man that looked vaguely familiar, but Chloe couldn’t place him specifically.

She walked over to where Lex sat and got down on her knees in front of him.

Today I will thoroughly test your body's capabilities to serve my pleasure

Lex’s voice coming from somewhere behind her. It clicked into place. He was playing the tape of their last meeting.

He looked down at her, then back at the screen to watch the proceedings. “Take off your clothes then kneel back down, facing the TV.”

On screen, she was already fighting to accommodate the gag in her mouth that had proven to be her failure. The toy had been thrown in the trash on his order the next day. His gaze cut over to the other sub, who was watching the video avidly.

“I trust that you've recuperated from our last lesson?”

In one smooth motion, Chloe pulled the dress that she was wearing over her head. It made sense to wear something like that to her meetings with Lex. She toed off her shoes and then got back down on her knees, staring straight ahead with the TV directly in her sight.

“Yes, Lex.” So that was why Lex had waited to call on her again. Or maybe it was because he had used another sub. It wasn’t unheard of for a dom to take two subs. Lex said he didn’t share well but that wouldn’t be the same thing.

“Good, I wouldn't want you to be sore for what I have in mind today.”

He spread his legs a little wider, making sure that she they weren't touching Chloe in any way as she kneeled between them. Looking at the screen, he watched as he picked up the bar in a smooth move and put her into position.

“Do you like what you see?”

It was turning him on, remembering how she had pleased him for the most part of the lesson. It still gave him an uncomfortable twinge when he thought about her failure in the end. Even more so, because it was directly related to his own failure. Something like that could not happen again.

But it wouldn't do to get lost in the memory of an old lesson. He had to concentrate on this one. Today, he would test her trust, with the ultimate goal of securing it permanently and completely. Neither of them could properly hold up their end of the agreement if she didn't trust him completely to fulfill his part.

Conflicting emotions were warring inside of Chloe. Yes, she liked watching herself please Lex. But she knew what happened after the part of the lesson that had been a success. Her failure. So, while the tape was definitely arousing to watch, it was tempered with something close to regret.

“I like watching myself please you,” she answered, hedging her bets. She wasn’t sure that he wanted her to bring up the end of their time together. “It arouses me.”

She heard the man sitting next to Lex shift in his seat. Lex had also moved, but his movements were less jerky than the other man’s.

Lex hummed in agreement and kept silent for a while. The tape kept playing and passed the first editing cut.

His own arousal was growing as he watched her use the toys diligently, driving herself ever closer to a climax that would never come. “You haven't been allowed to come in a while,” he purposely used the understatement, not exposing any weakness or failure on her part. “How did it feel to be denied any release, knowing that I am the only one who can grant it to you?”

Now that Chloe was more into her sub mode, her feelings were more layered than the last time he asked her that question. She knew that not coming was her fault. That it wasn’t Lex’s failure that she had disobeyed him.

“I didn’t deserve to come,” she reminded him. “I know that you will grant me my release when I’ve performed in a way that pleases you.” Chloe watched herself on the screen. Seeing herself perform the acts in color made it all the more real.

Lex’s voice was the only mark of himself on the tape. You never got to see his face. The focus had been solely on her. “I hope to do better the next time I’m to serve you.”

“I have no doubt that you will,” he answered smoothly.

It was the truth. The test he'd laid out for her could be dangerous if she didn't react the way he expected, but Lex was sure that she wouldn't fail him this time around. He watched the tape for a few more minutes, knowing he didn't have much time before it came to a close.

When the scene switched again, showing her taking the largest dildo with his help, he spoke up.

“Turn your head to the side and look at our guest.”

A quick look at the other sub assured him that the man was still playing his part. Maybe he was enjoying the display a little too much. A main reason why he had taken a sub for this lesson instead of another dom.

Chloe turned her head to the left and looked at the man who was sitting next to Lex. He was an attractive man, perhaps in his early thirties. He was dressed casually in a pair of jeans and a nondescript black t-shirt.

Being that Lex had given her a rather vague instruction, Chloe felt that she was allowed to look at him fully. She shifted her glance from his face, down his chest and then she noticed that he was aroused. She quickly averted her eyes back up to his face. Even though Lex had never told her that he was the only man she was to look at, it felt a little like a transgression to stare at the man’s erection.

Looking back up at his face, Chloe could see that he was now looking at her. He moved up a little on the couch in order to get a better view of her breasts. Then, his eyes continued to crawl down the front of her body.

He watched her reaction to the other man and his blatant ogling of her body. His gaze shifted to the other sub and he narrowed his eyes at the display. However, the sub had been given specific instructions by his dom, so there was nothing to be concerned about. It was time to begin.

“Can you see how pleased he is with you? How turned on he is from watching you taking it up your cunt and ass for me, fucking yourself while that big cock is stretching your mouth wide.”

His gaze shifted back to look at Chloe. She was keeping her eyes steadily on the other man's face after her initial checking out of his body. Lex was pleased with that. His cock gave a twitch inside his pants as his mind jumped ahead of himself, already imagining her reward and his own release once she'd passed the test.

“Yes, Lex.” The man’s eyes kept looking over her body and he kept shifting on the couch. Sometimes to get a better view of her and others to make himself more comfortable. Even though it was below her line of sight, she could tell that he was adjusting himself in his pants.

She began to get nervous. Lex and she had agreed that there would be no threesomes. However, she had also agreed to be put on display and shared a little. The lines between the two could become blurred.

“He’s aroused by watching me please you.” Lex hadn’t spoken again so she assumed he wanted more information from her. “He’s hard from hearing me cry out for you and because of you.”

Lex allowed a small smile at her elaborations. Even though he had turned the focus of his question on the other sub, she had still managed to turn it back around and make it about him.

He looked away from Chloe to turn his attention to John. “She's beautiful isn't she? A true sub like I haven't seen in a long time. She'll take anything for me, craves everything I do to her and make her do to herself.”

His gaze rested coolly on the male sub, waiting for the man to fulfill his part of the game. Bella, John's domina had no doubt threatened with punishment if he failed to play it properly. “Would you like to have a better look at her?”

The man swallowed and removed his eyes from Chloe to look at Lex. “Yeah,” he nodded and spoke in a slightly raspy voice.

Lex was convinced the sub would play his part well enough. “Chloe, lie down. Spread your legs, feet on the floor and raise your hips. Spread your pussy wide open and show us how wet you are just from watching what I did to you.”

