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A-u-r-o-r-a
18th May 2003, 05:03
'Thailand Petals'
By A-u-r-o-r-a
Rating – NG-17/short story
Disclaimer – The day we see this in Smallville is the day it switched networks to the Japanese porno channel or something. Sadly. This would never…EVER happen on the show, so it aint mine ^_^
Summery – This is just about the most intense thing I’ve ever written. Phew! So…if you’re squeamish or something or tend to have heart attacks or palpitations don’t read this, I wont be held responsible for any injuries
---You’ve been warned ---


Mid- June. Swelteringly hot summer days spent on a small island off the coast of Thailand. The white sands of the untouched east were blinding. Chloe and Lex’s honeymoon. Far away from anyone.
Her sunglasses saved her eyes from the dangerous orb of light and heat that beat town tanning rays on her beach body. Chloe sighed up into the sunshine and traced patterns in the white sands as she lay there

She cook almost feel herself baking. A shining layer of sweat covered her skin. Lex was in the water. He had left mid-argument. Chloe lifted her sunglasses as she felt his shadow over her

“No…you cant” he panted as the sea water dripped off him. A few droplets splashed onto Chloe and she hissed at him irritably… was he –still- going on about this?

“Yes I can” She said smugly and laid back down again. They were having an argument about how long either one of them could hold out for. Chloe insisted she could go longer without Lex than he could her. He begged to differ

Lex was drying himself off with a towel. He smirked and spoke quietly but intensionally

“no you cant” he whispered to himself. He grinned madly when he heard Chloe snap back at him

“Yes I fucking can!” She yelled “And if you don’t stop with this it’ll happen for real, Luther!” With that she flopped her head down on the sand once more. Lex stood over her and tilted his head to the side. A mischievous smile curled his lips and he ran his tongue over his bottom lip. He picked up the crab he found in the sea and carefully edged closer towards Chloe, casting a shadow over her

‘Ha’ thought Chloe. Her eyes were closed but she could sense his shadow. ‘He’s coming over to aplogoise, well it wont work’

Closer and closer Lex edged towards her bare stomach. Stifling a chuckle he picked the crab up tenderly and gently laid it on Chloe’s stomach.

‘Lex what are you…” Chloe stopped talking and lifted her sunglasses. Staring with a drooped mouth at the thing on her stomach. She blinked twice and spoke to Lex staring at the crab

“Get it off me…Now!” She whispered. Lex sat on the back of his heels and leant his chin on his hand, his elbow resting on his knee. He was smirking down at her, watching the crab move its claws slowly

“Not until to give in” He said plainly and shook his head at her when she growled at him. He knew it wouldn’t hurt her if she laid still which she obviously would. Chloe was petrified of crabs
“NOW LEX!!” Chloe yelled. Lex burst out laughing and rested both arms on his knees. He smiled down at her and shook his head

“No” he said simply and grinned. Chloe clenched her teeth at him. Her voice was menacingly cold

“You’ll need to sleep with one eye open tonight” She growled up at him. He just smirked suavely and raised an eyebrow

“Well” he started “My point is that I’ll need to anyway to anticipate your move…” he flicked at her nose with his index finger “…with me”
He tilted his head to the side and blinked his eyes sweetly. Chloe puffed out her breath angrily at him and realised she was going to have to get this thing off herself. She grimaced as she slowly moved her hand next to it and then with one swift movement she brushed the crab off towards Lex
It scuttered towards him. Lex darted out of the way and was laughing madly at Chloe. She was about to kill him

“Oh shit” Lex said bluntly and ran for the sea. Chloe yelled in anger and scrambled after him


Later that night Chloe had built a campfire on the beach and was sitting against it, wrapping a towel around herself. Thailand at night was beautiful, Lex was just about to return with two mugs of coffee from the hut. She hugged herself.
The argument had gone too far. Now neither one of them would so much as touch. Chloe was wearing a pink flower in her hair that Lex had found next to a waterfall in the forest. It was large and very beautiful, and had a long stem keeping it in place in her hair.

Lex was walking towards her looking gorgeous in the firelight. Chloe was truly madly deeply in love with this man. She gazed down at her wedding ring and fiddled with it. This would be on her finger when she died an old, old lady.

“Hey” She cooed at him and arched her neck up, expecting a kiss. Lex kissed her warmly on the lips, tilting his back down to reach her. Then he sat down the mugs of coffee and settled himself at her side

“…Told ya” he said with a grin, then began laughing when Chloe thumped him on the chest.

