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Blaire023
13th April 2003, 08:24
Disclaimer: Of course i don't own smallville or anything to do with it. If I did Lex would be on a nude beach permanently and Clark would be in tights...most likely dancing at a gay bar...huh...what????

A/N: happy Birthday Peggy, from both of us. I talked
it over with him, and he said to include his
impression on it since he challenged me in the first
place. So here's to you...Cheers! Okay, so no one ever explained the difference of NC17 and R to me...and with my gutterful mind I'd go with a PG13 rating on this...however I've been told it's definitely not Pg13 Don't people know when I'm kidding? Hope everyone enjoys!

SMUT WARNING! NC17-R

Seven Minutes in Heaven

Chloe sat crossed legged on the big persian rug.
'Let's have a look see here. Who have we got?'

Lana sat beside Clark and Pete sat beside her on the
rug with an empty bottle of Tynant she had just
finished off. They had been here at Lex's for movie
night. Through the hoards of candy that had been
consumed everyone was buzzing with enough caffeine to break down the Luthor walls. Lex sat idlely by on the
leather couch. 'Of course Mr. Wholier than thou won't
play such childish games.'

Lana had had her turn with Pete and he came out
gingerly covered in red lipstick all over his face.
Everywhere but his lips.

"My turn!" Chloe said and placed her hand on the
bottle to spin it.

"Wait! I have to go to the bathroom." Pete stood up
and walked out of the room. I glared after him but he
was oblivious to the small flames that licked around
the hole burnt into the back of his head. Lex caught
my glare and chuckled.

"Here. I'll sit in." He said reluctantly and took
Pete's place beside me. I smiled gratuitously at him.


"Thanks, Lex."

"No problem."

Clark and Lana were in deep conversation about Lana's
seven minutes in pergatory with Pete.

"eh-hem, spinning away." I grin uncontrollably and my
hand flings the bottle in a spiralling motion. The
open end of the bottle stops and points directly at
Lex. No, no way could it have stopped half way
between him and Clark, oh no, that would have been
easier. He stands up and offers me a hand. I stand
up on my own. He shrugs casually and walks over to
the designated closet. He opens the door for me and
just as I'm about to dispappear Lana shrieks. "Don't
forget the lipstick!"

I close my eyes slowly and fend off any bad thoughts
about Lana. I apply the lipstick and grab Lex's arm
dragging him into the closet after me. We stand in
complete silence and darkness.

"Three, two, one, go..." We hear Lana start the
initiation. I lean back against the door.

"There's no way I'm making out with you." I say and
he looks at me and faintly clutches his chest.

"I am so hurt." He leans against the wall next to me
our arms brush lightly.

"I'll make you a deal." I said suddenly. I came into
this damn closet and I'm going to get something out of
it.

"Now you're speaking my language." He leaned with one arm. "Continue."

"I'll kiss you anywhere on your body, your choice, as
long as it's not visible."

"And that's a deal how?"

"I won't be wasting my time for the next seven minutes
and you can teach me how to kiss?"

"Yet I'm somehow missing out on the pro's for me."

"Fine nevermind."

My hand is like centimeters away from the doorknob
when he grabs my wrist. He puts my hand over his
chest. "Kiss me here."

I feel the flush rise up my face but it's considerably
dark although my eyes have finally started adjusting.
I slowly run my hands down his plain white tshirt
until I reach the hem. My hands wander over the taut
muscles of his abdomen up his chest. His hands grab
my hips and he pulls me a little closer. Besides the
fact that I'm feeling up an older, wiser, more
experienced man my hands aren't all that shaky.
Lifting his shirt up as I go his skin seems to glow a
path in the dark. Smooth ripples of muscle tighten
and tense against my touch and then almost immediately
relax. "Chloe." he whispers into my hair. 'Just an
itty bitty kiss right?' I ask myself. 'Nope.' Not
when I catch his nipple in my mouth and suck on it
before nipping at it.