Only after he spoke did he remove his gaze from the other man and shifted it to her, watching her carry out his orders. Her mixed emotions were written clearly on her face, even as she tried to keep a neutral expression. Lex smiled.

Being shown off in a public arena was vastly different than a one on one viewing. Things such as that were usually only reserved for good friends or doms that had a working relationship. Chloe doubted that Lex knew this man in either of those ways. But she was here to serve his pleasure. And if this pleased him, she would do it.

Chloe just hoped that Lex had spoken truthfully when he had told her that he didn’t like to share. The man on the couch was attractive, there was no doubt about that. However, he wasn’t Lex.

She began to assume the position that she had gotten used to. It was almost as natural to her as kneeling at Lex’s feet.

Once her hips were raised and she was certain that the other man was looking between her thighs, Chloe spread her folds open wide so he could look at her pussy.

The man licked his lips and started to breathe even heavier. He continued to look at her display and then started a little. He looked over to Lex and said, “Wonderful. Very wet and you haven’t even touched her yet.”

Lex nodded and watched her for a moment, drinking in her reaction to everything. She must be feeling on edge already, unsure what would happen. This was the first time he displayed her to anyone and the rules were a little unclear concerning this matter.

“Have you fucked her yet?” the male sub asked from his side and Lex turned back to the man with a raised eyebrow. There wasn't a fixed script, but the sub apparently knew what he had to focus on.

“She hasn't earned the privilege of my touch yet,” he answered neutrally.

She'd almost earned it during their last session. However, due to her failure he had been forced to reconsider. Lex pushed the thought from his mind once again and returned his attention to Chloe as the sub emitted an understanding “Ah.”

Lex concentrated on her face. Now that she was so nicely on display, it was time to push things a little further. “Would you like to fuck her?” he asked calmly.

The question repeated itself in Chloe’s brain. She kept her body still and her eyes focused above her. She didn’t want to show an outward reaction to what he had asked.

The thought that this man, this stranger would get to fuck her before Lex even touched her went against every instinct she had. But she had to remind herself that her body was not hers. It belonged to Lex and he would do with it what he wanted.

Chloe would do as he requested. She would push past her limits. She’d done it once before during the last week. She would just have to do it again. Never mind that this was a totally different situation. Lex owned her and she would listen to him.

The stranger hitched in his breath. “Oh man.” He sounded delighted and shifted on the couch again. “Are you offering?

Lex kept his eyes on her. She might think that she was hiding her internal struggle, but it was plainly visible on her face for anyone who cared enough to look. Her face was straining to keep a neutral expression, but the tension caused tiny wrinkles at the corners of her eyes and her mouth was a little too tight to be called relaxed.

With every passing minute, he was more certain the outcome of this test would be exactly what he expected.

“Chloe, get up and stand in front of him. Spread your legs wide so he can see your cunt,” he instructed then shifted his eyes to the TV screen so she wouldn't know he'd been watching her reactions.

Even though she didn’t want to, Chloe’s body moved instantly. It was accustomed to obeying Lex’s command and this was no exception. Lex hadn’t answered the man’s question but his instructions to her was all the answer that she needed.

He was going to make her fuck this man…as he sat next to them. Maybe he would watch, maybe he wouldn’t. Chloe wondered if this was part of her punishment. Perhaps Lex hadn’t been done with her the other day.

Once in front of the man, Chloe spread her legs. She kept her eyes forward, staring at the wall a few feet above where Lex and the stranger were sitting. Even so, she could tell that he had bowed his head to look at her more closely.

The leather squeaked as the man moved his body a little forward. “Such a gorgeous cunt.” The man turned back towards Lex. “Perfect. Something tells me that her clit is sensitive, too.” His tone clearly indicated that Lex had told him so but was pretending for her sake. And not very well. He wanted her to know that Lex had spoken of her to him.

The man leaned back in the couch a little more. “Nice tits, too.” Chloe could feel his eyes on her chest. “Can I touch them, Lex?”

Lex ignored the request and instead watched Chloe struggle with herself for a moment. It couldn't be easy for her, being torn between what her instincts were telling her to do and what her mind was suggesting through his ambiguous orders.

“Touch your tits, Chloe. Massage them and pinch your nipples.”

He watched as she carried out his order silently. It would take more than this to make her break, but Lex was prepared to do what it took.

He turned his attention back to the male sub for a moment. “She's got very sensitive breasts. She'll scream every time she puts clamps on her nipples,” he commented in a bland voice before looking back at Chloe.

The bruises had faded but Chloe was still certain that her nipples were more sensitive than they’d been before their last session.

Putting on a show for the other dom, that’s what he had to be, was much better than having him touch her. Chloe started out slowly, massaging her breasts for about a minute before pinching her nipples.

She wanted to cry out and her hips wanted to move but she kept her body still.

“Very nice,” the other dom said. He looked her up and down. “You can tell by her musculature that she’s holding back. You’ve trained her very well.”

Chloe continued to knead her breasts and pinch her nipples intermittently. The other dom said, “She puts on a very good show.” He paused and then turned to look at Lex again. “My cock is getting a little uncomfortable.”

“Is it now?” Lex arched a brow, then continued towards Chloe. “Straddle his legs. Touch your cunt and play with it.”

He would push this until she broke. From the restrained look on her face, it wouldn't take much more. His own cock was also 'getting a little uncomfortable' as the sub had phrased it. He was very much looking forward to the events that were about to happen.

He watched her carry out his orders and motioned for the male sub to stay silent for now. Because of her efforts, her cunt was dripping, even though he doubted that she derived much genuine pleasure from her task, being too conflicted in her mind. It was time to end this. One way or another.

“You're so wet,” he spoke slowly, letting the words roll off his tongue. “And you haven't come in so long.”

He crossed one leg over the other, putting a damper on his arousal as he watched her struggle. “I can see that you need to come.”

Lex licked his lips and paused for a moment. Inhaling deeply, he went for the kill. “Should I let him fuck you, Chloe? Would you like having his cock shoving into your cunt, driving into you hard and fast until you come?”

Chloe knew what she was supposed to say. And after she said it, she knew what she was supposed to do. Lex wanted her to answer in the affirmative. Then he wanted her to ride this man that she’d never met as he watched.

She was wet and aroused and shaking. But sex with the man that was now below her was the last thing on her mind. Pleasing Lex was what mattered. It was what she really wanted. If she had to do this…so be it.

“If it pleases you, Lex.” Her words were hushed.

Lex nodded and the man reached out for her. It was too much.

“Green.”