“That doesn’t count” She said and gazed into the fire. She snuggled down so her head was resting on his torso. Lex draped a blanket around himself and leaned back on his elbows. He stroked her hair, paying attention to the flower

“You kept it in” he said admiringly in a soft voice. Chloe spoke into the fire

“Of course I kept it. I’m going to have it dried and framed” she said without thinking. Or seeing Lex’s look of affection down at her.
Suddenly Chloe leant up on her arms and stared Lex deeply in the eyes. Lex restrained himself as he had a perfect view down her bikini top as the blanket hung loosely around her in the night air. Her hair whispered around her face and she blinked slowly at him.
Lex shifted so that he mirrored Chloe’s position infront of her. They were both kneeling on hands and knee’s infront of each other

“So this no sex rule…” Chloe started in a low voice. Lex grimaced that she had remembered, damn. He really felt like taking her next to the fire. He swallowed and sighed against her mouth

“Yeh?” He whispered in a husky groan deep from his heart

“You really think you’re going to win don’t you?” She said with an adorable grin. Lex smirked a side smile at her and shook his head a little

“Chloe, when I set my mind to something I always win” He said, as if this was a business plan. Chloe raised her eyebrows at his bluntness and shook her head at the sand underneath her fingers. Then snapped her head back up to gaze seductively into his eyes.

Without saying a word Chloe began creeping towards him, backing Lex onto his back, his elbows, eventually his shoulders. She loomed over him like a panther and mouthed very quietly

“I love you”

So quietly her lips barely moved. Lex smiled in a warm glow of love for his wife and breathed the echo back up into her ear. She convulsed her neck as his words shivered over her forehead and along her spine. Lex tilted his head up to hers with a flushed pink tongue resting between his anxious lips. Chloe joined onto him and closed her eyes at the slow passion that was erupting between them.

After a few moment she broke the kiss and sat down on Lex’s bare stomach. He didn’t make any sound at all, just a restrained gulp passed down his throat. Chloe leaned her body slowly down upon his torso, the thin bikini no real barrier between them.

Then she half closed her eyes and pouted her lips, blowing cool air over Lex’s lips. His mind was racing, she was toying with him now, if she kept this up she might just win. Chloe bent her lips milimeters against Lex’s but never made contact, she just blew cold air over his lips, his eyelids, against his neckline and along his ear. When she reached his neck Lex shivered uncontrollably under Chloe.
She glanced sideways at him and smiled, then licked his neck from shoulder to ear. Lex let out two erratic breaths at Chloe’s final touch. She began to French kiss the spot connecting to his collerbone and Lex gasped against her. He couldn’t help it, his body was in a different world and it chose to thrust his hips up against hers
“Lex!” Chloe whispered in mock shock “Feel like backing out?” she hushed out.

That’s it. Lex couldn’t stand this anymore, she wanted to play by these rules? We could play by these rules. Grabbing her roughly by the shoulder he rolled her over and straddled her stomach. Chloe’s breathing increased as she felt Lex’s excitement through his khaki shorts. She wanted to feel him so badly, but she was in too deep now

Lex slowly leaned his body weight down on hers, pressing her breasts hard against his torso. He leaned on his elbows and looked deeply at her with a tilted head. Chloe had to scream at her body not to react and cling onto lex, scratch down his back. Arch her body underneath him, all the things she would normally do

He ran his tongue out of his mouth for a second and mentally shouted at his body to control itself.
Then he ran a his warm tongue slowly, ever so slowly, over Chloe’s bottom lip. Her mouth hung open and hungry for his touch. He continued and ran his tongue in a full circle over her top lip, When he pulled back Chloe was positively melting underneath him. She pressed her lips together for a taste of him. Lex smiled, he knew what she was doing, she pressed her lips together too, sad that Lex’s taste was only lingering and not forceful.

“Feel like backing out?” He whispered against her neck. Chloe opened her eyes to the twilight above and shook her head. Surely no more…surely he would give in soon and just fuck her senseless like she craved him to do

But Lex’s will was incredibly strong. He had far more tricks up his sleeve. He leant up on his hands and seemed to tower over her.

