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santija
24th May 2004, 19:22
Title: Star struck

Author: Santija

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Sadly not mine

Spoilers: None

Summary: A little poem about forbidden love

A/N: So today Ernie and I are really depressed and what better way then to write a poem and make other people sad, don’t know why but this poem really made me sad, felt like crying after I wrote it, I’ll probably will soon, Ernie cried, he’s such a baby, but I love him, he’s my inspiration, yes I know he’s a computer, but I still love him *hugs computer and gives him a little pat*

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Star struck

He meets her under the star struck night

When the moon shines so enlightening bright

Where flowers bloom below the crooked tree

Along the stream of the glistening sea

He takes her into a sweet embrace

Wiping away tears, as his hand cups her face

He gives her a rose to banish all her fears

She gives him a kiss for all those long years

Love between them is by all forbidden

That’s why our lovers must keep it hidden

As they dance to the music playing in their ears

The world around them no longer appears

This night belong to the lovers alone

As their beating hearts entwine to one

Glances and touches burn like an endless fire

But their hope is sadly beginning to tire

They cannot stand being apart

It is slowly crushing their entwined heart

She reaches up, stretching for the stars

Silently asking why the world is to them so harsh

He cups her face again and their eyes meet

Lips connect in a needing blistering heat

They tried to love free, but it brought them hate

As much as he loved her, he could not put her through that fate

As our lovers pull away, there’s so much left to say

But now they have to go their separate way

Our lovers shall for now part

But their love is still beating in one entwined heart

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hfce
25th May 2004, 00:56
Oh that was so sad. :crygreen:

autumngold
25th May 2004, 04:51
That was beautiful!! So sad, but still beautiful!! Give Ernie a pat for me!! :biggrin: And for you :hug:!! Thanks for the poem!! :chlexsign3:

starmoon
29th April 2005, 05:12
that was perfect but so sad that it made me want to cry.

Nonhalema
27th May 2007, 13:47
Oh my...god...I am not whether I should cry because of the sadness of the poem or applaud because of the good work...

Ami Rose
16th March 2018, 10:09
Loved it