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Rae
25th November 2004, 20:59
Title: Alt Delete (Part 1 of 2)
Author: CRae
Rating: R (for violence & a little not-so-fluffy sexual content)
Summary: Chloe's not as safe with Lex as she thought. AU Delete.
Disclaimer: Smallville & its characters/plots/lines belong to DC Comics, WB, & other people. I own zilch. But Michael is all mine. What?! He's not? But but but...
Spoilers: Delete
Feedback: Mmmm, tasty!
Notes: This is a very AU scene filler for Chloe's stay at the castle.






Part 1




Chloe looked through yet another drawer in Lex's desk finding nothing of interest except Altoids. Of course she stole the entire container with a kleptomaniac's glee.

What? He was a billionaire, he could afford more.

Sucking on the spicy mint, she sighed and sat back in the desk chair.

This was ridiculous. Chased out of her own home by friends turned assassins, forced to sit and twiddle her thumbs in Lex's castle while he was off probably raiding villages and deflowering innocent maidens. If Boy Wonder didn't fix this pesky 'Let's murder Chloe' problem, she was going to...

Obviously, this was not her best week.

Chloe flipped on the expensive orgasm-inducing laptop that lay on the desk, waiting impatiently for it to load.

Maybe she could find something incriminating, even if it was just farm animal pornography. Eww.

The screen popped up and the blonde began searching through the files.

Boring. Boring. Boring. Boring. Recent E-mails. Maybe he has a pen pal or a cyber sex buddy. The snoop formerly known as Chloe snickered and clicked on the icon.

The E-mail at the very top made her gasp.


From: Brainwave@instamail.org


Crap. Frantically, she clicked on the Status button.


E-mail Accessed: 01/28/04 at 5:36 PM


Chloe looked at her watch. 5:40.

He had a four minute head start.

Wasting no more time Chloe leapt out of the chair and ran for the doors. She came to an abrupt halt when one of the doors started to open. She made a break for the library stairs, bumping into the leather chair on the way.

Please let there be a door up there. Please let there be a door.

She reached the top of the steps only to realize there was no door. Trapped, she scrunched behind one of the reading chairs just as Lex stepped into the study.

Chloe peeked over the top.

The predator stood silently in the middle of the room searching for his prey.

Lex tilted his head to the side as if listening to something far away before he turned and left the study.

He never spared her a glance.

Chloe breathed a sigh of relief and laid her head against the back of the chair closing her eyes.

Too close.

After a couple of minutes, she made her way down the stairs. As she reached the bottom step an arm shot out and wrapped itself around her waist while a hand muffled her scream.

Struggling, Chloe bit her captor's palm. Kicking back, she rammed the heel of her heavy boot into his shin. Lex's viselike grip loosened and she sprinted for the door.

Her hand had barely touched the handle when Lex grabbed her by the arm and threw her across the room. Chloe fell to the hard floor with a yelp, stars of pain dancing before her eyes.

He stalked toward her, a strange gleam in his eyes. He was acting differently than the other attackers. Almost... Animalistic.

Panting, Chloe crab-walked across the floor before landing in a heap by the desk. Using the desktop for leverage, she pulled herself up and began backing toward the fireplace.

Lex abruptly ceased pursuit. Reaching into the waistband of his pants, he pulled out a gun and aimed it at her forehead.



To Be Continued...

asharnanae
25th November 2004, 21:18
:ohmy: man oh man,!! you can stop there!!!! MORE MORE MORE!! love the start, but now must see the rest! :blinkkiss:

Janet
25th November 2004, 21:43
*mutter mutter* teasing writers....


MORE! :blush:

buddyfozzy
25th November 2004, 21:49
NOOOOO!!! Get back here!! MORE, MORE!! :worship2: :ohmy: :worship2:

LaLa
25th November 2004, 23:27
:goof: OH MY OH MY OH MY!

no! don't let him hurt her (i won't say 'kill' because that would doom her, and we don't want that)

PLEASE! :crygreen:

xoxoLaLa

lexodus
26th November 2004, 00:36
Well, damn. Why did you stop it there? Come back and finish it!

lexchloe
26th November 2004, 02:44
Nice start, more please. :puppyeyes:

sylvia
26th November 2004, 05:01
Great start, with so many possibilities... more soon, please!

Little Miss Vixen
26th November 2004, 05:08
Oooo awesome, more soon

hfce
26th November 2004, 06:18
MORE PLEASE!!!!! :worship2:

sydsvaughn
26th November 2004, 06:20
Come back... please... you must fix this... please?

SaraC

Kit Merlot
26th November 2004, 16:11
This is a superb beginning--Please continue :biggrin:

Rae
27th November 2004, 05:49
So, this is the second & last part. It's short, but there is a sequel. Enjoy! :biggrin:


Author's Warning: Rating has changed. This part is rated PG-15/R.

