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Dannyblue
20th June 2004, 08:32
Title: Night Visits (1/1)
Author: Dannyblue
Email: dannyblue2@yahoo.com
Summary: Sequel to “Choices In the Dark”.
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: Chloe/Lex.
Disclaimer: SMALLVILLE and its characters do not belong to me. No infringement is intended, no profit is made.
Distribution: All you have to do is ask.
Feedback: Yes, please.
Author’s Note: This came from two things. One was me trying to write a sequel. (I usually don’t, but I wanted to give it a go.) The other was trying to write something without thinking about it too much. I just let it flow. Hope you enjoy.




Some nights, Lex was content to watch Chloe sleep. To watch her closed eyelids flutter as she dreamed. To watch her chest rise and fall in a slow, gentle rhythm. To study the way she looked bathed in moonlight, her skin flawless, her golden hair turned silver-blue.

On those nights, he could touch her. Tuck a stray strand of hair behind her ear. Run his hand down her arm, slowly, committing the feel of her soft, silken skin to memory. He could sit next to her, on the edge of her bed, and drink in her warmth. Let it surround him, and fill all those cold, empty spaces.

But those nights were fewer and farther between.

Lex stopped at the foot of the bed, in the shadows where the moonlight didn’t reach.

She was lying on her back tonight, the blankets pushed down so they barely reached her hips. Her arms were flung over her head so that her tank top rode up, leaving the strip of skin above her pajama bottoms bare. The slightest smile curved her full lips, as if she were lost in some pleasant dreams.

The room was silent except for the sound of her breathing. And every breath she took sent another shiver racing up Lex’s spine, played across his nerve endings, bringing them to life. He could almost feel those breaths on his skin, a tickling warmth against his neck.

Lex took a deep breath, and she was there on the air. Peaches again, the one she seemed to favor most lately. And beneath that was her own scent, filling the night with the scent of sunlight. Coursing through his blood like honey, thick and warm. Flowing down until his chest was tight with it.

He took a step closer, resting his hands on the footboard. And he let his eyes drink her in. The way her breasts stretched the material of her tank top. The way the pajama bottoms rode low on her hips, leaving her navel exposed. The way her lips parted, almost in invitation.

Lex’s heart pounded, slow and steady but hard, in his chest. And there was nothing to stop the thoughts that drifted, cold and analytical, through his mind.

She was a heavy sleeper. And there were so many places—secret, hidden places—he hadn’t allowed his fingers to explore.

And if she woke? True, they weren’t alone in this house. But a hand over her mouth would keep anyone from hearing her screams.

He imagined her hands striking out at him, pounding against his face and chest. And he imagined not only feeling pain but pleasure, because they were her hands, her nails clawing at his skin.

He imagined the little whimpers that would issue from her throat, caressing his ears like siren song. So sweet and pure, he could ignore the fear in them. And the sound of her clothes ripping would be like whispers.

He imagined the feel of her struggling beneath him. Every inch of bare skin pressed against his. Her chest pressed to his chest. Her stomach pressed against his. Her legs tangled with his legs.

And he imagined what it would be like to bury himself inside her. Sinking so deep, all he could feel was her warmth.

Lex’s stomach clenched, his abdomen suddenly feeling hard and tight. His hands clutched the footboard until it was cutting into his palms. Until his knuckles turned white. His eyes raked across her body, piercing so deep it seemed he should have been able to see through the clothes that got in the way.

On nights like this, he wasn’t a content watcher. He was a predator, hungry and hollow, inches away from the only prey that could fill the emptiness. And he wanted her to wake up. To see him standing there amongst the shadows. He wanted to see her eyes widen in fear, her mouth open to scream. Because, then, there would be nothing left to lose. And nothing to stop him from making all of those dreams real.

He leaned forward, reached out slowly, finally resting his hand on her ankle. Captivated for a moment by the heat of her skin, which seemed to burn through the pajamas and into his palm. He ran his hand up her leg, across her knee, up to her thigh, the heat burning brighter and hotter, branding him.

And she stirred in her sleep, a frown puckering her brow, head turning from one side to the other.

Body still with anticipation, Lex watched, waiting for her eyelids to flutter open. His hand tightened on her thigh, fingers digging into her flesh. Maybe that would be enough…

But her restlessness only lasted for a moment, and she quickly settled into sleep again.