The word was out of her mouth before the other man could touch her. She quickly dismounted the man and then knelt at Lex’s feet in her default position. “I can’t.” She shook her head. “I can’t.”

She’d failed Lex twice within the past week. He would not abide by that.

His eyes rested on Chloe as he spoke. “John, get out.”

He waited silently until the other man had left and closed the door behind him. His cock was throbbing painfully between his folded legs, but there was still a distance to cover before that could be taken care of.

Lex swallowed before he spoke again. “Chloe, look at me.” His voice was gentle, if a bit rough with strain.

As soon as the other man left, she felt a little better. However, it didn’t solve the bigger problem. She had used her safe word. And Lex would only allow it once. But coming so close on the heels of her other failure…

She wasn’t about to disobey him again. Though, she feared what he was going to tell her. If only she could explain herself. But, she wasn’t allowed to speak unless spoken to.

When she looked up at Lex, she didn’t bother to compose her face. He probably wanted to see her honest face in order to determine just what in the hell she thought she was doing.

He could see the despair in her eyes, clearly believing she had failed him again. Chloe was devastated at the thought and it pleased him to see that she took her submission to the core. He could also see resignation there, accepting what she thought was failure and the punishment about to follow.

Lex cocked his head to the side and watched the emotions crumple her features as she kept herself perfectly still in her position. He forced himself to keep his own hands linked over his lap, holding his position as much as she had to. “What made you use your safe word, Chloe?”

“I didn’t want him to touch me,” she answered. If this was going to be it, she wanted Lex to understand why she had done this. Well, understand as much as he was capable of. “It felt wrong. I know that it would have pleased you but….”

She trailed off and shook her head. The motion was permitted, she thought, because she was explaining herself. “You’re the only one who should touch me. And to have to…” She paused and then started again. “To fuck someone else. I couldn’t do it.”

Raising her head up a little higher and looking at his impassive face, she said, “I’m sorry, I just couldn’t.”

Forcing himself to stay calm, he remained motionless in his seat. “You believed that it would please me to watch him touch you? Think back on my commands. What did I order?”

After her ordeal, it was now time to lead her to understanding. He'd taken great care in choosing his words during that first part of the lesson. The purpose behind that would become clear to her once she thought about it.

“You told me to straddle him and then to play with my cunt.” She remembered the words. And also the questions after it. Yes, he had not instructed her to fuck the other man but it seemed that that was where it was leading.

When a dom asked a rhetorical question, a sub usually knew that they were supposed to answer in the affirmative.

Lex nodded, seeing that a little more guidance would be needed to get Chloe on the path of enlightenment. It wasn't surprising considering her current mindset. She still firmly believed that she had failed to please him by using the safe word.

“You heard John's words, didn't you? Do you remember how I reacted to his requests?”

Watching her struggling with her perceived failure without reaching out to calm her was becoming increasingly difficult, but it did have the positive side effect of distracting him from his own needs for the moment.

“You ignored them,” she said. Chloe hadn’t noticed that at the time. She’d been too concerned about having to allow herself to be touched by the other man. But that didn’t necessarily mean anything.

She studied Lex’s face but got no new knowledge from it. The mask was still firmly in place. “Because you were the one in charge.” Her statement rose up during the last two words so it was phrased like a question.

There was another reason that he would ignore the man’s needs. And why he would follow this line of questions. But Chloe didn’t want to jump to that conclusion. It would lead to disappointment if she were wrong.

Apparently, she would have not only to be guided along. Lex would have to spell it out for her. She still didn't seem to make the connection between his actions and the purpose behind them. Lex decided if he ever met her previous dom, he would have some very candid words with the man.

“The reason why I ignored his requests is not simply because I am in charge of any given situation.”

His fingers tightened their hold on each other as he held back from touching her. Not yet

“I would never let another man touch you, much less allow him to defile your body with his cock. You are mine, and only mine. If this agreement is supposed to work, you have to trust me completely. Trust that I will take care of you and know which limits to push and which to leave untouched.”

He spoke calmly and enunciated each word carefully, keeping their gazes locked the entire time to let his words sink in. It was important that she understood now. If she didn't he might as well get up from this chair and cut their arrangement. Something told him, if that happened, he wouldn't be revisiting this establishment at any time in the foreseeable future.

“I expect that this has taught you the lesson.”

She thought about what he was saying before answering. She hadn’t trusted that he wouldn’t let another man touch her. Chloe had trusted her first dom and look how that had turned out. Yes, she could obey Lex but there was always that niggling fear in the back of her mind. That he would back out on his responsibility to her. Just like her first had done.

But Lex and that man were worlds apart. He had tried to show her that. Had she not been so dense, she would have been able to see it. But she did see it now.

“Yes, Lex. I’m sorry that I didn’t understand before.” She held his gaze. “I should have known that you would look after me.”

“Now, there is still the issue of your use of the safe word and the reason behind that.”

His voice lowered as he slowly leaned forward in his seat. “You used it because you couldn't stand the thought of another man's hands on your body.”

Lex fought the urge to lick his lips and continued in a lower voice than before. His cock twitched, reminding him uncomfortably of his own unsatisfied arousal, but it would have to wait. He would derive his pleasure after he'd rewarded her.

“You have done what I expected you to do when you refused to seek pleasure from any other than me.”

So, this had been some sort of a test? While Chloe was in her full sub mode, she was still herself. The Chloe that she usually was bristled at the idea of him putting her through that. But that quickly faded away.

Instead of disappointing him, she had made the right choice. It looked now like Lex was not about to kick her to the curb. In fact, she thought that he was very pleased at her choice. Not that she could tell. Lex’s face remained in the same position as it usually did.

“I will not count your use of the safe word,” he stated neutrally.

But that wasn't the reward he had in mind. It was merely part and parcel of passing her test successfully.

Her real reward was the privilege of his touch. He knew that she had been waiting for it since their first lesson. She'd openly begged him for it the last time they'd met.

“I am proud of you, Chloe. You've shown me your true submission, that you crave no touch other than mine.” As he spoke the words, he allowed a smile to come to his face.

Finally, he could reach out a hand to cradle her cheek in his palm. He brushed his thumb over the soft skin as he continued. “You've earned yourself a reward.”

Chloe leaned into to his touch. All of the nerve endings on her cheek were firing. She swore that she could feel his hand more intensely on her face than anything else in her life. But she knew that she was just being melodramatic.