Title: ALT Delete (Part 2 of 2)
Author: CRae
Rating: PG-15/R (for violence & a little not-so-fluffy sexual content)
Summary: Chloe's not as safe with Lex as she thought. 'Delete' AU.
Disclaimer: Smallville & its characters belong to DC Comics, WB, & other people. I own zilch. But Michael is all mine. What?! He's not? But, but, but...
Spoilers: Yes, for the third season episode, Delete.
Feedback: Tastier than apple pie.
Notes: This is a very AU scene filler for Chloe's stay at the castle.






Part 2 (Conclusion)




Chloe froze.

"Lex, snap out of it," she pleaded, desperation clearly written on her face.

He blinked and disengaged the gun safety switch.

It was no use. She was going to have to do something drastic.

Chloe reached behind her and grabbed the first thing she could, heaving it at Lex's body.

The heavy vase smashed into his stomach, knocking the wind out of him and making lose his hold on his weapon. The sound of the vase shattering when it hit the wood floor echoed throughout the study.

Taking advantage of Lex's distraction, the blonde tackled him to the ground and pinned his arms above his head. When he started to thrash, Chloe straddled him and dug her knees into his sides.

Now what?

Before she could decide a course of action, Lex ripped his arms from her grasp and flipped them over. Now that she was vulnerable, he pressed a jagged piece of the broken vase to her jugular, cocking his head to the side and evaluating her with a predatory glint in his blue eyes.

Dragging the point of the makeshift knife to the indentation in her collarbone, Lex pricked the unprotected skin gently before bowing his head and lapping the blood up with his tongue.

Chloe's breath hitched, the move causing her breasts to flatten against his hard chest. Lex smirked and inhaled her scent before closing his teeth around her ferociously, marking her pale skin.

She cried out in shock and pleasure, arching off the floor. Nervous but aroused, she trailed her fingertips across the smoothness of his head, her eyes becoming heavy-lidded.

Suddenly, the weight of Lex's body was lifted from her. Angry at the interruption, Chloe's eyes snapped open. She was ready to kick some ass.

Chloe quickly snapped them closed with a groan when she saw Clark Kent, in all his red and blue glory, glaring down at his now unconscious bald friend.

Uh-oh.


End?

kitten
27th November 2004, 05:55
END?! Not in a million years was that the end.

kitten
27th November 2004, 05:58
*shuffles feet, pouts*

That was rude and I apologize. What I meant to say was I need to know more because Chloe is just too snarky not to mention Lex's little lust attack when he recovers. He was under mind control to kill her and he got distracted and hit on her! Please write more.

Pweeeese?

sydsvaughn
27th November 2004, 06:53
um .... HELL YES more, please??? pretty please?

SaraC

sylvia
27th November 2004, 08:02
HELLO? That was NOT part 2 of 2. That was part 2 of 3. Or 2 of 4. Or 2 of [insert any number above 2]. I'd love to see a chapter with Chloe maybe trying to ignore this incident and put it behind her, but during one of their more heated verbal judo sessions, lets it slip accidentally, and then have all hell break loose :)

More pleeeaaase?

Impress
27th November 2004, 08:36
End? :D that was funny.

Now...how soon can you have the next part?

LaLa
27th November 2004, 12:15
:biggrin: GREAT JOKE REALLY U ALMOST GOT ME.... NEXT PART NOW!!!!

:huh: ...weird authors that thinks they can fool us blah!

xoxo LaLa

Béatrice
27th November 2004, 16:23
That's not the end I expected or wanted. So you'll hve to come back and update. :biggrin:

asharnanae
27th November 2004, 17:12
:devil: no, not the end, not the end!!!!!! MORE!!!

wonderful stuff, kill Clunk though!

buddyfozzy
27th November 2004, 17:51
HAHA :biggrin:

Little Miss Vixen
27th November 2004, 18:02
Please don't let that be the end, it was great and it can't possibly end there. I beg of you, please write more.

autumngold
27th November 2004, 18:40
I know you really wouldn't have it end there!! There just has to be more!! Please!! :worship2: :worship2: :chlexsign4:

hfce
27th November 2004, 18:59
I refuse to believe that was the last part. Now please put up part 3 as soon as you can. :devil:


Hope :cool:

tiger04
27th November 2004, 21:48
End, i'm sorry did you say end? NO no no there is more. there has to be more this is to good to just end :devil:

MORE PLEASE

AT

lexchloe
28th November 2004, 00:33
End???? what is this end you speak of???? We need more!!! :puppyeyes:

divine02us
29th November 2004, 06:38
No that can't be the end, there has to be more!