Disappointment crashing over him like a wave, Lex released the shaky breath he hadn’t even known he’d been holding. Reluctantly, he removed his hand, clenching it into a fist because it felt so empty and cold. As he took a step back, the practical part of him—the part that always allowed him to stay in control—insisted it was for the best. That they were just dreams, and that’s what they should stay. That there was a line he didn’t want to cross. Because he wanted her, but not that way.

But the predator howled, its hunger clawing at his insides. Pushing at him. Urging him towards the bed. Towards her scent and warmth. Towards promises of screams and fear. Pleasure and pain.

Without realizing, he took a step closer.

**********


Chloe woke with a start.

Caught in the grip of post-sleep panic, she struggled against the blankets that were snuggly tucked beneath her chin. Finally pushing them away, she sat up in bed, gasping for air. Her heart was pounding, and even the sunlight streaming through the window brought little comfort.

Drawing up her legs, she wrapped her arms around her knees. As she took deep, calming breaths, she tried to remember her nightmare. Because that’s what it must have been. Only, her mind was a blank. Whatever had been chasing her through her dreams, had made her wake up filled with fear and dread, was gone now.

Closing her eyes, she took one more deep breath. As her heart slowed to normal, as her fear started to dissolve in the sunlight, she shook her head. Well, a few people had told her she could be a little over-dramatic.

Smiling a little at her own theatrics, she got out of bed. As she took a step towards the dresser, she became aware of a strange sensation in her leg. A soft, dull ache.

A confused frown puckering her brow, she sat on the edge of the bed, and pulled up the leg of her loose-fitting pajama bottoms. And was perplexed by what she found.

They looked like bruises, faint, blue/black smudges dotting her skin.

Frown deepening, all she could do was stare. She racked her brain, trying to figure out how they’d gotten there. Maybe she’d bumped into something without realizing it? Not like it would be the first time.

As she studied the bruises, puzzled over how they’d gotten there, she was surprised to realize what else they looked like.

Fingerprints.




THE END

sylvia
20th June 2004, 08:49
Glad to see a sequel at last (: I really enjoyed 'Choices in the Dark' and this piece follows up on the darker side of Lex's obsessions very well. But you can't leave it there! There's so much potential! So I'm hoping you'll consider developing this into a longer story.

tigroon
20th June 2004, 08:52
uhhhh creepy !!!

autumngold
20th June 2004, 11:06
Chloe just can't let her reporter's mind rest with new, fingerprint shaped bruises on her leg!! I think she would want to investigate, maybe pretend to sleep? Does this mean I'm asking for another story? Of course!! But thank you for this story!! I love how you show both the good and bad side of Lex's character!! Does he even realize that he's stepping closer to the bad?:chlexsign4:

crazygirl
20th June 2004, 12:57
Soo creepy, but sooo good. Can I get a sequel to this sequel? Please.

mgabri
20th June 2004, 13:47
Glad to see you decide to do a sequel :biggrin: hehehe Dark fics are always good.
Can't help to agree, but Chloe's inquisitive nature is bound to realize something is up. :blinkkiss: hint hint

Béatrice
20th June 2004, 20:49
That was very good!!! :biggrin: Thanks.

asharnanae
20th June 2004, 20:49
:devil: :biggrin: Love the darker side of chlex! :blinkkiss:

hfce
20th June 2004, 23:58
Interesting.... :biggrin:

ColumbiaBlue
21st June 2004, 08:00
Lex is so creepy in this!!! Yikes. And Chloe's a smart little bug to figure out that the bruises look like finger prints. Very interesting.

~Manda

Krysia
16th February 2005, 00:58
WOW [ again ]
I can see the conflict inside of Lex , he is torn between going after what he wants [ which he was raised to do as a Luthor. You don't waste any opportunities . You want something you go and get it] and not doing it [ because a part of him knows that if he does that there will be no turning back]. The question i have in my mind now is how long can he wait?
i loved this story
:worship2:

suspension of disbelief
24th February 2005, 07:13
Good story ......Yup... hoping that you would continue this...... :chlexsign4:

Reese
25th February 2005, 01:57
Wow. Good stuff.

But you know what would be even better?