For the first time in my life I feel faint when he
pulls me by my hips closer to his body and I feel the
reaction I've had on him. I start licking and
breathing and biting at his flesh. I feel his hands
grab my hair and my head is being pulled back roughly
before I feel his lips crush into mine. In the
meantime I feel a complete slip of insanity and lose
all touch with reality when I catch myself undoing his
belt. His lips become softer and more pliable and
then he moves down my body. From my lips to my jaw to my neck. When I feel his teeth sink into the flesh
above my collar bone I know I've gone totally insane
for sure this time because I can't even tell who
moaned first when my hand slipped down his pants and
into his boxers. Like nothing I'd ever felt or come
anywhere in the close proximity of before in my life,
the silk texture of his skin over the hardness of his
erection brought me to a new impulse. I started
moving my hand without even thinking about it. The
way his throbbing cock pulsed at my touch, his moans
that met mine as his lips and teeth dug deeper into my
neck.

It wasn't untill I started to kneel that we were
interrupted by Lana's voice. "Time's up." Lex
groaned and his hand was now on the back of my head
resting there.

"I can't fucking believe this." He muttered and
pulled me back up to him. His lips sealed over mine
as he buckled his belt. "We are going to finish
this."

"You are joking right?" I look up at him in
disbelief.

"What do you mean?"

The door flung open and Lana stood there with her
hands on her hips. "I said..." her voice trailed off
when she saw our bodies pressed together. His lips
hovered over mine. I leaned up and kissed him lightly
on the lips. I exited the closet and sat back down on
the rug. Lex followed and sat closer to me than
before. Clark and Pete took in our dissheveled
appearances and Clark smiled a bit.

"Your turn Lex." Lex spun the bottle and the open end
pointed to Clark. However, the rules clearly stated
that if the said end pointed to a person of the same
sex and the bottom end didn't, the person the other
end pointed to goes into the closet. Lex grabbed my
hand and pulled me over to the closet before any
protests could be heard.

He slammed the door hard and took off his shirt. I
stood staring at him. Afterall, the opposite end of
the bottle had in fact been pointing to me.

"Chloe, I want you." His lips lightly kissed mine and
a bolt of energy swept through me settling at a
throbbing point in the pit of my stomach before
reaching the heat between my legs. He pulled my shirt
off over my head and we heard Lana sigh, "Go."

"A little late isn't she?" I muttered with a grin and
stood before him baring my naked upper self. Why
didn't I wear a bra today?

He dipped his head and planted a hot and heavy kiss
between my breasts, slowly licking his way over to a
nipple and gently teasing the other one with his
fingers. His skilled, long, enticing fingers. "God,
I want you in me so bad."

Of course my timing was impeccable seeing as how I had
meant to say it to myself but in all actuality, had
said it very much so out loud. He pushed me up
against the wall and fumbled with the button fly on my
pants. I giggled, who would see the day when Lex
Luthor, of all the men in Smallville, or the world
even, had trouble keeping his composure enough to
undress a willing virgin. "Shit." I said quietly.

"What?" He pulled back enough to give me space. "If
you don't want this just say the word."

"Virgin." There that was a word. His mouth dropped
and his hands rested on my shoulders, his eyes stared
deeply into mine and our forheads rest upon eachother.


"Are you sure?"

"Am I sure I'm a virgin?"

"No, no, are you sure you want to do this here and
now?"

"No." I didn't mean to say it, because god, I really
wanted him bad, but losing my virginity to a sex god
in a coat room with three good friends right outside
the door just kinda made me simmer down. "I mean,
yea, I want to, but here, ummm..."

"It's okay." he kissed me lightly and picked my shirt
up off the ground.

I took it and dropped it again. "Lex, when I said I
wanted you inside me, I meant it."

Lex looked at me again with questioning in his eyes.
He pulled my pants down slowly followed by my very
lacy, very sexy panties I had worn for absolutely no
reason. So there I was, completely nude in his closet
and he still donned a pair of pants and boxers.
Something didn't seem right to me. That is until he
picked me up and my legs wrapped instantaneously
around him. He back me up into a wall and one hand
moved down the front of my body.

I held onto his neck for dear life. When the initial
contact of his slender finger against my clit arrived
I nearly screamed. His lips slammed hard over mine
and I moaned so deep into his mouth I thought I heard
him do it right back. His finger entered me and my
back arched sharply against the wall. "Jesus, Chloe.
You feel so good." Just the fact that Lex Luthor had
some part of his body inside me, teasing me and
satisfying a hunger I didn't know I possessed was mind
blowing. As soon as he entered another finger a
cosmic wave swept over me and I shuddered with
delight.