D

Ainur
29th November 2004, 07:45
END?! Not in a million years was that the end.
I soooo agree! Get back in here. I hate Clark! It was getting interesting. Stupid alien.

Kit Merlot
29th November 2004, 18:56
Okay, Toots, that can't be the end. Please come back and give us more!

PLEASE?!

santija
30th November 2004, 00:10
what-um-uh-um-what-uh-um-what

*calms down*

okay, sorry, but END?

my ass, that my friend is not an end, no I want more

*mumbles* annoying writer just ending it like that *sigh*

I give up, I just give up!

lexodus
30th November 2004, 05:43
You are an evil little imp, aren't you? I mean, you're not really going to end it there, are you? Don't you know what could happen when you piss off this many of us? Not good. I suggest you get back here and resolve this is in a good, Chlexy smutty way before things get really bad. :die:

JosiCuervo
6th July 2005, 04:03
Ummm...I'm confused...end?? WTF?! That's just cruel... *pout*

*runs for sequal*

Jen1388
7th July 2005, 02:02
How could you end it there? That's just sooooo not fair! Please come back and do a sequel!!! Pretty please!!!

darkangel
8th July 2005, 02:48
This was a very good fic.

gecko
4th November 2005, 14:49
end? NNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me there's more, you can't leave it like that, not with that cliffhanger

starmoon
4th November 2005, 21:13
Ummm...I'm confused...end?? WTF?! That's just cruel... *pout*

*runs for sequal*
please there has to be more i will just die if you don't write a squel but i think it is still a really good story cliffhanger or not.

starmoon
15th January 2006, 00:12
great story but please don't let it be the end it was just getting really good. hope you put more but if not it is still a great story.

Kikina
15th January 2006, 13:21
Seriously begging for a sequel , pleease? ´Cause it´s so good, you can´t just end it like this, can you? :eek:

Sandy
20th March 2006, 20:58
Hey! I just read this, now get back here and complete it! *pouts*

starmoon
24th March 2006, 09:22
please finish i realy want to know what happens next.

JasonsLea
25th March 2006, 06:36
Hey I'm a lil behind but YOU HAVE TO COMPLETE THIS!!!!!! OMG this is good!

Nikiys
28th April 2006, 17:14
end? NNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! please tell me there's more, you can't leave it like that, not with that cliffhanger


yes..
i'm agree..

PLEASE UPDATE!!:devil:

starmoon
17th July 2006, 23:25
please continue i is just mean and evil not to.

kris 105
18th July 2006, 09:51
I agree with everybody. There is no end here. Nope. Nada. Zelch. so please sequel or continue.

Alizaleven
31st July 2006, 10:35
I remember reading this before but when I wanted to comment my computer when crazy so here's my comment.. I loved this! Much better then the real eppie... there is a sequel right?? cuz if there isn't i may just have to sit here for a while and wonder what happens!!! please please let there be a sequel :D

~*~Tasha~*~
2nd August 2006, 16:40
Hope you decide to add more to this one. I'd like to see what happened next.

kirt30
5th August 2006, 23:57
loved it will you do a sequal to it

jedi
31st October 2006, 11:14
As a dying person from this boring S6, i've been looking s3 fanfics for a while. this fic's made my day. I'm going to read sequel.
Great work

channytell
4th November 2006, 05:26
ohhhhhh im with everyone else more more more please.....

xoxox

starmoon
29th October 2007, 07:07
more please keep going i really like this story.

malugargula
30th October 2007, 00:41
You really should write more chapters
:)
Great fic

superag
30th October 2007, 00:58
Apparently the joke of it being the end was in fact the truth. So sad b/c there are so many places this short little diddy could go. Oh well. UPDATE!

BeachBabi
1st December 2007, 12:47
get back in dat chair wif the fingers on da keyboard and give us our next post!


Please.......

Kitty Black Cat
1st April 2010, 22:01
That was a really great fic and it opened sooooo many different chlex doors. It cannot end here, because really someone would mention what happened. I mean, come on, prudish farmboy Clark finding them in that position? I'm pretty sure he'd have smthg to say about this. I don't know if you wrote more somewhere else, or if you decided to just end it there, but I must say that I really hope you find the time and inspiration to continue this. I would be ecstactic! You did a great job and I know you would do it again if you continued this. Anyway, thanks for writing this. It was a very interesting Delete scene!!!

reyeslu
6th August 2011, 05:45
sneaky lex, cause even mind wiped and doing somebody else's dirty work he wasn't going to chase her. Let the prey come into his trap.

Dominique
6th February 2012, 03:51
Sequel????

jenwin23
21st May 2012, 07:50
I agree that you could/should keep going.

Ami Rose
17th July 2012, 05:57
OMG you didnt! Come back please! More please!