More.

Any chance of that? Huh? Maybe? Please.

Reese

junked_helix
1st May 2005, 21:02
I wish he just continued.

I'm a bit evil and crafty but well...hehe

nevermind....
anyway, great story

darkangel
10th July 2005, 04:21
Please do a sequel . This was too good to only be a one-part fic.

Cho_Hakkai
5th August 2005, 02:51
'Choices in the Dark' was chilling, but this is just down right terrifying.

It's like a charcter study of Lex. I love this fic because his obsession is just that - an obsession. I also love it because he relates to her on the purely phisical level; he doesn't mention anything about her wit.

That Lex rationally knows that Chloe shouldn't wake up, and yet does everything he shouldn't do to wake her is an accurate portrayal of human behavior.

The ending is fantastic. It leaves a whole corridor of doors open.

-Cho

AlwaysPretending
1st October 2005, 15:03
Clearly Lex is a disturbed individual and his nature is really getting the better of him. He is leading up to a ending with Chloe, one that definitely isn't going to end happily - for either of them.

Kerry

starmoon
30th November 2005, 18:58
that was great and a little scarie :devil: there should be a sequel to this were chloe finds out of something like that.

katieandjason
30th November 2005, 22:29
ok, that I find deeply disturbing.

sinecure
9th March 2006, 10:06
I really like this story. It shows a lot of depth of character, and Lex is the most interesting one on the show. You captured him very well. It's disturbing as well as enthralling. I wanted to see more. You really got me craving dark!Lex/Chloe fic which is few and very far between. In fact, this and the other part are the only ones I've ever read. Excellent job! :)

persephone47
13th March 2006, 22:35
interesting story, I'll have to go back and read the first part, any chance there is a sequel to this one also?

stwbrrydelight
22nd March 2006, 13:41
Ok, found the sequal...wonderful but not quite fullfilling...cant leave it here
Your adoring fans request more
Will Chloe figure it out? Will Lex take a step forward? How will Chloe react?

somethingeasy
8th May 2006, 14:23
I was both terrified and thrilled at the prospect of reading the sequel to 'Choices in the Dark'. And you certainly did not disappoint with your delivery. It was seriously scary. I'm actually grateful it was such a short story, because I actually found myself holding my breath while reading through the ending half.

Please continue writing more 'Scary, Creepy, Obsessive Luthor' fics. I just love 'em soooo much :P

~*~Tasha~*~
6th July 2006, 04:09
Whoa ... creepy Lex. Dang. Nicely written.

jafrizbee
7th July 2006, 00:47
gave me the shivvers, lex's fantasy was so disturbing...but even though it was creepy, it was really well done. keep up the good work!

somethingeasy
15th May 2007, 14:09
I read over this one again, and it scared me as much through this new reading as it did during the very first time I came across this thread. I love how you captured this moment on how Lex's obsessive nature can very easily lead to madness.

I can very easily imagine him carrying on a 'normal' conversation with Chloe during waking hours where he leaves her the impression that he only regards her as a fond, but distant acquaintance... all the while hiding his stalker-like obsession with her. I'm sure if anyone were to tell Chloe that Lex has been watching her while she's sleeping, contemplating attacking her during her most vulnerable moment... she probably would have laughed at the absurdity of the suggestion.

Lex's ability to hide his madness only makes him all the more frightening.

I'd really love to see a continuation of this storyline, but I'm scared to imagine where 'the next step' would take us. Lex is right on the verge of actually acting on his psychotic, obsessive impulses... and Chloe would be psychologically scarred and destroyed in the aftermath. Perhaps there's a way for Lex to be 'saved' from himself over here... but it's going to take more courage and imagination than I am capable of.

I guess I'll have to settle for the fact that this short story is going to remain just a short story... But there are other similar themes that DannyBlue is working on that seems to have the possibility of a more hopeful ending...

So, how goes 'Fall into Your Dreams'? :D
I can't wait to see what's the deal with the strange Chlex interaction taking place in that story. Please update soon.

AnikaBri
17th April 2008, 01:58
I loved the first...and the second SO didn't disappoint!!

Ami Rose
7th October 2013, 14:00
Soo creepy, but sooo good. Can I get a sequel to this sequel? Please.

Yes please:-)