Still, it felt damn good to have him touch her. And in such a gentle and caring way. That was another misunderstanding of their world. That it was all about punishment and pain. A dom was supposed to give a sub everything they needed. Look after them, take care of them. But that message was never displayed in the movies.

“Thank you, Lex.” Chloe sighed in contentment. She leaned further into his touch and suppressed her laughter when she imagined herself as the world’s biggest cat.

Lex let her nuzzle his hand for a moment, watching the contentment change her features as she enjoyed the simple touch. It wasn't all she would be receiving this time. “Stand up, step closer and spread your legs,” he instructed her softly.

letia84
16th August 2006, 23:18
I have to say I wasn't worried about Lex letting that other guy touch he after his long speech when she came to is home about her being his. The idea was solid that no was going to be touching Chloe other then Lex and in the event of a third party in the room she or he would just be watching.

I was more concerned with what Lex was looking for her to do. I assumed he wanted some sort of response but which one was the problem. I'm glad she choose right and he got to touch her. It was much better to read then what happen last time.


Still, it felt damn good to have him touch her. And in such a gentle and caring way. That was another misunderstanding of their world. That it was all about punishment and pain. A dom was supposed to give a sub everything they needed. Look after them, take care of them. But that message was never displayed in the movies.
That first touch was so sweet but I assume that he won't be fucking as sweetly. I like this distinction as well. People get so wrapped up in the pain but I think they forget it more about pleasing the other and pleasure doesn't always have to be painful.


Lex let her nuzzle his hand for a moment, watching the contentment change her features as she enjoyed the simple touch. It wasn't all she would be receiving this time. “Stand up, step closer and spread your legs,” he instructed her softly.
I can't beilve tou ended it there. I guess I should come to expect from the last few parts but it’s still a shock when you’re ready for it and you guys take it away. Teases the pair of you and I can't wait for more. :blinkkiss

lj715
16th August 2006, 23:52
NOOOOOOO!!!!! You did it again!!!! How could you leave it there? Cruel...very cruel. I AM happy that you updated, I thought I wouldn't see anything until Sept or Oct. I knew Lex wouldn't let that other guy touch Chloe.

Ugh!!! I hope you can update again soon. Need to find out what happen next.

westwingwolf
17th August 2006, 00:00
Finally there is touch, and we may get even more. I'm so happy for Chloe and that she did the right thing. I'm also glad that Lex won't be counting that as her one time use of the safe word, it's only fair since that was what he wanted.

It's great that Chloe is now finally able to trust Lex, let the fun continue.

lilinny
17th August 2006, 00:33
Wow!! I didn't know that S&M would be so complicated. But that was a close one. Great chapter. You're right Blue. This story is my new guilty pleasure!!!!

Willower
17th August 2006, 00:47
what? what? what? i don't believe you ended it right there.

great twist with lex actually being pleased that chloe didn't want john doe touching her. i got a little nervous when she used the safe word but all in all the whole scene was really well written. i like that lex did truly push the envelope with chloe's rule/fear about having third parties involved. i can't wait to see how this story develops. great update

autumngold
17th August 2006, 03:57
I am so, so glad that Chloe didn't fail her last test!! Thank you so much for letting Chloe do the right thing this time!! Thank you so much for the wonderful update!! Can't wait for more!!

sexi_angel_babee
17th August 2006, 05:45
all i can say is, HOT! finally, lex is gonna touch her. poor girl has gone through enough... she definitely deserved this reward :D can't wait to see what it is! please update soon!

BellaMR
17th August 2006, 06:16
:damncomp: My computer must be broken. It cut off the last of the chapter. When we get to see Chloe's reward. It must be there somewhere because I know you can't possibly be cruel enough to just end the chapter there. Please fix this quickly.

I loved the beginning of the chapter though. I knew that Lex wouldn't let anyone else touch her. I am surprised that the sub had the gall to try though without Lex saying he could. I hope that was part of his act or he may be in for some serious punishment when he gets back to his own sub.

peggy
17th August 2006, 13:52
please update soon, you can't leave us like that !

pipersmum
17th August 2006, 14:15
OMG!!! You can't seriously have left it there........????

You guys just love to tease us don't you I am glad Chloe pleased him and is going to get a reward. Were we supposed to know who John was? Was John his real name it seemed as if Chloe recognised him! Or was that just my thinking......probably. :D

I really hope you come back with an update soon the suspense is killing me.

somethingeasy
17th August 2006, 15:05
sooo happy for the new chapter. I've been feeling seriously deprived for updates from my favourite thread these past few weeks, and now suddenly all my favourite authors have suddenly decided to become productive. Was there some writing seminar that took place in my absence? :P


The video had been edited by his own hand to show only her success and he'd taken care to cut out his own appearances as well. It had shortened the tape considerably, so that the two hour material had ended up being cut down to twenty minutes of her training.

mmmmm niiiice! Lex really takes his responsibilities as a dom seriously. All this careful planning and dedicated work to make sure Chloe trusts him. Of course with the trust comes power and the ability to yield more control over the sub, so I guess the extra bit of work fulfilled a vital purpose for Lex as well as for Chloe.

That whole bit about how much Chloe had physically suffered (and been suffering) since her last session was a little disquieting. I know that BlueSabby have assured us that Lex is very much NOT into pain and needless suffering, but there are more ways to cause stress and disablities to a human body than just simple 'punishment'. Let's hope the 'stretching the physical limits of the body' was an exception rather than a norm.

At least Lex was considerate enough to give Chloe ample time to recuperate and recover.


It was turning him on, remembering how she had pleased him for the most part of the lesson. It still gave him an uncomfortable twinge when he thought about her failure in the end. Even more so, because it was directly related to his own failure. Something like that could not happen again.

But it wouldn't do to get lost in the memory of an old lesson. He had to concentrate on this one. Today, he would test her trust, with the ultimate goal of securing it permanently and completely. Neither of them could properly hold up their end of the agreement if she didn't trust him completely to fulfill his part

This part really pleased me. It was good to see that, after taking appropriate steps and punishments, Lex wasn't the type to hold the disappointment, weakness or 'underachievement' over her head. Lex has adopted a good and healthy forgive-n-forget policy concerning failure in previous sessions.

AND it was also satisfying to see Lex acknowledging his own weakness as well as Chloe's. He still remembers his own loss of control and would undoubtedly take steps to make sure that didn't happen again. It would be really frightening to imagine Lex losing control and actually inflicting damage on Chloe through too much punishment.