“Look at me” he said sensually “Nothing else…Just look”
Chloe looked, and then controlled herself not to gape. When she took the time actually review Lex all over!…
His strong arms were outlined by some protective and dangerous muscles, used for kickboxing and other violent sports he thought she didn’t know he did. His shoulders were broad and wide, bearing the weight of the world upon them. A strong tendon ran u his neck. He was smiling softly at her, lips open just a millimetre, enough for Chloe wanting madly to devour him. His eyes were fast becoming glazed over with lust imaginations of what he wanted to do to her.
His whole body was glowing with the warm orange tint of the firelight, which flickered and glinted against one side of his face.

Just then he remembered seeing something in a movie once which would be perfect. Snapping himself back into reality he reached over and plucked the largest petal from Chloe’s bloom in her hair. Then he leaned down on her, pressing his body hard against her she was sure she would be lost in the sand

He took one strap of her bikini in his teeth and snapped it against her shoulder
“I’m going to ask you to remove this” He cooed in her ear “Because if I do, I’ll defiantly loose this battle. Unless you want me to stop?” Lex whispered. Chloe gasped against him. This teasing was driving her mental

“Do you want me to stop, Chloe?” He asked quietly, his hot breath against her ear. Chloe answered his question by arching her body high off the ground and slipped her hands behind her back. Lex’s pupils flashed in the firelight when she did that

‘keep it together man’ He thought and blinked slowly. After a moment Chloe slipped out of the bikini and threw it aside. Lex took all his will not to envelope his hot mouth against her breasts as they rose and fell in the firelight. He actually had to shake himself back into reality. Gently he picked up the petal and skidded his body further down towards her knees. Chloe didn’t know what he was doing and parted her legs for him

Lex darkly shook his head, wishing he was weak enough to give in this quickly. But no, this wasn’t the end of the game. Gently he straddled her knee’s on his shins and palms and placed the petal on her belly button
Chloe tried to control her breathing. She could barely see Lex’s seductive sexy smile on the horizon of her stomach as he focused his gaze on the petal. Parting his lips he blew lightly and the petal fluttered up her body
Chloe’s breathing became raspy at such a tickling sensation of lust. Lex crawled slowly up her body blowing the petal up her stomach muscles and along her rib cage.

Her body was writing beneath him and he was barely touching her. Her muscles were irritated, her mind was irritated. Lex was torturing her slowly and menacingly. When he reached the curves of her chest he blew the petal sideways and it rested gently on her erect nipple.

A staged cry escaped Chloe’s throat and she frowned her forehead in fraustration. Lex shot his head up above her face. His pupils were black, Chloe almost came at the serious expression on his face

“Shhh” He breathed down at her “Be still”

As the petal rested there, rising and falling with Chloe’s breaths Lex opened his mouth a little and let his tongue hang lose out between his lips. He gently pressed the tip of his tongue ontop of the petal to pick it up. At that tiny hotness between Lex and Her chest Chloe spoke before she meant to

“Please Lex!” She whispered. He ignored her

Gently he bit the petal between his teeth and placed it on the other nipple. He looked deeply involved now and scrunched his eyes tight, he wasn’t going to tell her again

“Shhh…Chloe trust me”

He pursed his lips into a tight whistling shape and suddenly pressed his lips ontop of Chloe’s nipple through the petal, sucking it up in the vacuum of his mouth as he increased the pressure.
Chloe’s eyes flew open and the sight of the stars was too spectacular to take. She was dying, that’s what this was. Her soul was going to break free from her heart and sour up to heaven in a moment.
As if Lex read her mind Lex picked up the petal with his tongue and shuffled his body over Chloe’s. She boldy wrapped her legs around him, needing him to allow her this

He placed the petal on the bridge of her nose with his tongue and looked down scornfully at her.

“I’ll let you have that one” he warned in a whisper as the hotness between her legs was far too close for him to keep his composure “But you only get one, anymore and I’m gone, understand?” Chloe couldn’t speak

“I’m in love with you” She mimed up at him, only breaths came out. Lex gazed down lovingly at her lips as she formed the words he loved to hear towards the stars. He blew the petal over her eyelashes and then from her face completely. It caught in a wind and floated away over the fire

Lex shook himself back into this world and continued torturing Chloe. He decided to Go ‘old skool’ and began French kissing her G-spot under her ear once more. As he continued with the pressure, beneath him a reddy purple mark was being left in the shape of his mouth. ‘a hicky?’ Chloe thought ‘What next?’
Suddenly he realised that throughout his Chloe had been rubbing herself against him and her legs were tightening around his waist. He had stayed motionless. Breaking free from Chloe’s neck he panted against her ear. She was whining and groaning like a trapped animal. He almost thought she was crying.