My moans settled he took the liberty of rubbing my
clit with the palm of his hand while his fingers
thrust deeper and deeper until I swore stars appeared
before my eyes. "Lex." I screamed into his shoulder
and bit down hard. Probably harder than I should of
because the sound coming from his lips echoed meanings of pain more than pleasure. As soon as the tidal waveswept over me and had began to wash away his thumb, gently applying pressure to my clit, brought every sense I had back full force if not harder this time
and his fingers remained still while my insides
clenched around them. His breathing was out of synch
and rapid breaths hollowed through my hair.

He held me tight to him pulling out his fingers
slowly. "My turn." I said huskily as I sand to my
knees. I unzipped his pants and pulled his cock out,
the head nearly soaked in precum I looked up at him
sweetly as if to say thank you and look on his face
rendered me speechless. The expression purely
reflected mixed emotions of shock and lust. I ran my
tongue along his cock and his hands immediately
traveled to my hair grabbing two handfuls. "Be
gentle" I said against him and his hold on me gave a
little.

"God, Chloe, I want you so bad. I want to be inside
you." And with that, taking the meaning no further
than what we were doing right now I ran my lips up his
cock and slid it into my mouth letting my muscles
relax. Only learning that from chugging coffee on my
way to school. Of course, I'm sure he doesn't want me
to mention that now. And why is my mind wandering
away from the fact that I have Lex Luthor's penis in
my mouth and he's moaning my name?

With the help of his hands directing me it took all of
about two minutes tops I'd say before he pulled out of
my mouth and I used my hands vigorously to finish him
off. He held me close as our bodies slowed down.

"Stay with me tonight, Chloe. Let me make love to
you."

"Lex, in order to make love, don't you have to *be* in
love?"

Lex looked down at me and kisses my lips softly. So
softly I thought I'd melt. It held so much more
meaning than the rough ones we shared. "I'd like to
think so." he said in reponse to my question. I
smiled up at him. I broke Lex Luthor. Billionaire
playboy just fell for me. 'This I'd like to write an
article on.' But then Lana called out that time was
up and Lex yelled back. "Go home." I laughed loudly
and called out my good byes. He wrapped me in his
arms and pulled me even closer.

"So what do you say, Miss Sullivan. Will you stay the
night with me?" Lex actually looked sincere.

"And what about tomorrow night?"

"Dinner."

I nod and look up at him. A huge smile comes over his
face. "Thank you."

"Anytime." I was guessing he was saying thank you for
not shooting down his ego, but right now with the
butterflies and every other emotion flitting across me
right now has gotten me confused and if he can indulge
himself in this feeling, then so can I.


The end ;)

Sway
13th April 2003, 08:49
oh wow, that was awesome, great work!! no chance of a sequal huh??

:blinkkiss: Sway

Queen Of Tact
13th April 2003, 08:53
oh no you don't!!! You get right back here and post more!!! You got another thing coming if you think your going to end it like that(lol)...

CC

Tandy
13th April 2003, 10:20
Great wonderful work! :biggrin: But I agree, a sequel is needed. Please?

Tandy :blinkkiss:

dsapiro
13th April 2003, 20:30
Great job, however, there is a clear need of a sequel. :chlexsign2:

Julie
13th April 2003, 23:08
ok, ok... NOW YOU FREAKING WRITE ME A SEQUAL!!!! NOW!

Seriously, it rocked! Verrrry goood :devil:

sabby
18th April 2003, 22:48
Oh I read this one over at Malu's and I sooo loved it!

"GO HOME!" *snickers* great

And I'm all with Julie on the sequel!! But seeing as you cut me some slack on tbt about you know what, I won't be too dissapointed if you don't do one

Off topic: will you EVER update 'undecided' again? Cause I'm still waiting for it!

hugs,
Sabby

Blaire023
19th April 2003, 08:55
Okay all, I can do this two ways, I can either do a sequel or post the original 7 minutes in heaven. When i went to type it up I didn't have what I had written in front of me so I ended up with what you all read. Now I have the paper and so it's your choice. And about Undecided, I totally forgot about it, thanks. I'll update it tomorrow. Thanks all for the kind words. :blinkkiss:

Blaire

sabby
19th April 2003, 12:59
Well, how about you do both? Post a 7 minutes-revised and do a sequel? If you're up for it, of course!