In fact, I think there is a possibility that this might actually happen in a later chapter. Lex would get so... attached to Chloe, that loss of control over another big enough transgression would be inevitable. And inadvertant hurting might follow... scaaary *shudder*


“You haven't been allowed to come in a while,” he purposely used the understatement, not exposing any weakness or failure on her part.

hmmm. Despite the creepy overtones of this relationship, I keep getting this one point reinforced and reiterated over and over again... Lex is a good dom... one who is actually worthy to 'own' Chloe (taking into consideration her express permission and desire to be owned)
I like how he 'protects her honour' in this line ;)


She began to get nervous. Lex and she had agreed that there would be no threesomes. However, she had also agreed to be put on display and shared a little. The lines between the two could become blurred.

I wonder how anything can be shared 'a little'. What DID her last dom do to her?!


He looked away from Chloe to turn his attention to John. “She's beautiful isn't she? A true sub like I haven't seen in a long time. She'll take anything for me, craves everything I do to her and make her do to herself.”

Once again, a lovely sentiment with creepy overtones. I get that Lex is being sincere in his praising. But I get the feeling he would adopt the same tone when describing a particularly valuable painting he managed to acquire at a competitive auction. A thing of beauty that he played no part in creating, and yet still belongs completely to him, simply because he had the means and opportunity to acquire it.


Lex was convinced the sub would play his part well enough. “Chloe, lie down. Spread your legs, feet on the floor and raise your hips. Spread your pussy wide open and show us how wet you are just from watching what I did to you.”

I'm continually impressed by Chloe's strength, stamina and capabilities. I do yoga so I know from experience how difficult this particular pose is. I can usually only maintain it for about 1-2 minutes before my legs start shaking, and then only for another few minute before I collapse on the floor :P


The leather squeaked as the man moved his body a little forward. “Such a gorgeous cunt.” The man turned back towards Lex. “Perfect. Something tells me that her clit is sensitive, too.” His tone clearly indicated that Lex had told him so but was pretending for her sake. And not very well. He wanted her to know that Lex had spoken of her to him.

ewwww. I know that Lex already admires her as an object, but does that mean random strangers get to talk over her head too? I was SO pleased that this was only a farce, just a test to show what will NEVER happen.


“Very nice,” the other dom said. He looked her up and down. “You can tell by her musculature that she’s holding back. You’ve trained her very well.”

ok... I know that this was only meant as part of the act to provoke a response... But at least give credit where credit is due!! Trained her well indeed... hmmph


He could see the despair in her eyes, clearly believing she had failed him again. Chloe was devastated at the thought and it pleased him to see that she took her submission to the core.

phew... I was so pleased that 'test' went by with relatively little damage. But it was still a cruel thing to do to Chloe, and her psyche suffere for it. Fortunately....


Watching her struggling with her perceived failure without reaching out to calm her was becoming increasingly difficult, but it did have the positive side effect of distracting him from his own needs for the moment.

... Fortunately Lex was quick to reassure and console. Although the cruelty DID serve a purpose, I get the feeling that Lex didn't want to make her feel hurt or inadequete. Yet he still felt pleasure at her devestation at 'failing again'. Sometimes I think he's the best thing that happened to Arrangement-Chloe, and other times I just want to throttle him.


Lex decided if he ever met her previous dom, he would have some very candid words with the man.

oh please make it so. I cannot express how pleased I would be if that previous dom came back to 'reclaim' his lost property... and then discovered that it had been taken off the market heh heh heh.
It would also be highly enjoyable to hear Lex tear into Chloe's previous dom for the way he treated her and for the 'inadequate dom etiquette' he displayed during his ownership.


She hadn’t trusted that he wouldn’t let another man touch her. Chloe had trusted her first dom and look how that had turned out. Yes, she could obey Lex but there was always that niggling fear in the back of her mind. That he would back out on his responsibility to her. Just like her first had done.
But Lex and that man were worlds apart. He had tried to show her that. Had she not been so dense, she would have been able to see it. But she did see it now.
“Yes, Lex. I’m sorry that I didn’t understand before.” She held his gaze. “I should have known that you would look after me.”

oh please pleasepleaseplease...Let's have a chapter dedicated to tearing down and tearing apart the old dom :D


Still, it felt damn good to have him touch her. And in such a gentle and caring way. That was another misunderstanding of their world. That it was all about punishment and pain. A dom was supposed to give a sub everything they needed. Look after them, take care of them. But that message was never displayed in the movies.
“Thank you, Lex.” Chloe sighed in contentment. She leaned further into his touch and suppressed her laughter when she imagined herself as the world’s biggest cat.
Lex let her nuzzle his hand for a moment, watching the contentment change her features as she enjoyed the simple touch. It wasn't all she would be receiving this time. “Stand up, step closer and spread your legs,” he instructed her softly.

wow. What a lovely closing to the chapter. A significant (and unusual) amount of sweetness and overt gentleness followed by the promise of actual sexual intercourse.

Can't wait until the next chapter comes around, please update soon.

Lily
17th August 2006, 16:46
That was an amazing update... a little long overdue, but amazing... However, it seems you didn't send the whole thing. It cut off just as it was getting really really good. The way we're all craving for your updates, me thinks your turning us all into your little subs... Can't wait for the next post... literally.. I'm supposed to start classes next week but I don't think I'll make a very good teacher if all I can think about is this story.

celticangel
17th August 2006, 17:05
That was a great part. Please update soon!!!

hfce
18th August 2006, 02:09
Damn that was raw and intense. I thought for sure Chloe was going to let that man touch her to please Lex. Thank goodness I was wrong. :D But you are a tease I wanted more than a touch on the cheeks. ;)


Hope :)

SianUrsula
18th August 2006, 03:03
I'm too drunk to reply to that fabulous update now, ca i reply later?

somethingeasy
24th August 2006, 20:03
the last chapter ended on quite a horrendously cruel cliffhanger. I keep hoping that there a lot more waiting before we get what we have been (ever so patiently and silently) waiting for ;)
please update soon.

randa
26th August 2006, 19:08
um....wow! loved it and i was so excited to see that lex was going to touch chloe. what a reward



randa

crazychlexer
27th August 2006, 01:42
Awwwwwwwww :drool2: just...just... keep going please!:devil:

gecko
28th August 2006, 21:44
this is great work, can't wait for the next part, keep up the great work here!

somethingeasy
29th August 2006, 08:24
*sigh* I really missing this fic. I want to see what happens now that Lex and Chloe's relationship has reached 'the next level'.