But she wasn’t crying, she had just never felt this hot, this desperate for him, the meaning of foreplay took on a completely new concept to her. She needed to feel Lex buried deep inside her pushing her body deep into the sands. She wanted to impale herself against him with her back against his chest, she wanted to break her body in half as she would arch over him.
Lex decided he was being too cruel, but he had one card left to play, if Chloe wanted to take her turn she could, if she wanted to quit that would be fine as well

As a final tortue Lex gathered Chloe up in his arms, the two sat facing each other with their legs behind each other’s back. She looked exaughsted. Lex hadn’t intended on killing his wife on his honeymoon, but that’s what she looked like, like she had been kept in prison for years. Her pupils were darkening black, she was willing to do anyting he beckoned, and hoped and prayed the next thing he wanted was to fuck her roughly from behind. Her opening gaped and ached for him

“Are you ready to give in?” Lex whispered against her lips. He held her by the small of her back whilst his other hand trailed down her sides and disappeared out of view. Chloe bit her lip and shook her head slowly

“Hold onto me” Lex cooed at her. Instantly Chloe threw her arms around his neck

“You’ve such a strong will” he said darkly, breathing the words into her mouth. Chloe moaned at the sound of his voice

“How strong can you be though, Chloe?” Then his voice took on a deeply low and sexy undertone “How long can you withstand me?” He smiled seductively at her fluttering eyelids, her escaping breaths of desperation, her blushing and flushed skin, her moist and eager lips. Then he was caught off guard

“Show me what you’ve got” She fired back through breaths. His eyes flickered widely open and he stared at her as she ran her tongue over her lips. ‘Right’ he thought

“You wanna play it the hard way we can play it the hard way” Soft groans of his voice blew against her skin. She still hung in there

“Bring it on” She said, then her black eyes flew open. Lex looked slightly downfallen but smiled at the challenge. Chloe’s confidence drifted into the distance of her mind when she felt a lazy middle finger sliding up and down her wet opening. She scratched her nails down Lex’s back and he groaned out a husky gasp

“You cant do it” he panted against her hot skin, then slowly, with the slowness of a passing century slipped a cool finger deep inside her wet folds

“Mmm…” he moaned teasingly at her. Chloe writhed beneath him. He was doing this painfully slow on purpose

“You do this for me” He groaned darkly “Only and ever for me, does it keep you awake at night, when I’m not there?” Lex panted against her neck and licked her skin “Did you use to lie there at night riding yourself wishing it was me fucking you hard? Hmm?” He began to slowly slide his middle finger in and out of her, she was clamping desperately around him but it was no use, the one finger was a tease to top them all

“Yeh you did didn’t you baby?…” Lex panted at her in a growl. He laughed against her skin “My Chloe, my wife, my soul mate” he chanted sensually into her mouth

“I’m going to do things to you, you cant imagine. There’s nothing you can teach me.” He let the words sink in, knowing they probably weren’t true. His movement against her wetness was achingly slow paced. Chloe began to throb around him and she was absent mindedly moving herself against his hand, her body was trying to shift around him to force his finger in deeper. Lex thought she’d had enough and stroked a second finger at her wet folds

“I think all day about you, I think about impaling your tight little body against me, creaking my office desk until it breaks…” Then he darkened his voice into a secretive whisper as the second finger eventually slid inside and joined its brother

“And I’ll tell another thing” He said as steadily as he could. Chloe’s whimpering was heightening now “Shhh shhh listen to me, baby” Lex commanded and started a steady pounding rythem against her as a reward

He opened his mouth to speak, made sure she was truly listening and then confessed himself to her
“I’m going to tie you down so you cant move, I’m going to blindfold you so you cant see, I’m going to pin you down against my body and fuck you senseless night after night until your screams reach the heights of the stars above.”

Chloe found a new confidence

“What…what makes you think it’ll be me” she gasped and smiled slyly, moving her hips constantly against his fingers. Lex’s eyes flew open and he stopped his fingers completely. He narrowed his brow and scraped his index fingernail against her clit in rebellion. Chloe groaned darkly but didn’t back down

“I’d like to see you try…” she panted “When you’re handcuffed to a chair” Lex raised his eyebrows

“Oh yeh?” he breathed

“Yeh” She hissed, and with a newfound force she pushed hard against him, he stumbled backwards onto the sand and Chloe held him there. When he removed his fingers from her to push her back over she grabbed his wrists and pulled them to his sides.
Lex chuckled at her

“What, have you gone all dominatrix on me now?” He gasped, his voice returning to normal. Chloe just stared blankly at him with black eyes, Lex thought ‘Oh my God she has! I’ve pushed her over the edge!”

