Elviriel
24th May 2003, 01:01
Hello I wrote a fanfic. I'm sorry I saw someone already wrote a songfic with the same song but when I wrote the story I swear I didn't know ! Please forgive me but i have to post this !
Songfic : My Immortal by Evanescence. It's short and sad.
The characters are not mine, neither is the song.
I'm so tired of being here
Supressed by all my childish fears
Lex Luthor was standing in his room, alone. 24th January 2005.
Two years. Two years since he made her go ...
He was thinking, alone in his bedroom, wrapped inside the walls,
in his prison of loneliness and pain.
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Chloe Sullivan was listening to music, alone in her room.
She was holding a photo in her hand. She was watching it,
tears in the eyes, lost in rememberies.
Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
Lex could still feel her. In the same room he was stading
in right now. She has been here, with him. She’s been loving
him. He’s been pulling her away.
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
Two years, Chloe thought. Two years and it seemed still so new.
Her heart was still fragile, broken. Every time she was thinking
of him, she wanted to cry as much as the day he left, as if she was
still this little lovesick teenager.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
He remembered her face when he he had said he was leaving her.
These eyes he adored so much became wet, and tears slided down
her cheek. He remembered how much he wanted to take her in his
arms, tell her he was staying. But he kept himself cold and calm.
As he used to.
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
He left. Chloe remembered that she has been wondering why
when he told her. Why, after all they had together, why did he leave ?
She loved him so much. But it was so, so far now.
You used to captivate me by your resonating mind
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
She was so smart, so beautiful, so amazing. In his heart,
Lex could still feel an empty space, like a lack of love.
Without her, all was like ... senseless.
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
Chloe looked down at the picture. He was smiling to her.
His deep blue eyes were happy. Happiness. She remembered
how much this had fell when he had said that. “I’m sorry, Chloe.
You deserve so much better than me ...”
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When did he feel this pain so strong still ? Lex sighed deeply :
it was like Chloe’s smell was still in the air. He loved her ...
But it was too late.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
She know he didn’t want to leave her. She had seen the tears
in his eyes. She wanted to hug him, but he had pushed her away.
He was scared. He was afraid he could hurt her ... But he did hurt
her. The simple fact to leave brought chloe the deepest wound of her life.
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
Lex had now tears in the eyes. It was like all was coming back,
turning him upside down like a storm. He wanted to go back
two years ago, when he was with her ... but he wasn’t.
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But do you're still with me
I've been alone all along
Chloe’s tears fell down her cheeks, and she bite her lip.
She wished he could be here right now. That he could
enter the room, take her in his arms, and all would be forgotten ...
But she opened her eyes, and saw she was still alone.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
Hope you liked it ! I almost cried when I wrote it ! ( I know it's stupid !)
Songfic : My Immortal by Evanescence. It's short and sad.
The characters are not mine, neither is the song.
I'm so tired of being here
Supressed by all my childish fears
Lex Luthor was standing in his room, alone. 24th January 2005.
Two years. Two years since he made her go ...
He was thinking, alone in his bedroom, wrapped inside the walls,
in his prison of loneliness and pain.
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Chloe Sullivan was listening to music, alone in her room.
She was holding a photo in her hand. She was watching it,
tears in the eyes, lost in rememberies.
Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
Lex could still feel her. In the same room he was stading
in right now. She has been here, with him. She’s been loving
him. He’s been pulling her away.
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
Two years, Chloe thought. Two years and it seemed still so new.
Her heart was still fragile, broken. Every time she was thinking
of him, she wanted to cry as much as the day he left, as if she was
still this little lovesick teenager.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
He remembered her face when he he had said he was leaving her.
These eyes he adored so much became wet, and tears slided down
her cheek. He remembered how much he wanted to take her in his
arms, tell her he was staying. But he kept himself cold and calm.
As he used to.
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
He left. Chloe remembered that she has been wondering why
when he told her. Why, after all they had together, why did he leave ?
She loved him so much. But it was so, so far now.
You used to captivate me by your resonating mind
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
She was so smart, so beautiful, so amazing. In his heart,
Lex could still feel an empty space, like a lack of love.
Without her, all was like ... senseless.
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me
Chloe looked down at the picture. He was smiling to her.
His deep blue eyes were happy. Happiness. She remembered
how much this had fell when he had said that. “I’m sorry, Chloe.
You deserve so much better than me ...”
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When did he feel this pain so strong still ? Lex sighed deeply :
it was like Chloe’s smell was still in the air. He loved her ...
But it was too late.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
She know he didn’t want to leave her. She had seen the tears
in his eyes. She wanted to hug him, but he had pushed her away.
He was scared. He was afraid he could hurt her ... But he did hurt
her. The simple fact to leave brought chloe the deepest wound of her life.
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
Lex had now tears in the eyes. It was like all was coming back,
turning him upside down like a storm. He wanted to go back
two years ago, when he was with her ... but he wasn’t.
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But do you're still with me
I've been alone all along
Chloe’s tears fell down her cheeks, and she bite her lip.
She wished he could be here right now. That he could
enter the room, take her in his arms, and all would be forgotten ...
But she opened her eyes, and saw she was still alone.
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your fears
I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
Hope you liked it ! I almost cried when I wrote it ! ( I know it's stupid !)