More than that, I'm hoping to see an appearance of Chloe's old dom. I want to see them meet up again and watch the guy ask Chloe (or more like 'order' Chloe) to take him back only to have Chloe shoot him down in the most humiliating way possible :D

Although... the question just occured to me... Once a dom/sub duo have broken off their arrangement, are old behavioural patterns completely wiped away? Or will Chloe still feel a (minor) urge to submit herself before him?

I also REALLY wanted to see a confrontation between LEX and Chloe's old dom. Lex said something about having a few choice words to share with the fellow, and I'd love to hear them :D

please update soon. As I have mentioned, I'm really missing this fic. The lack of updates ir really getting to me... especially considering how this was picking up on it's momentum ;)

BlueSabby
3rd September 2006, 21:16
A/N: Blue: Hello all, here's is your latest fix. Sorry about the delay. Hope the chapter makes up for it. Enjoy. The detailed feedback that you're all leaving is much appreciated.



As she carried out his command, he let his hand trail down her body until it was resting on her hip.

Chloe wanted to cover his hand with hers but she knew that it wasn’t permitted. Instead, she was just grateful for the small contact. She really hadn’t expected anything more than the touch on her cheek.

She got close to Lex and he had to tilt his head up to look at her. Chloe would give anything to see that smile again. While she had found Lex attractive back in Smallville, she hadn’t been one of the numerous high schoolers with a crush on him. If he had flashed that smile her way years ago though…..

A smile was starting to form on her lips but she kept them still. Another feeling entirely was forming between her legs again.

He slowly moved his hand down her hip and between her legs, touching her cunt for the first time. His fingers trailed through the wet folds, parting them gently and teasing over her opening.

“You're allowed to move your hips,” he murmured as his fingers slipped through her juices and up to her clit, rubbing it slow circles.

His gaze rested on her face the entire time he stroked over her cunt and when she started moving her hips forward, he slipped two of his fingers inside. He pumped them slowly back and forth in counterpoint to her motions as she rocked against his hand.

Chloe’s head fell back a little and she groaned low in the back of her throat at Lex’s first touch. His long and elegant fingers moved expertly over her slick flesh. Thankfully, she was allowed to move her lower body. Otherwise, Chloe honestly didn’t know what she would have done.

She gasped when his fingers slipped into her body. “Lex, oh, oh, oh.” Her hips pumped against his probing fingers and she wanted to reach out and steady herself on his shoulders, or spread her legs. She was coming undone after only a few small touches.

When his thumb brushed against her clit she moaned, her head falling back even more. Her breaths were coming quicker and quicker. Her hips jerking forward to meet his fingers.

Lex watched as she came closer to reaching her climax. Her hips were still moving slowly, but that didn't make any difference. On the next outstroke, he added a third finger then pushed inside as far as they would go. “Gorgeous,” he whispered, then added louder, “Do you want to come Chloe?”

His thumb was still brushing over her clit, teasing her by alternating fleeting touches with hard small circles against the small bud.

The sensations were overwhelming her. Being touched by Lex was incomparable to anything else. Having him close, the feel of his fingers, the cadence of his voice, and the scent of him. She was being surrounded by Lex and knew that she wasn’t going to last much longer. Not that it mattered very much to her. She was more than ready to let herself come by his touch, by his hand.

“Yes, Lex, if it pleases you, I’ll come.” Her legs shifted a little bit and Lex pushed his fingers deeper into her body. “I want to come. For you, Lex. Only for you. God.” His thumb pressed harder into her clit and she screamed his name.

“Then come for me now.” His voice was rough and textured and tense and beautiful and perfect.

It was all she needed. He was all she needed. Three of his fingers pushed harder into her, chasing after that spot that was supposed to exist in every woman. His thumb kept circling her clit and she felt her cunt close up on his fingers. Her internal muscles tried to milk his hand for his come, not knowing the difference between that and his cock.

His hand kept moving, drawing out her pleasure. Her vision whited out and she was mewling various curses and his name and the word yes. Chloe thought she even heard the word master mixed in there. Something that Lex had never requested she call him.

Her internal muscles kept clenching and unclenching. She couldn’t tell if it was one long, drawn out orgasm or one right after another. Once her body relaxed, something else happened. Her muscles, which had been true to her up until now, started to shake. And not in their usual way. She felt herself falling forward.

Lex hadn't expected her to actually collapse, but he managed to bring around his other arm in time to catch her around her back and lower her onto his lap. He slowly pulled his fingers from her body and tried to shift his grip on her to hold her more securely.

She'd been completely gone in her pleasure and Lex was still stunned from the display. Especially by the term she'd used to address him while she was too far gone to notice.

He had never demanded of her to call him master. Lex wasn't usually one to go for this obvious statement of his status. He didn't need to reaffirm what he was by having her use the word 'master' in every other sentence. It was also a completely overused term that could be tagged to any dom. Lex wanted Chloe to submit to him not simply 'her master'.

He waited silently as she calmed down in his arms. Her naked ass was pressing into his groin in this position and something would have to be done about this as soon as she was able to get back on her feet. Or her knees as it was.

The fingers of his left hand were still wet and, without thinking, he brought them up to his mouth and sucked them clean. Her taste exploded on his tongue and he had to stifle a groan of pleasure. Pulling the fingers from his mouth, he wiped them against his shirt to dry them off.

Chloe tried to get herself back together as quickly as possible. Lex’s strong arm was around her, holding her against his body and as much as she wanted to stay like that, she knew that it was a temporary situation. She needed to please him. She wanted to do it. More now than ever.

When she raised her head up, she saw that Lex’s fingers were in his mouth. She watched as he wiped his fingers on his shirt, leaving a damp stain. As she shifted her body, she felt the evidence of how much he enjoyed her coming for him.

Panting, she said, “I’m sorry, Lex. I didn’t mean to….” She trailed off. “Tell me what to do. I want to please you again.”

He turned his gaze to look down on her. Despite her words, she was still lying limply in his arms, not moving. “Such an obedient girl.” He smiled down at her as he spoke, but it was a little strained. “You make me very proud.”

Shifting a little in his seat, he managed to move both of them into a more upright position. His arm was still supporting her back as he continued. “You've truly earned the privilege of my touch and I will enjoy using you completely for my pleasure from now on.”

Removing his arm from her back he leaned back in his seat and watched her openly, once more with a neutral expression. She did look beautiful, satisfied and willing to please him in gratitude for the pleasure she had received by his hand.

“Get back on the floor and on your knees.”