Without asking for permission Chloe suddenly jerked Lex’s khaki shorts open, as he was released against the firelight. She positioned herself above him and moved her hips from side to side. Her bikini bottoms weren’t a problem they just slid out of the way.
Slowly Chloe bent her hips down so Lex could feel how eager she was for him with the tip of his erection

“You feel that?” she gasped down at him ‘My turn now’ she thought. A groan escaped Lex but he refused to give in and plunge his cock deep inside her, he held himself still and went slightly mad doing so

“That’s for you…You feel what you do to me, I’m throbbing for you now Lex, I’m aching for you now, Lex” She bent her head down and bit him hard on the neck like a vampire. Lex ran his hands up the smooth curves of her back.
Lifting her head again she looked him in the eyes

“Keep completely still, or I walk” She threatened, not quite so sure that she meant it. Lex looked from eye to eye and nodded slowly at her, unsure of how much she meant it, too.
Chloe then drooped her eyelids shut and began sliding the head of Lex’s throbbing erection up and down the wide wet slits of her opening, then enclosed the entire head around her tightness

The noise that rose from Lex’s throat was too predatorial to be normal; he screwed up his eyes and desperately fought himself back as Chloe masturbated on top of him. ‘This woman has no conscience’ he thought

“Tell me what you’re thinking” Chloe cooed at him

“I’m thinking…ach, Jesus Chloe…I’m trying so hard to restrain my body from grabbing you roughly right now and finishing this” He choked out. The rest of his aching shaft was throbbing for her touch that she refused to give. Then like an answer to his prayers came the most magical words he’d ever heard

“Time out” She gasped. Lex opened his eyes to see that she was flaming for him as he was flaming for her. He didn’t wait to see if he had heard her properly.
Grabbing her by the waist her pulled her roughly up to slip down onto his waiting hard on. She enveloped him completely. The two sat facing each other as before but this time a deep sensation was growing between their thighs.
With a huge amount of strength Lex sat up on his knees and Chloe threw her legs around his waist, raising Chloe about half a foot from the sand he slipped one hand under her left thigh and the other underneath the small of her back
She arched back against him, her forehead touching and brushing the sand underneath her floating body.
Lex began pumping himself roughly into her with an accompaniment of groans and gasps

“Come on baby” He moaned out in a deep voice, He was sitting up on his shins with Chloe impaled around him, lowering his hips so that he touched the backs of his heels and then rising forward again sharply, making Chloe yelp and moan out for him

“Uh…harder” Came the exhausted female voice beneath his thighs, She bent her body up to close the space between them

“You want it harder?” Lex panted with his tongue held stationary in his open mouth. His dark face was glowing with sweat as the fire reflected in his eyes
“Harder Lex” She interrupted him
“You want it –harder-?” he interrupted her back with a massive pounding into her opening. This was proving to be difficult, Chloe had become so wet Lex was becoming drained at the lack of friction
“Fuck me Lex, come on” She edged him on further, he had to get there now, he was running through his mind how to do this

“Wait, Chloe turn around” He breathed. She nodded at his plan of action and swivelled round on Lex’s cock so that her back was against his chest. That motion alone helped and the two of them had to pant harder to get the energy to continue. Lex sat back on his heels and Chloe’s legs spread wide either side of his feet as he impaled her viciously and vertically, allowing him to reach depths of her insides he had previously only touched.
Lex breathed heavily against Chloe’s neck and began frantically rubbing his warm fingers over the sweeping curves of her chest. He gave three hard motions upwards which was all Chloe needed, she sorrowfully left Lex behind

“Nnnggh!” Chloe squealed with her head resting back on the curve of his shoulder as a wash of endorphins and adrenaline pumped through her veins and caused her to clamp down hard around Lex, harder than she ever had before. Her eyes rolled back in her head and her neck flopped against Lex’s shoulder helplessly
Lex jealously kept pounding himself harder into her, bring her orgasm to multiple. As she began to grow tighter and contracted around him it provided him with the friction he needed. His mouth gaped open as he got there at last. His whole body tingled and he panted in deep harsh breaths. Lex sat back wearily on his heels with the weight of Chloe’s body as his veins thumped and he shot round after round into her depths.