And thanks for updating undecided, I'll be waiting (im)patiently to get my hands on a new chap

hugs,
Sabby

ryuu-chan
20th April 2003, 19:52
H-O-T!

I really wouldn't mind being stuck in a closet with a willing Lex.. Bad bad fantasy! *slapsherself* Now I'll just spend the night dreaming about closets *sighs*

Blu_FireFly81
21st April 2003, 05:28
You can't just leave it there you have us all worked up with not release...no pun intended, if the original is different than this version then why not post it and let us see which one is better and if you can why not post a sequel while your at it since we need an ending to satisfy some members *cough* :newdevil: :satanwink:

hurlingturtles
6th May 2003, 06:57
I love love loved this!! Do whatever you want as long as you write more!!!

kidkarmina
10th July 2003, 19:45
WOW!!! This was really good. It had everything from smut to humor to romance to...like I said everything. :wub: :yay: :worship2: :worship2: GREAT JOB!!

Again, I've enjoyed it immensely :cool: !!

:chlexsign4:

jem
11th July 2003, 12:32
ditto to what kidkarmina said... PLUS SOME

:worship2: :worship2:

lunaluthor
12th July 2003, 19:47
so swwet and soooo worth of a sequal
go on girl :biggrin:

Lady Candy
9th October 2003, 21:30
Hi, it's the first time that I write on this forum...I have read this ff just now.
And I love it

julz
12th March 2004, 02:36
nice, :drool: , very very nice
although ooc, i thought it was great

carebear72884
12th March 2004, 05:20
that was.. :drool: :drool: hott...but i read something about a sequal, is there a sequal??

starmoon
12th April 2005, 00:58
i just this love this story it keep me on the edge of my seat the whole time.

Blaire023
16th April 2005, 05:42
Sadly Amber, there is no sequel, but I will be remastering the one shot up above very shortly.

as for you starmoon, thanks! that means a lot. this one probably one of my firsts and I hadn't yet understood the reasoning to having a beta.

squash
16th April 2005, 20:28
I reread this story, because I hadn't read it in forever....it's still just as great as the first time.

good work

JosiCuervo
30th April 2005, 07:07
I had previously read this fic on Malu's site, but I just couldn't help reading it again! It's a wonderful piece of Chlex smut and I so heart it...Please continue...

gutter_buddy3
3rd May 2005, 05:34
Awesome job....sequel???

chexfan
28th July 2005, 05:51
I can't help but agree with everyone who's been singing this fic's praises, and I too would love another seven minutes in heaven ;-)

kimmie
28th July 2005, 11:10
That was HOT!!!!!!!!!

Kimmie

darkangel
23rd August 2005, 09:58
great fic.

juuicebox
22nd October 2007, 22:02
totally hot. sequel?

BeachBabi
18th November 2007, 08:32
dont think we gettin a sequel

malugargula
18th November 2007, 17:15
This fic is amazing
:)
Now she`s going to spend a whole night in heaven
LOL

Emch
5th February 2008, 13:43
I love this fic. I found it some time ago in your homepage and I like it a lot. When I say it here I read again, and I wanted to say GREAT JOB.

Keep writing, would you?

~*~Tasha~*~
5th October 2009, 06:07
I don't know how I missed reviewing for this one. I had it saved, but somehow not reviewed. This was a neat little story. I enjoyed it. Nicely passionate.

carolannw5
8th November 2009, 14:25
Fantastic!

Spin the bottle!

Loved it!

:clapclap:

stampiej
8th November 2010, 10:07
Great fic!

Ami Rose
29th December 2012, 03:18
Awwww so sweet!

skatiefan
29th December 2012, 06:50
Wow! That was hot. Spin the bottle for me was never like that but then again this is Chlex fanfic. =D

It would have been great to see how they spent the night together as well and how they got rid of everyone because somehow I doubt they would have just left without asking Lex and Chloe questions.

Great story all the asked though.

malugargula
30th December 2012, 19:21
Just reread this hot delicious fic