While this was about Lex’s pleasure, Chloe had to admit to herself that it pleased her that she had aroused Lex. The evidence of it was pressed against her.

Once he spoke, she was moving to obey him. Her orgasm had been brilliant and she wanted to repay the favor. If he would let her touch him, that was. Chloe looked behind her as she got up. She didn’t want to fall over again. As soon as her feet hit the floor, she got back down on her knees.

The wood was hard and uncomfortable against her body, she’d forgotten how sore they’d been as well, but she ignored the flash of pain. Instead, she placed her hands behind her and bowed her head as she spread her knees apart. A lock of her hair had fallen out of the clip that was fixed at the base of her neck but she ignored it. She wouldn’t move her upper body anymore now that she was in position.

She eagerly awaited his next words. But he remained silent for a moment. And then for another one. The anticipation, while delectable, was killing her. Her pussy was still throbbing from the earlier stimulation and it intensified as she thought about what she could do to Lex in this position if he wanted her to.

Chloe’s breath hitched a little when Lex reached out his hand. It wove around the back of her neck and fluidly released the clip. Her hair, which now fell halfway down to her breasts, tumbled down. Lex carelessly threw the clip over his shoulder.

He ran his fingers into her hair, getting it tangled in the mass of blonde curls. The tresses were still wavy and soft, not matted by sweat or other fluids.

“Open my pants, take out my cock and suck it,” he murmured as he already started pulling her closer.

He knew it wouldn't take long to get him off. His cock had been painfully hard, aching for release pretty much the entire session and even he could only do so much without a cockring.

Unbidden, a memory of the thrice cursed gag flashed through his mind and he jerked her head back a little by her hair, forcing her to meet his gaze. “Don't forget to watch your teeth.”

Chloe nodded, her head still held by Lex’s hand. “I will remember,” she said. She looked into his eyes and waited for him to ease up on her hair, signaling that she could start. She wanted to start. She was dripping again at the thought of getting his cock in her mouth. And down her throat. And feeling him come in her mouth.

He gave her another small yank, not unpleasant, and then directed her head back to his lap. He kept his hand fisted in her hair as she opened his pants. Chloe worked quickly, eager to start.

Once his cock was out of his pants, Chloe ran her hands over it. She hadn’t gotten a very good look at it before now. Standard cock, cut, but thick. Standing out from the thick, reddish pubic hair. Precome already formed on the tip. Chloe flicked out her tongue and tasted him.

He jerked up a little and gripped her hair more firmly. “No teasing, I said suck it.”

Chloe had wanted to run her tongue over him but Lex didn’t want that. He wanted to be buried far down her throat. She could do that. She bowed her head, opened her mouth and relaxed her throat.

In one motion, she took all of him in. The gag from before had helped with loosening up her muscles and her teeth didn’t come anywhere close to touching his cock.

She hollowed out her cheeks and bobbed her head vigorously. She held the base of his cock with her hand and forced as much of him into her mouth and throat as she could take. Her salvia mixed with the fluid seeping out of his dick and she relaxed her throat even more.

The part of his cock that wasn’t in her mouth was worked on by one of her hands. No part of him would be neglected. He was thrusting up into her mouth and she reminded herself to breath through her nose. His grip on her hair had tightened.

She let her lips rest on his cock as she slowly raised her head. Her tongue was flattened on the underside of his cock and then circled the head. Lex hissed when the cool air of the room hit his flesh. “Take me deeper,” he instructed.

Chloe shifted her legs and pulled herself up a little straighter so she was directly above Lex’s cock. She waited for him to guide her back to him and she wasn’t disappointed. Usually, Chloe hated it when a man grabbed her head during a blow job. But this was vastly different. Lex was showing her how to please him.

She opened her jaw wide and slowly sucked him back inside. She breathed slowly and held her body still as his cock was enveloped by her throat. He pitched his hips up a little, his ass leaving the couch and said, “Good, deeper.”

There was a sheen of sweat covering his face and Chloe knew that he was close. And she also knew how to bring him over the edge. While her tongue and one of her hands was busy with Lex’s cock, her other hand found its way inside of her pussy.

She was wet again and her fingers slipped inside easily. But this wasn’t about pleasuring herself. She needed some lube.

Chloe could smell, taste and feel only Lex. She slanted her eyes upwards and waited until his body jerked up again. Her wet hand was at the ready as her other cradled his balls. She hollowed out her cheek and waited for his reaction.

There. His hips left the couch again and Chloe worked her fingers under his ass. And then inside of it. Only two, she didn’t want to overwhelm him. She pressed them deep inside until she found the mass she was looking for. She rubbed her fingers against it and then Lex went wild.

He'd been so far gone already, he had hardly felt her fingers slipping into his ass. Until they'd hit his prostate dead on.

“JESUS FUCKING CHRIST!!!” (sorry to all Christians)

He bellowed his completion as orgasm ripped through him viciously. His vision went white and the only thing he was able to hear for a long moment was his own blood rushing in his ears.

When sight and sound returned, along with regular feeling, he could feel Chloe's throat close around the tip of his cock. Her face was pressed tightly to his stomach, his hand in her hair holding her captive. That must've happened during his climax.

As she pulled out her fingers he slowly loosened his grip on her hair and let her pull back from his spent cock.

“That,” he cleared his throat, then continued, “was very good.”

Chloe licked her lips before speaking. He’d come. And hard. She’d pleased him. A lot. Lex was not a man who lost control often but he’d done so in front of her in a big way.

She’d been rewarded by the come that had snaked its way down her throat and the clenched fist in her hair. Chloe had blinked back the pain that his hand had caused and concentrated on swallowing him all down.

“Thank you, Lex.” She rested her head on his thigh, he was still holding her hair so she didn’t have very many options. “I am glad that I pleased you.”

Lex released his grip and petted her hair, letting her rest like she was for a moment as he got his own breath back. The endorphins coursing through his system would keep him in a good mood, possibly until he fell asleep.

Taking a deep breath, he finally gathered himself enough to bring the session to an end. “Shift back and kneel up.”

He could tell she was only reluctantly moving back from him and it brought a smile to his face. There was no doubt anymore that Chloe Sullivan was completely his, to do with as he pleased, whenever he pleased.

He tucked himself back into his pants and stood up from his seat. “You've done very well today.” As he spoke he walked around her and to the TV, remembering to get the tape from the VCR. He'd completely forgotten about it during their play. “I will call on you soon to continue your lessons.”