He was exhausted close to passing out, and Chloe looked positively drained of life as she panted up against him. She was still throbbing around him, her body glistened in the campfire.

“Who… won?” Chloe finally spoke. Lex was glad to hear she was still alive. He grinned a little and kept his eyes closed

“I’m not…sure” he said “Truce?” He couldn’t exactly offer much more except perhaps three days of solid sleep

“Truce” Chloe panted, leaned against him and the two fell to the sand below in a heap

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END

(pHew!...Christ i am not doing that again in a hurry! *collapses*)

drina
18th May 2003, 05:18
:drool: :drool: :drool:







let me catch my breath first




Wow....this is such a great piece of :smut: :worship2:

And I glad that both of them won, because in the game of love, no one should have advantage over their other half.

Not An Addict
18th May 2003, 06:13
MERCIFUL ZEUS!!! Ye GODS, woman, that was unbelievable! *collapses right along with you*

:drool: + :smut: = :worship2:

Queen Of Tact
18th May 2003, 06:25
Wow..... and Wow that was :drool: I so loved it....


CC :worship2:

Gemini
18th May 2003, 06:50
Woah- I'm totallly seeing petals in a new light her...! I really, REALLY liked reading that :yay:

BlueSabby
18th May 2003, 06:54
Wow That was........


shower, cold, now need cold shower man *incoherent babbling*

wow

Sabby

NightGlow
18th May 2003, 07:14
That was just toooo sexy. :drool: I mean, I know you warned us and everything about the intensity but that nearly drove *me* to new depths. And now... the cold shower... :blinkkiss:

Blaire023
18th May 2003, 07:23
uhmmm, see....I....uhmm.....THAILAND

wait, where was I going with that sentence?

You have left me speechless....actually before I leave a review I think I need to go read it over once more...or twice....or ah-hem..Think I may just print it and go to bed...



or....yeah, probably the latter.

B

tiff
18th May 2003, 07:38
:drool: That was...hot... I...I...time for a cold shower.

riblets
18th May 2003, 08:13
That was...fun. :huh:

sydsvaughn
18th May 2003, 08:59
3am in the damned morning and I need a very, very cold shower. That was HOT!

Wonderful writing!

Sara

Sway
18th May 2003, 11:59
oooooooooooooh. that was hot!! :worship2: :drool: :worship2: and i see someone has been getting their Josh Hartnett fix...

ruafair
18th May 2003, 12:02
:drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool:

My PC is gonna explode from all the drool, that was incredible........

(Fi runs off to take a very cold shower....)

Fiona

hfce
18th May 2003, 16:10
That was :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :ohmy: :drool: :drool: :worship2:


Hope :yay:

Warunee
18th May 2003, 20:30
Thailand. Beautiful country. Beautiful story. I loved it! :devil:

scifichick774
18th May 2003, 21:13
Woot! That was *fans self off* just fantastic hon. And now I vote for SV to be moved to a Japanese porn channel. What? I can't be the only one. ;)

petriebird18
19th May 2003, 02:01
:drool: :worship2: :drool: :worship2: :yay:
Need i say more?
~Deidre~
:chlexsign3:

bluemoongirl23
19th May 2003, 02:54
Marriage and smut. The two go together very well. Like how neither of them wanted to break....yet wanted to very badly.

Blue

zwabby
19th May 2003, 12:14
OMG
that was so hot!!
I think I speak for a lot of people when I say: Bring on the sequel ...........

:yay:


:worship2: :worship2: :worship2: :worship2:

A-u-r-o-r-a
20th May 2003, 20:00
lol, sequal... ^_^ perhaps maybe when i have a bigger lung capacity

by the way, i just re-read it and there are a hella-lotta typo's in this thing! eep! sorry, but my fingers were kind of on fire...