Lex left her with those words, kneeling on the floor and looking after him as he picked up his coat and exited the club with a smile.


~~~
The last week of Chloe’s life had been a blur. Her company had picked up a new client. It meant a promotion, a bigger expense account but also a whole lot more work. She’d been swamped. Thankfully her relationship with Phoebe had been repaired. She needed the woman to be her right hand man.

Lex hadn’t called. Chloe could only assume that he knew that she was busy. However, she would think that that would not matter to a dom. In fact, it would make it more likely that he would call on her. Then she had heard that he was out of town so the mystery had been solved.

Medley had told her about Lex’s business trip. She was still meeting with the man on the sly. He really needed to get out of his current firm. She didn’t understand how they foisted so much work on the man and how he managed to keep up the quality of his work.

In addition to meetings and stealthy lunches, Chloe had gone for her physical and blood work. She had to do it once a year. Not for her job or for herself. For the club. They made everyone go as a condition of their membership. This time, however, Chloe had charged it to the club. Smiling as she signed her copy.




Lex had left a message on her cell phone that she was to be at his penthouse at 8pm. She was running two minutes early as the elevator doors opened. Lex was nowhere to be found.

Chloe waited another minute and then called out his name hesitantly.

He took his time shifting the last item into place, ignoring her for the moment.

Lex had spent the last few hours setting the scene for this meeting in the conservatory. Shifting what furniture there was to the walls, then arranging various toys on the large table and positioning the centerpiece of his plan. The monstrosity hadn't been inexpensive, but she was worth it.

Once everything was finished, he walked over to the piano that had taken him a hell of an effort to shift from its position in the center of the room to underneath the window. Settling down in front of it, he opened the lid and let his fingers brush over the keys before he started to play.

She’d taken a few tentative steps in the hallway before she heard the piano start up. That’s right, Lex played. He knew that she was there and this was his way of calling her to him. She followed the sound.

After numerous twists and turns that left her wondering how big the place was and how she would find her way out, she saw one of the doors ajar. The light from the room spilled into the empty hallway as did the sound of the piano.

When Chloe entered the room she was thrown for a moment…because she saw herself entering the room. It took a moment to register that there was a rather large, ornate mirror standing in the center of the space. It was about seven feet tall and four feet wide. The piano, and Lex, were about four feet to the left of the mirror.

Chloe stood next to a couch and to the right of the couch there was a table with various toys on it. She quickly shifted her gaze. She was not to see that until Lex wanted her to.

After closing the door behind her, Chloe crossed the room and assumed her sub position next to the piano bench. Then she waited for Lex to speak. She was enjoying the piece he was playing but couldn’t place it.

Lex kept playing as he watched her take in the room before she got into position at his feet. He concentrated on the piece he was playing as he gave his first order. “Get up and go stand in front of the mirror.”

He didn't miss a note, even as his eyes cut over to watch Chloe complete his order. “I got it specifically for today’s session. It's Italian, handmade. Do you like it?”

After her eyes briefly lighted on herself, she looked at the mirror itself. The frame had obviously taken hours to complete. There were numerous patterns that all came together at the corners of the frame.

It was made of a deep wood that had been shined so that the light bounced off of it. The mirror itself was free of streaks, her reflection was perfect. “Yes,” she said, “It’s very beautiful.”

If he had procured it for their lesson, she knew that Lex must be gearing up for something important.

Nodding to her comment, he completed a particularly tricky part of the sonata before he spoke again. “Take off your clothes and watch yourself while you do it.” His voice trailed off as he concentrated on the keys for a moment, then. “Tell me what you see.”

As his eyes glanced over at her, he wished he hadn't chosen quite that intricate a piece to play, but now that he started it, it wouldn't do to stop playing somewhere in the middle.

His focus was separated between watching Chloe and watching his fingers on the keys to keep hitting the right notes. Painstaking hours had gone into learning to play the piano properly and, like with everything else, he was a perfectionist when it came to interpreting a piece.

Dutifully, Chloe’s eyes locked on the mirror. Again, she was wearing a spring dress. She just had to be careful of breezes on the way over to Lex’s place. “I see myself,” she started. “My hair is up and I’m wearing a silk dress. My nipples are hard and you can tell that I’m not wearing a bra. Or any panties.” She’d gotten more than her fair share of looks but she thought the dress would please Lex.

“I’m kicking off my heels. The same ones I wore when you came to my office.” Once in her bare feet, she continued.

She grabbed the bottom on her dress and said, “My hands are grasping the hem of the dress and I’m raising my arms.” Chloe waited for the dress to clear her head and then she dropped it on the floor.

“I’m naked now,” she said. She looked over her body. “My breasts are rising and falling as I breathe, a little quicker now. My pussy is trimmed for you and my hair was put a little out of place because my clip got caught on my dress.”

As she continued to look at herself, she could appreciate that her body was toned and well kept. Even if her legs were short. It was a picture that any red blooded male would appreciate.

Lex finally finished the last notes of the piece and let them trail off into silence.

He turned in his seat to look at Chloe. She was still looking straight ahead into the mirror and standing perfectly still now that she had completed his order. “Take out the clip and put it away. Fan it out over your shoulders.”

His eyes slid over her body as she did as he instructed and Lex appreciated the view. She was a beautiful woman. Not beautiful as commercials would like to suggest it, but in a more natural way. Honest beauty in her nudity without any pretence or coyness.

“Get down on your knees. Tell me what you think when you look at yourself. What do you see?”


The clip clattered to the floor and Chloe ran her fingers through her hair. She scratched her scalp and then made sure that her hair was evenly spread across her shoulders. Some tendrils fell in front of her, tickling her chest.

She got down on her knees and looked in the mirror. “I think that my body is very nice to look at. My breasts are large but not absurdity so. My stomach is not perfectly flat and my legs are short.”

Chloe knew that was not what he was going for. “I see an accomplished woman. A woman who knows what she wants both professionally and sexually and is no longer afraid to go after it.” A hint of pride entered her voice.

“I see some scars,” her voice trailed off as she looked at the white lines, “that remind me of where I’ve been and things that have hurt me. But there are still scars that the mirror does not reflect.” Both she and Lex had that kind. The kind that were usually the most painful and never discussed.

“Chloe Sullivan,” she spoke her name. “28, never married but wealthier than she ever imagined. Left Smallville behind but not her experiences there. Chloe Sullivan who’s fucked more men than she thought she would and loved less than she expected.”

“I see Lex Luthor’s property.”