:)
Alyx xxx

staysixkid
23rd May 2003, 04:54
:popdevil: Absolutely brilliant! Rejuvenates my love in all things :chlexsign1:

fee :blinkkiss:

celticangel
23rd May 2003, 19:34
Wow! Loved it. :worship:

Katharina
23rd May 2003, 21:47
:worship2:
This story is...HOT...
You have to think about a sequal, but first I need a very, very cold shower.

prosthetic ballerina
1st August 2003, 08:19
christ, are you TRYING to kill us all?? <jumps into cold shower> jesus woman, that was hot stuff. my keyboard is going to jam from all the drool.
rockin&#39; smut tho&#33;&#33;&#33;
:chlexsign3:

lunaluthor
2nd August 2003, 21:31
:worship2: :worship2: I can&#39;t believe this I&#39;m totally spent from reading this no that&#39;s not a story anymore it&#39;s a porn and I looooove it and now I will search for my mate and jump him :devil:


I want more of this hot and steamy smut please :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

Lady Candy
17th October 2003, 23:28
I say that they both have won&#33;
Cool Fic;)

autumngold
20th October 2003, 02:11
Chloe was so smart to call a truce&#33; :chlexsign1: Excellent story&#33;&#33; :chlexsign3:

Shay
29th June 2004, 05:27
~bump~ back to the top...&#39;cause this story is off the chain.


Holy crap...I&#39;d forgotten how hot this story is.

Need...cold...shower.

Shay

sexi_angel_babee
2nd July 2004, 01:25
:chlexsign1: yea..... sequel..... this story is soooo hot. i probably read it like 5 times.... every time... it&#39;s sooo hot... lol. sequel&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33; come on~ :chlexsign1:

je_m'adore
19th July 2004, 07:13
nnnnnnngggggggghhhhhhh............ *chokes on own drool*

uh hugh....... guh hg ghu......

lucky you said.... wouldn&#39;t be responsible... for injuries... fell out of chair...

kidkarmina
19th July 2004, 08:44
I think this would says it all: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool: :drool:

becky
2nd September 2004, 03:16
lksajdf eris fkfo lkwjfl

lost....ability.....type.....

:worship2: :drool: :devil:

wow... that was the most intense thing: I don&#39;t think it was a truce, in fact, I think we need a rematch :popdevil:

~Becky~
:chlexsign3:

AlabamaWorley
5th September 2004, 03:54
Bless you.


Wow.

S.Ann Smith
7th September 2004, 04:56
:drool:

A-u-r-o-r-a
18th September 2004, 01:41
...just to let you guys know? i&#39;m working on a little prequal...
thanks for the bump&#33; :glow: :hush:

Janet
27th September 2004, 07:49
:smoker:

wow.




Prequel?

*heart beats faster*

Do tell..... :biggrin:

starmoon
12th April 2005, 00:59
Hot And Fun!!!!!!!!!!!

meghan036
12th April 2005, 02:21
holy crap! that was amazing. excuse me while I go take a cold shower.

teejei
12th April 2005, 20:36
sooooooooo...this is the famous fic i've been hearing about...:P

:drool: very frickin' HOT!!! :drool:

i sure learned some new tricks. :devil:

Catvampcrazines
14th April 2005, 23:25
oh my gosh, so freaking hot!!!

mary4falove
17th April 2005, 02:21
Damn...that was hot.... i need a to cool down for a while.....
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okay, i'm a bit better, but that was awsome...i would have caved since the beginning...lex is way to hot to resist....
Well, great fic!!

JosiCuervo
6th May 2005, 04:51
Wow...now that's some seriously HAWT Chlexilicious smut! I need a cigarette, a cold shower and a stiff drink, not necessarily in that order. Hell, I don't even smoke!

littlepearl
14th July 2005, 22:34
I've never read anything so hot than this !

Littlepearl

arkakitty
8th August 2005, 22:09
Soo great. Loved to read it :)

darkangel
22nd August 2005, 05:27
:drool: Hott smut.

Thaís
3rd September 2005, 05:17
So, so great...
And they're married too...
Just, just continue writting, ok??

pipersmum
18th November 2005, 02:15
That was very, very hot!! I read it twice it was that good. Right i need to go and have a cold shower i think!
Excellent writing.

katieandjason
18th November 2005, 17:50
Oh. My. Goodness. That was so. hot.

itsjustXchar
20th February 2006, 07:04
wow! *drools*

starmoon
18th December 2010, 08:20
love it love it this story was so hot!!!!!!!!!!! :drool:

qazwsx
19th December 2010, 15:20
Soooo hot!!

trckyrcky
10th July 2012, 11:45
Oh My God! I need a very cold shower after this. I wonder if I can get my husband to do the petal trick on me?

Ami Rose
19th August 2012, 07:06
Great story